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by obscure. » Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:17 am
Crue wrote:wow.
that story is amazing! everything was perfect! the grammar, spelling, plot! you are an excellent writer! i don’t think you need to change or modify anything!
sparklecaldwell wrote:The guard at my gate, one of his dogs is being forced to be put down because it has a little pit bull in it. I started crying while I wrote this.
@Crue- Thank you so much <3 I'm very glad you don't think I need to change anything!
@sparklecaldwell- I know, it's so cruel how people just dismiss pit bulls because of their reputation. That's why I wrote this story; I wanted to express that not all pit bulls are the vicious 'monsters' people make them out to be ;-;
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by leg » Sun Nov 25, 2012 9:15 am
I love this story and I agree with it as much as possible. I hate how people just assume that Pit Bulls; Doberman; and other dogs or animals that they're fierce as a volcanoD; It is not right!
And BTW, I LOVE this story also because of your grammar, which is awesome:D Although I wish it was longer:)
“can’t catch a break today.
let’s go get a milkshake.”
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