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Who sang the best song in your opinion?

• Fireivy- Miracle by Cascada
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33%
• Secrecy- Bones Shatter by Hedley
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• Ginger- Never Underestimate a Girl by Vanessa Hudgens
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50%
• Alex- Structure by InnerPartySystem
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17%
 
Total votes : 6

Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:26 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:they're noy scary to me, they're just helpless creatures that are more scared of us then we are of them.

*ahem* Snakes?
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Flashpaw100 wrote:they're noy scary to me, they're just helpless creatures that are more scared of us then we are of them.

Cactus are not helpless creatures.

See above. xD





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:27 am

no, wasps, bees, ETC.
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:29 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:no, wasps, bees, ETC.

Oh. Right. I knew that.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:31 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:no, wasps, bees, ETC.

Oh.
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Flashpaw100 wrote:no, wasps, bees, ETC.

Oh. Right. I knew that.

xD I thought of snakes when I heard that. xD





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:32 am

Dawn Enchant wrote:
Flashpaw100 wrote:no, wasps, bees, ETC.

Oh.
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Flashpaw100 wrote:no, wasps, bees, ETC.

Oh. Right. I knew that.

xD I thought of snakes when I heard that. xD

I was a bit confuzzled. I was all like "CACTUS ARE NOT HARMLESS! THEY POKE YOU AND DRINK WAY TOO MUCH WATER!" Wait, what?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:33 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I was a bit confuzzled. I was all like "CACTUS ARE NOT HARMLESS! THEY POKE YOU AND DRINK WAY TOO MUCH WATER!" Wait, what?

LOL

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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:26 am

bump
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:48 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:bump

Cool, thanks!
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Fri Nov 23, 2012 3:38 am

Panting, Dusk dropped Elf Boy, all tied up and stuff.
Got..... Him..... At.... Last.....
YOU TRATIOR!!!!!!!!! Yep. Elf Boy was MMMMMMMAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next thing happened in seconds. AJ snapped back to reality, and jumped on Elf Boy. He shrieked, falling down. Punk was trying to get her off his master, but then Stargazer jumped on him, bowling him over. Soon, we all ended up in a fight. All but us three- Fox, Alex, and me.
Suddenly, Shadow howled, and Dusk jumped on his attacker. Elf Boy.
She held her paw near his throat. Surrender and we'll let you live.
He howled. NEVER!
I shut my eyes. I knew what would happen next. One last howl from Elf Boy surrounded us. But Dusk backed up, blinking. Alex acted like nothing had happened. Wait, what?! She was knocked out last I checked!
Suddenly, a dog jumped out. Oh my gosh! What happened?!
Amy! She turned to me and smiled, then narrowed her eyes, turning around to a sound behind us in the large pipe entrance.
SHUT UP YOU TWO! PLEASE! Two dogs jumped out, glaring at her.
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Have you two EVER stayed quiet for longer than an hour?
The first one rolled his eyes. Whatever Amy.
Shut up, Bob.
No, you.
Shut up, Fred!
It's Ron!
FRED, RON, I DON'T CARE!
I blinked. Um... Someone explain what's going on here?!
No.
Amy hit her head against the wall, then glared at the two boys. Shadow gave an exasperated sigh.
Ginger, these are my two VERY stupid brothers.
Bob blinked and Ron crossed his arms. Dusk blinked.
Hey, um.... I'm glad you're all back together, but, um... CAN WE SKIP THE REUNIONS AND GET THE CRUD OUTTA HERE?!
We blinked, then nodded.
Alright.
Shut up Fred.
Mumbling, he followed us out, back into the mall. Amy blinked. Wow.
Alex blinked, narrowing her eyes. I blinked, turning to her. What are you doing, Alex?
She narrowed her eyes even more, sighed, then turned on me. She placed a paw in my direction, as if she were walking towards me, then the next thing I know, we all (Um... the captives, Amy and her brothers, Fox, Alex, Secrecy, Fireivy, and me) were somewhere else. The wind was beating on us a little less, and Alex sighed, smiling.
She looked up at the house. There was movement around inside. Three dogs went out onto the porch. I doubt they still remember me.... She sighed, looked away, then we went somewhere else.
Um, what's going on?! Amy banged her head against a shed. Alex growled. She slashed at the air, then we left, and went to a new state. She nodded.
This is where....
Footsteps surprised me. Miss me much? The next thing I know, I was hugging Raina.
Raina!
She smiled at me, then stepped back.
Oh my gosh...
It was the whole HQ!!!





