Rebel Faery wrote:A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I hope I win the advanced reader!
Flashpaw100 wrote:wow, that's amazing!!!
rhinorhi221 wrote:Wow just absuloutly amazing
Thanks you guys! I've spent a lot of time working on it.

Now I just need to go in and edit it, and then I should be ready to do the drawing for the Advanced Reader.
WhiteKitsune wrote:Wow these bookes are really good, I just went and read all of them!

Thank you so much!! And you did? Awesome!
My bro is reading over my entire book series ((I'm letting him borrow my copy of the book)) again because he totally forgot what happened. He hasn't read any of the Backstories or the 2nd series yet, but he's about halfway through book 8 at the moment, so he's getting close to the end of the first series.
Anyway, you guys have waiting long enough, I think it's time I give you a.... NEW ENTRY!!
I looked below deck for the others. I couldn't find them anywhere, though! I rounded a corner and ran smack dab into someone, making us both crash to the ground.
OWOWOWOWOWOWWWWW!!!Amy?I opened my eyes. It was Gish, who was just standing there unharmed.
Hey, why aren't you hurt?Because you tripped over me, just making you fall.Oh. Right. 'Cause Gish was so small and stuff.
Oh. Right. What are you doing here?Um.... I was brought here with you. So were the others. Well, except Jenette and Agent Cornelia.Oh.I was hoping that Jenette and Agent Cornelia would be here, since they were both supposed to "look after me".
So.... um... where are the others?Suzi and Ginger are down the hall, and it looks like all of our rooms are right next to each other.Oh joy! This meant that whoever was an early bird would wake me up. I did not like being woken up.
..... cool?Come on, we've got to figure out where we are and where Jenette is.Right.I nodded my head real fast and turned around- face to face with someone with dark red eyes.
Hi Amy.AGAGHAOGHAGOHEAO;GHEIAO;GHEIOA;GHIAO;GHEIO;AGHEO;A!! NGOEIANOGHEI;A! AAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!SHE KNEW MY NAME! SHE KNEW MY NAME!
Amy? You okay?NARGH!I started to run around with my paws in the air.
Amy, it's just Suzi.IT'S SUZI OMW SHE'S GONNA- wait, Suzi?I looked over at Gish, then at Suzi, who had a bored expression on her face.
Then do tell us why you were screaming and running?Because.... I..... uh....I hated it when Suzi got all smarty.
I was....... I was being dramatic! Ya know, practicing my acting...They stared at me disbelievingly.
If that's true, which it isn't, you'll never make it to Broadway.HEY!The boat suddenly shook and there was a strange scrapy noise. I looked over at the others. Ginger had now joined us.
What was that?Maybe people have complained about Amy's screaming and they've decided to wreck the ship.I glared at Suzi, but she just smiled victoriously. Meh.
Why don't we split up and look around? Suzi, you look at the upper deck. Ginger, you look below Suzi, and I'll stay here and look around, and Amy can look at the very bottom of the ship.The bottom?! The bottom always meant that there was bad stuff there!!
Alright, let's go!Everybody scurried off to look around. Well, everybody but me. I just sorta walked slow.
Amy? I'd hurry.I looked over at Gish.
Fine.I started running down the stairs on the ship, getting lower and lower. I stepped into a small pool of water, soaking the bottom of my feet.
That's weird. I wonder why there's water down here...I looked around. I heard banging on doors and I walked over to them. I tried twisting the doorknobs, but they were locked. I leaned in close to the door to speak.
You okay in there?All I could here was screams and some "help me"'s. The water suddenly started raising. It was up to my thighs. I started to back away and up the stairs. The water kept on rising. It was like it was following me! I ran up the stairs and up a hallway. There was a sudden low moan from the ship and I felt it slightly tipping. I looked over and my mouth dropped open. A big flood of water was rushing down the halls- and coming straight toward me. I shut my mouth and started running down the hall, the water racing after me. I reached stairs and quickly climbed up them. I kept on climbing stairs, even though I didn't realize that the water had stopped chasing me five rows of stairs down. I reached the deck of the ship, huffing and puffing. I looked around. There were a bunch of dogs all over the deck of the ship. The worst part, though, was that there were life boats- and dogs were boarding them.
OH NUTS! OH NUTS OH NUTS OH NUTS!!I ran back down the stairs to tell the others that this ship wasn't safe. I suddenly stopped in my tracks.
