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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby alas, » Fri May 28, 2010 11:54 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Drake.163
Link to your form: Clickeh The one in purdy blue print. <3 (Not that black isn't pretty or anything. D8)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN (Tough as Nails Adoption Center)
Deadline for your form: Friday, I think. D8
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Preferably by PM, but I don't mind either way.
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby [POLAR] ;bear; » Fri May 28, 2010 1:01 pm

I would like some critique please!
Username: Aries Eggo
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&start=3830#p4638412
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: Saturday, around 4 PM Mountain Time.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, it's easier on me :)

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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Zarouhi » Sat May 29, 2010 6:16 am

I would like some critique please!
Username:cc7744_Hopeheart
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Adoption Agency you are applying for:Mini Wolves
Deadline for your form:idk, until 10 people crituque
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?here
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Desmond » Sat May 29, 2010 6:26 am

Hopeheart: Ten people? My goodness.... Most are happy with one.

No time for me to crit, I'm afraid, everyone. v.v Sorry!
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby .kestral » Sat May 29, 2010 6:27 am

I got time to do a Crit but need to be PM'ed the form as my linking isnt working.
Having serious issues viewing dark colours at the moment. May delay replys to pms. Sorry.

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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Zarouhi » Sat May 29, 2010 6:30 am

-3B- wrote:Hopeheart: The banner's not a link. :/ And ten people? My goodness.... Most are happy with one.

No time to crit, I'm afraid, everyone. :/ Sorry!

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(it was really popular back then, then i re0did it and no one came, so, ya know)
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Skylarr. » Sat May 29, 2010 11:38 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Minnie:)
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=4580680#p4580659
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Well its for a Goey
Deadline for your form: Tomorrow! @5 EST
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Ranua » Sat May 29, 2010 12:25 pm

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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Skylarr. » Sun May 30, 2010 5:16 am

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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby .kestral » Sun May 30, 2010 5:21 am

No more crits for now please!!
Having serious issues viewing dark colours at the moment. May delay replys to pms. Sorry.

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