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Redline (: by The Most Sincere

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Redline (:

Postby The Most Sincere » Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:07 pm

Sorry- I didn't do so well. Never done that position o.o
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?


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Re: Redline (:

Postby SpencyB » Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:09 pm

This is really good! C:
I am remaking my account, I am now Spencicorn. I wanted to start fresh on Chickensmoothie, I am not making several accounts, I will change this password to something random and never come back. It's like it's just deleted.
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Re: Redline (:

Postby The Most Sincere » Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:11 pm

Nah, it looks really... Amateur-y? Ha ha.
Weird pose for me, weirdly. It looks so simple.
But thank you anyway! (:
Image
Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?


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