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Redline by ramattra
| Artist | ramattra [gallery] |
| Time spent | 5 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 1 |
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Redline
by ramattra » Tue Nov 20, 2012 2:33 pm
Please help me improve because I absolutely suck. Post and I'll add you. 
EDIT: I tried to draw with all your tips but I still suck. Thanks anyway.
EDIT: I tried to draw with all your tips but I still suck. Thanks anyway.
Last edited by ramattra on Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Redline
by ramattra » Tue Nov 20, 2012 2:43 pm
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emmie ! - she/her - black - ©
thee bestest mercy main
i'm getting my bfa in game design and i'm interested in concept art!
i play: overwatch 2, skyrim, dragon age, and dress to impress
fave characters: mercy, fenris, zevran, solas, anders, raiden (mgs), viktor (arcane),
wei wuxian, chu wanning, shang qinghua, + more!
check out my ota on the right!
commissions carrd: here!
art storage: here!
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Re: Redline
by The Most Sincere » Tue Nov 20, 2012 3:04 pm
You do not suck! THhs is fantastic! But, being the picky person that I am, I do see a few anatomical errors. Now, I am no where near being as good at anatomy as I should, and want to be, but I'll give it a shot. If you're making sure we know Oekaki, here are a few of my examples:
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?
7 / 02 / 13
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Re: Redline
by The Most Sincere » Wed Nov 21, 2012 8:20 am
Bump :3
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?
7 / 02 / 13
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Re: Redline
by ramattra » Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:05 pm
added for you guys to try.
emmie ! - she/her - black - ©
thee bestest mercy main
i'm getting my bfa in game design and i'm interested in concept art!
i play: overwatch 2, skyrim, dragon age, and dress to impress
fave characters: mercy, fenris, zevran, solas, anders, raiden (mgs), viktor (arcane),
wei wuxian, chu wanning, shang qinghua, + more!
check out my ota on the right!
commissions carrd: here!
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