TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

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Who sang the best song in your opinion?

• Fireivy- Miracle by Cascada
2
33%
• Secrecy- Bones Shatter by Hedley
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• Ginger- Never Underestimate a Girl by Vanessa Hudgens
3
50%
• Alex- Structure by InnerPartySystem
1
17%
 
Total votes : 6

Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:43 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:you haz no energy,
as for me.......


I LOVE THIS BOOK AND TJOC AND TIAJNAD AND CANDYLAND MONKEYS BUT I'M SCARED OF MONKEYS BUT MONKEYS ARE COOL LALALALALALALALA CANDYLANDDDDD!!!!
....
face the Flower.

O.M.S. I am scared for life. NOT

Well, JF? Have you noticed that Alex and Suzi have something in common?





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:25 am

I woke up, hearing the sound of paws on snow. Alex was jumping in the snow, getting snow on Fireivy, who glared at her. Fox was laughing, and she swiped snow at him. He suddenly stopped laughing and glared at her. She stuck her tongue out, and continued to prance in the snow until she bumped into someone.
Watch it, kid! I turned to look at the dog.
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Well, you're not much of a kid yourself! It looked at me.
Silence, unless you want to die.
I stayed quiet. I knew for some reason, this dog could do me harm.
Follow. My friends will want to see you.
Startled a little, we followed. TJOG, I've made stupid ideas and done them, but this was too far-fetched. And I never knew that there would be a few prisoners.

........

In here. Elf Boy shoved us into a large room. He then lead us up to the top. Up above was tons of space- a mall.
Wow, I said, impressed. Alex and Fox were in the back, talking.
I don't trust him.
Neither do I.
But we'll be ok, I promise.
I thought I was the one who said everything'll be ok!
The both shared a small smile. Elf Boy passed openings for stores, and this is what I found interesting.
Image and Image were handing out toys to some of the younger kids, Image, Image, and Image.
Elf Boy nodded to the five. They do that each and every year, the week before Thanksgiving, and until three days after the twenty-fifth.
What are their names?
The first one's Rain of the Feathered Bird or Rain, and the second one's Jamie.
Oookkkaaayyyy.....
Where are you taking us? Secrecy glared at Elf Boy and crossed her arms.
Elf Boy smiled, which was NOT an answer at ALL.
I'm taking you to meet some..... friends, he said softly, sneering.
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:30 am

cooool.
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:10 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:cooool.

Thanks! Oh, and allow me to tell you this?
We were at Aldis, and my brother, grandfather, and I were in the car, waiting on my mom and grandmother. So, my door was open. A bee was there, and I started saying "ohmigosh" quickly. I. AM. DEAD. SCARED. OF. BEES.
When he left I quickly shut the door. And THAT was on Sunday



Ok, it's official, I HATE Elf Boy. Why? HE DOG-NAPPED RUSTY, SHIVER, FEATHER, STARGAZER, KIRIA, MOONROSE, AND AJ!! Wait, AJ?!?!
AJ!
Ginger? she breathed, then was whacked. WHOEVER'S WHACKING ME, STOP!
Sorr-ie She didn't sound apologetic.
ELF BOY!!
Oh ninjas.
Call me that one more time, you'll never see daylight AGAIN! Secrecy did the smart thing- she shut up.
Now, I have to go talk to three friends of mine, then maybe make them come down here so you can meet them. Good luck in the mean time.
I glanced at my friends (who're trapped). They didn't seem worried.
Feather tried to say something, but was interrupted.
They aren't scary, except for the gray one. His name's Punk, we had to talk to them. Rose rolled her eyes. He's a jerk.
Three dogs walked in with Elf Boy- Image, Image, and Image.
Shadow, Dusk, and Punk, meet our new prisoners.
Dusk offered up a small smile, s if she were sorry for us. Well, dos THAT get US out of a situation like THIS?! *ahem*
NNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUU IT DOESN'T!!!!
My head now hurts. DX
Hello, little critters.
We aren't critters! YOU are!
Alex stared at him like he was crazy, or that he had grown an extra something, not the way if you won 5,000,000,000 moola. (Moo-la, money).
Fox.... Do you not know what you just did? I know these guys. Trust me, you don't want to get on their bad side! she whispered to him.
Elf Boy laughed. That's right, listen to your girlfriend!
Alex's expression clearly read: Oh no you didn't. Fox growled, but Alex did something stupid. She jumped at him, and Elf Boy simply held up his paw, making her fall, and rocks fell down on her.
Those who were here before us moved forwards, but they too collapsed under a pile of debris. Fireivy glanced at Secrecy, and she nodded. Fireivy started limping as if something had happened to her, while Secrecy had her eyes shut, thinking. Her eyes flew open.
I know you secrets, she said, glaring at him. Don't believe me, well, you should, Nichole!
Elf Boy stared at her, and the rocks suddenly disappeared, my friends moaning, and coming back.
How.... How did you..... Secrecy smirked, smiling idiotically.
That bought Dusk time to pin Elf Boy down. She flicked her tail.
Leave, she mouthed. We'll catch up!
So we did. Fox grabbed Alex's scruff (she still wasn't fully conscious), I grabbed AJ's, and we ran, Shadow leading us.