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Fri Nov 23, 2012 4:39 am

Ginger! a voice called out. I turned around.
Lucky! We (Lucky's gang and I) bounded up to her.
Dusk turned to Shadow, then he nodded.
We can't stay here, he said, glancing in my direction.
Why?
The thing is, well.... She shivered, nearly falling. Ginger, this is where you belong. The Others are there. The thing is... She shut her eyes. A small, single tear was coming out.
Our parents died in an attack a while back. The reason why we had Elf Boy and Punk tailing us was because they started that war.
Anyways, the last generation of you offered to help us. And the whole word knows if you disagree with Your Kind, you're better than dead. We said no, and then the first one was so enraged, she threatened to kill us if we didn't leave, So we did. We ran. We found an airport who let us get on the next plane for Alaska, and that's how you met us.

I blinked. But... Like you said. A different generation! We're different!
Dusk rounded on me, and everyone jumped, backing up. Raina nodded at the others, which clearly meant, Hey, you can join us if you want! GET OVER HERE NOW!
YOU DON'T GET IT, DO YOU?!?! I jumped. Nine dogs started moving forward. Wait, wait, wait wait. DID I JUST SAY NINE?!?!
The new dog nodded, smiling. Hazel!
Keep them talking! she mouthed back. We'll get her to see the truth when we're behind her!
Do wha?
Get... um... what?! Ok, Hazel? Know how you were trapped as a computer pixel a few years back? Yeah, yeah min's still rusta/endslangterm
She jumped on me.
NOW! Hazel called out. They started running. I crouched, then pushed Dusk off me. As if by a trance, I bounded up to them.
Hazel....?
Yes, Ginger? Her smile taunted me. Oh dang.
How did you-
Get free? She shrugged. Well, You see, Katniss, Sam, Sunset, River, and I were running from the fire, and well.... The fire got to us. We managed to run to a river, and the second Katniss tapped her paw on the river, the changed back to her old self. We all did it. Soon, we were our normal selves. She smiled.
Hi Ginger
Hi, Forest! I looked at the other Ten. I smiled, feeling a sensation of safeness and happiness.
Ginger, a voice growled. I turned around, growling. Forest was the one.
What?! I turned to Forest, who was looking scared.
No. She blinked, standing up straight. That was my mother. I looked just like her. Just. She lowered herself, and growled. LEAVE! The ground shuttered. She grabbed her staff. Yet you still are an enemy to my friends. She glanced at us. Moonlight and Moonlit Star notched their bows-n-arrows. Forest's staff lit aflame. April and Wings had light glowing in their paws. Myth had the light of the galaxy in her paws, and it was surrounded by words- myths, I guessed. Wind had an arrow in her hand. That just left Windsong, Hazel, and me.
What are you gonna do, huh? she snarled.
Dusk, Shadow growled. Suddenly, a gust of wind came. Shadow's cloak came off him.
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Suddenly, he smiled. Let me help, he growled. She nodded, and shut her eyes. Oh no. She was summoning more back-up.
Forest leaned her staff at Dusk. Hazel held her paw, then nodded, dropping it. Everyone (Windsong and Hazel found their powers and had them in paw) hurled their weapon at the two, but they just drifted away. I blinked, then tapped the floor. A stone staff appeared in my hand.
Cool, I murmured. I held it up, then glanced at Forest, who nodded, smiling.
When I say now, shout 'fire' alright? she muttered in my ear. I nodded. NOW! Water and fire sent off at the energy bubble around Dusk. It faded away. She stood up, angrily.
THIS ISN'T THE END! she shrieked. A dog appeared next to her. Oh heck.
NOW! Hazel shrieked, and Forest and I did the same- Elements. But this time I did Air and Forest did, well.... Duh. Earth.
That dog blocked them. You can run but you can't hide, little mutts.
What the HECK?!
Ginger, what IS this?!
Hey, you two, Raina growled. She didn't want this. This was by force. Soon, nine other dogs appeared. They looked EXACTLY like the other Ten, just without the chain.
Um.... Windsong began. Guys? The Evil Us growled.
A flash of light blinded us. Evil Us growled, and Shadow and Dusk backed up.
THIS ISN'T THE END! Evil Me shouted.
WE'LL BE BACK!
They vanished, then the light disappeared.
No. Way.
Will someone explain what just happened?!
The first of the Ten and of the Dyjands.
Huh?
Hazel sighed. She showed me two thing made from stone- our mirror and chain, and something else. A dreidle necklace. The Ten, she said, putting down the stone chain and mirror. The Dyjands, she put down the dreidle necklace.
The war, Windsong mumbled. Has begun.



And, that is the end of TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison! I know it was short, but.... I DID have some pretty long entries in here! I WILL start the next book, like, after my shower and breakfast, IF I have the time. xD
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