MLP:FiM Fan Club {Version Five}

[Wulfjaw]

I just finished the Betrayal and Jubilance shortfic. MEH.

It is not as good as I thought it would have turned out.

Please give me some constructive criticism. Not words like ''UH YOU DID THAT PART WRONG LOL"

[Agent Cooper]

I just finished the Betrayal and Jubilance shortfic. MEH.

It is not as good as I thought it would have turned out.

Please give me some constructive criticism. Not words like ''UH YOU DID THAT PART WRONG LOL"

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It's really good. However, the entire idea isn't exactly shortfic material. It should be a bit longer..

[indestructible.]

I do think there should be a Luna and Celestia episode, like, maybe the Mane 6 are pulled into Canterlot for something, and Rainbow or AJ has to go in one of the Princess's rooms and find a book. Curious ponies as they are, they start to read it, it could be a diary or scrapbook from them as fillies, and she starts reading it. Twilight comes in, worried, and tells them to put it away, they say no and run/fly in the castle until they run into Celestia or Luna. Celestia or Luna smiles and notices the book, they have a small conversation with them and they will end up telling the Mane 6 about the stories in.
I feel like I'm the only one who is imagining this whole episode right now. /shot

[cedaar]

I noticed something strange about yesterday's episode...
Carrot Top was seen running with a filly outside Twilight's library. Could this be her kid??

Anyone else think so?

[Agent Cooper]

I noticed something strange about yesterday's episode...
Carrot Top was seen running with a filly outside Twilight's library. Could this be her kid??

Anyone else think so?

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Maybe. Also, the filly is a blank flank. Perhaps a new CMC?

[Tom Bombadil]

i'm doing a fanfic but it has both MLP characters and one of my OC's. Where would i post the description so someone can help me with the title?

I'd say here, unless your OC has a bigger part in it than the MLP characters.

My OC is the main character, but the Main 6 have a smaller part, as well as Princess Celestia, and Discord has a big part. But there are also wolves who have a big part (and yes, i know there probably are not wolves in Equestria!), so it is kind of a mix of MLP characters and an OC character. So should i post it on the OC forum or on here?[/quote]

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There has to be wolves in Equestria. Scootaloo was one on the Nightmare Night episode.

oh i didn't realize Equestria had wolves! Thanks! (Has not seen much MLP...)

But does anyone know where i should post the summary of the story so i can get a name for it? It kinda fits both this thread AND the OC thread!

[cedaar]

I noticed something strange about yesterday's episode...
Carrot Top was seen running with a filly outside Twilight's library. Could this be her kid??

Anyone else think so?

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Maybe. Also, the filly is a blank flank. Perhaps a new CMC?

It looks a lot like Prince Blueblood. Maybe he and Carrot Top had a kid? xD

[simbafan]

I noticed something strange about yesterday's episode...
Carrot Top was seen running with a filly outside Twilight's library. Could this be her kid??

Anyone else think so?

I don't really think so. It may just be some filly/colt who got seperated from his/her parents. Carrot Top may just be helping him/her find his/her way back, or simply protecting it.

I don't know, it doesn't really look like her. And we only know of a few adults who have children in the show. Mr. and Mrs. Cake and all of the Mane 6's parents that we've seen.

[Wulfjaw]

I just finished the Betrayal and Jubilance shortfic. MEH.

It is not as good as I thought it would have turned out.

Please give me some constructive criticism. Not words like ''UH YOU DID THAT PART WRONG LOL"

♠

It's really good. However, the entire idea isn't exactly shortfic material. It should be a bit longer..

I know.
When I started working on my signature and got the inspiration, I was like, "GASP I SHOULD WRITE A SUPER LONG BOOK ABOUT CELESTIA DEFEATING NIGHTMARE MOON AND STUFF THEN HAVE A TIME SKIP TO WHERE TWI ENDS UP COMFORTING CEL-Oh wait."

Because I don't have the time to write super long fics. Just look at my abandoned Soarin' Lilies fanfic.

@Darkstar
Along with the Scoots costume, there are timberwolves.

[indestructible.]

I noticed something strange about yesterday's episode...
Carrot Top was seen running with a filly outside Twilight's library. Could this be her kid??

Anyone else think so?

*shakes head* No, that's her little sister, Noi. They were together in the Sisterhooves Social episode, in those sister games things