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby WhiteKitsune » Tue Nov 13, 2012 9:17 pm

A but delayed but: yyyaaaayy XD new book :3

Dawn, you should try get these published :3
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Wed Nov 14, 2012 1:07 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:A but delayed but: yyyaaaayy XD new book :3

Dawn, you should try get these published :3

Lol white.

Seriously?! I feel special. XD





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Nov 14, 2012 6:00 am

OMW YOU'RE AFRAID OF BEES TOO?! I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE!! **does happy dance** Sorry, it's just that I'm TERRIFIED of bees/wasps, and I don't know why. I've never been stung by one, and I'm not allergic to them. I'M JUST SO DANG SCARED OF THEM! It might be because where I come from, they're pretty big. And for some reason, they always fly toward me and ignore my siblings. -.- And I'm also scared of cactus, and of course my parents love them so they put them all outside our house. I haven't been stabbed by one.... YET, but if it happens I'm tearing those suckers out. Plus, once this dog was hiding in the cactus while I was outside ((spraying around the house with bug killer so that bugs couldn't get in the house)) and it suddenly ran out and scared the stuffing out of me. I pointed my bug killer weapon at him and he sorta growled. He was just a little white poofy dog, but man, he was S.C.A.R.Y. I tell you! I ended up running into the house, looking back every second to see if he was following me until I finally entered the house ((with the bug killer still in my hands)). So I ended up spraying bug killer another day.
On another note ((sorry, I sorta got sidetracked with wasps and cactus and dogs)), YES! NEW ENTRY!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:04 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:OMW YOU'RE AFRAID OF BEES TOO?! I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE!! **does happy dance** Sorry, it's just that I'm TERRIFIED of bees/wasps, and I don't know why. I've never been stung by one, and I'm not allergic to them. I'M JUST SO DANG SCARED OF THEM! It might be because where I come from, they're pretty big. And for some reason, they always fly toward me and ignore my siblings. -.- And I'm also scared of cactus, and of course my parents love them so they put them all outside our house. I haven't been stabbed by one.... YET, but if it happens I'm tearing those suckers out. Plus, once this dog was hiding in the cactus while I was outside ((spraying around the house with bug killer so that bugs couldn't get in the house)) and it suddenly ran out and scared the stuffing out of me. I pointed my bug killer weapon at him and he sorta growled. He was just a little white poofy dog, but man, he was S.C.A.R.Y. I tell you! I ended up running into the house, looking back every second to see if he was following me until I finally entered the house ((with the bug killer still in my hands)). So I ended up spraying bug killer another day.
On another note ((sorry, I sorta got sidetracked with wasps and cactus and dogs)), YES! NEW ENTRY!!

L.O.L. JF!!! Yeah, they are pretty dang scary.....





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:20 am

they're noy scary to me, they're just helpless creatures that are more scared of us then we are of them.
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:22 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:they're noy scary to me, they're just helpless creatures that are more scared of us then we are of them.

Cactus are not helpless creatures.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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