The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Wed Nov 21, 2012 11:46 am

Hi Apple, Can I be a critic? It would help me with my writing skills.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Papyrsatyr » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:59 pm

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Hi Apple, Can I be a critic? It would help me with my writing skills.


Maybe but you'll have to apply like everyone by seeing your skills in action.

Though if you want to improve your writing you're better off asking for critique rather than trying be one who gives them out.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:27 am

Good point, but I mean by my proof reading skills; this should help a ton. So, just read whoever applies and give them constructive critism?
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Papyrsatyr » Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:12 am

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Good point, but I mean by my proof reading skills; this should help a ton. So, just read whoever applies and give them constructive critism?


Yes this is exactly how it works. :3
Unfortunately we've had a bit of a lack in forms or stories needed critique but they will come eventually.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:45 am

I would like some critique on my story please!
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Link to what needs critiquing:
Tables Have Turned
What is it:
Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either way is fine with me c:
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Jericho » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:19 am

carrie911 wrote:
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
carrie911
Link to what needs critiquing:
Tables Have Turned
What is it:
Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either way is fine with me c:


I will be critiquing this one now or later.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Papyrsatyr » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:28 am

Multiple critiques can be given out so long as there are no other stories/forms that need it.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby reina. » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:37 am

I'd like to critique others :3 So, just look for people here who need criticism, and help them out?
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Papyrsatyr » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:51 am

Rainsaye wrote:I'd like to critique others :3 So, just look for people here who need criticism, and help them out?


Yep. You're also more than welcome to spread the word about this place ( in a respective manner) so more people can submit forms to be critiqued.
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