Wait a minute. A bunch of water, tilting ship, the scraping noise- OMW IT'S THE TITANIC!I stood there for a moment, not sure what to do.
I loved learning about the Titanic in school! It had a swimming pool at the very bottom of it. Wait.... it wasn't a swimming pool. There was a bunch of holes in the ship. And it sank. OH NUTS!I quickly started running up and down the stairs, not sure what to do. I suddenly ran straight into Ginger.
Amy! Why are you up here?!TITANIC! SINK! WATER! AGH!I pushed her aside and ran down the stairs- and straight into Gish.
Amy! Why aren't you down below?TWO WORDS! TI-TANIC!I screamed at Gish one more time, then ran back up the stairs- and straight into Ginger again.
Amy! Did you say this was the Titanic?YESYEYSYESYYESY! AGHAHGAHGAHGAHGHA!I pushed Ginger aside again and ran back onto the deck- and straight into Suzi.
SHEESH QUIT POOFING UP EVERYWHERE!Amy, calm down! Right now we've got to get off this ship! It's sinking!YEAH BECAUSE IT'S THE TITANIC! I'M GONNA DIIIIIE!AMY! GET INTO THE STINKIN' LIFE BOAT!BUT WHAT ABOUT JENETTE?!?!?!Don't worry about her!!I suddenly felt a tap on my shoulder and I turned around- and screamed.
Hi, Amy.THE DEMON QUEEN!
AMY! LOOK OUT!I turned. Suzi was yelling at me. Something suddenly grabbed my foot and pulled me off the deck, down the stairs ((past Ginger, who just stared at me)), past Gish ((who tried to hop after me but couldn't)), and down more stairs until we stopped in a hallway that was just starting to fill with water. I looked around and saw the Demon Queen's hand just leaving my foot. She had pulled me down here!
Sorry, Amy. But you're not getting off that easy.The Demon Queen took out a knife and held me down. I struggled and tried to break free, but couldn't. She raised the knife above me and my eyes grew large. There was suddenly a whizzing noise and then the Demon was some how thrown off me. Her knife clattered to the ground. I got to my feet and looked around. The Demon Queen was stuck against the wall, a knife through her throat. I looked over at-
Why do I keep on saving you?JENETTE!I ran and embraced her in a hug.
I missed you too, Amy. But right now you have to get off this ship.I nodded and she helped me up the stairs and onto the deck. Suzi, Ginger, and Gish had just climbed into a life boat and had been lowered into the sea by the time Jenette and I got there.
Come on, Amy. You've got to get into a life boat before the ship sinks.We were just about to get into a lifeboat when the boat suddenly lurched backward, making me and Jenette fall back. Jenette quickly jumped up and grabbed my paw, helping me up to my feet.
Amy, come on! Get in a lifeboat!!She dashed over to a life boat, dragging me with her.
You have to get out of here before-The lights suddenly went out on the ship. I heard a strange cracking noise and looked back. Part of the back of the ship was beginning to tear off!
We're too late! Follow me! There's still a chance that you can live!Jenette dragged me to the top of the ship and made me hold onto a bar. The part of the ship that we were on suddenly went straight up into the sky. Most people fell down into the water, but me and Jenette were holding onto the bar and didn't fall. The lights on the ship flickered out, making nearly everything dark.
Hold on, Amy. Don't you dare let go.Trust me, I won't.The part of the ship that we were on stood completely upright. I suddenly felt myself losing my grip. My hands started to slide off the bar.
Jenette? SAVE ME!But I was too late. Jenette reached out her paw to grab me, but I was falling. Jenette started to grow smaller and smaller as I fell down, down.
AAAAMMMYYYYY!!!AGHAGHAGHAHGAHGHAGHAHGAHGAHGAHGHAGA!!!!!I hit the water with a large pang, and the coldness of it covered my body, making me shake immediately. I tried paddling over to a lifeboat, but none of them stopped for me.
H-H-H-H-H-Help!I tried to get it out through shivering. One boat suddenly stopped, and I quickly swam toward it. They helped me into their lifeboat and placed a blanket around me (I have no idea where they got it). I looked back over at the Titanic as the upright part suddenly sank deep into the water.
JENETTE!!But she wasn't there. She wasn't flying in the air. She wasn't in the sea, swimming toward me. She wasn't already in a life boat. She had disappeared.