[ shooting star -- ⋆ ] Open for comments c:

[mercury.]

Loving it, but one little suggestion: The font is so small, it makes it a bit of a task to read and less enjoyable. I'm not sure what you have on right now, but maybe add one or two. (If you have 85, maybe 87?) That way it still gives the 'small effect', without making it hard to read.

[CaptiveLegacy]

Loving it, but one little suggestion: The font is so small, it makes it a bit of a task to read and less enjoyable. I'm not sure what you have on right now, but maybe add one or two. (If you have 85, maybe 87?) That way it still gives the 'small effect', without making it hard to read.

Glad you like it, and I have bumped up the font size so that its easier to read c:
Sorry that it was so small!

[mercury.]

Great, C: Thanks. Good-luck, I'll be stalking this story ^^

[CaptiveLegacy]

~ Bump c:

[Phil.]

*BookMarks*

Wow. I don't think I've ever read such a good story ;3
The plot's really good. Can i ask where you got the idea from?

[CaptiveLegacy]

Why thank you for the compliment <3
I actually thought up this idea myself, just randomly. I wanted to make a story of someone or people being able to switch to another place, so this plot came along c:

[Phil.]

Well I have to say, it worked amazingly....Is that a word? Amazingly...
Anyway. I love it ;3

[above_all_else]

I really enjoy your writing style! The idea for the story is creative and certainly interesting- I've never imagined wishing on a star and becoming a wolf! It's a great way to bring together the wonderment of fantasy with the realism of having a hard life, what you're doing. I really enjoy it! I would suggest a few things, though. There's a couple of small errors , such as in the example below.

The whole day was mostly boring, especially history class. The first class is always boring, since everyone is tired and doesn’t want to be there. Though, there was a short lecture and assignment, which John got down and turned in.

I get what you mean by that, but I think you should check your wording. It seems a bit odd to start a sentence with 'though,' although there is probably nothing against it, I would just advise against it.
One last thing! I suggest you break it up into a few posts. The shorter the posts, the more likely people are to read. A lot of small print in a post is intimidating, and moderate sized posts are more likely to get read.

Great story, 4.5/5 in my opinion, and I'm not easily impressed. I'm a writer myself(not as good as you! XD) and it's always refreshing to find a good story on here.

[CaptiveLegacy]

ah thank you!! (I thought I replied a long time ago, sorry for the delay!) c:

so, I probably will get back into writing this again, since I like the story and its refreshing to write. So expect another chapter some time soon!

[CaptiveLegacy]

~ bump c:
i'm finally going to start continuing this again, I found my muse to continue this ~