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~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Tue Nov 06, 2012 11:57 am

I am not doing this story any more. Please delete your posts, so I can delete the thread. Thank you.
Or I'll wait until this gets sio old someone will have to remove it. Or if a mod/adim sees this for some reason just go ahead and delete it.
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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Currently Starting.

Postby Silence of Birds » Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:28 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

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{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:44 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

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{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby ~Creativity~ » Thu Nov 08, 2012 11:02 am

This is really good! To be able to write something amazing like this is real talent :D cant wait to read more!
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I've loved the stars too fondly
to be fearful of the night.

I'll taste the sky
and feel alive again.
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Thu Nov 08, 2012 11:21 am

Thanks soul-of-a-wolf! I've been meaning to check out another one of your stoires....
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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

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{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Fri Nov 09, 2012 11:52 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

Signature Shop

{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Sat Dec 08, 2012 12:09 pm

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

Signature Shop

{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Wed Dec 19, 2012 9:14 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

Signature Shop

{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:18 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

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{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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Re: ~Many Coffins Before a Crown~Looking for Feedback!

Postby Silence of Birds » Tue Jan 01, 2013 9:54 am

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→Wind howled through the night carrying a scent that would change the world.-Eragon

Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back. Only they didn't. Because they were holding onto something.-Lord if the Rings.

A little, silent lurker, hiding in the shadows.

Signature Shop

{ Account becomes silent in summer. Sorry! This just means I don't contact anyone and only do a few events. Account "returns" in the winter usually.(this also means that if you order something from me, nothing happens.)
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