Border Lines - Not Accepting

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(Fixed it )

[ForeverLingering]

Cody looked at her, " Long story short, another pack was been invading the territory and we attacked a couple of them." He said, not looking at her.

[leirah.]

Baulder's limo body lied a look of hatred flared in his lifeless eyes.

Kia bristled. " I'll take out this female." she told Dusk.

The female chuckled. "Please I'd like to see you try."

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Hailstorm shivered. It wasn't that cold. At least it hadn't been before the fight. A raw feeling was annoying him from his right side and he looked back to find one of his ribs showing amid a mess of fur and blood. Hail coughed and stumbled, black and red specks filling his vision. He collapsed in the leaves, eyes only half closed and his breathing uneven.

[ForeverLingering]

Cody ran over to his leader. " Its ok, Storm!" He whispered.

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Storm vaguely heard a voice, but he couldn't remember who it was. He closed his eyes, trying to think, and then everything went black.

[ForeverLingering]

Cody ran and tried to remember what his mother told him about wounds. He dragged Storm to a small river, then washed the wound with the cool water. After that Cody took some leaves and soaked up to the blood.

[lumi]

Mekah gasped and was at his side in seconds, "Er, tell me what to do?"

[growl]

{ Like the new pictures? Added more to the pros and cons sections of Vesper and Sauver's forms. I also changed 'Other' to 'Appearance' and added Fuir, the male loner who may or may not join the pack.


e v e n i n g

Name: "My name is Vesper." [pronunciation: vess-pur]
Nickname: "No one's given me a nickname yet. Apparently my name is pretty enough without one."
Gender: "Oh, I'm so sorry, I didn't realize you were blind! I'm pleased to tell you I am female."
Age: "Nearing four years... Maybe 3 years and 8 months?"

Pack: "I am part of the White Moonlight Pack."
Rank: "I am the Delta."
Cons: "I'm sorry to say I am a bit of a perfectionist. I always want things done my way, and I don't stand around and chat like most idiots. If you get on my bad side, you'll start finding life more difficult. I have quite a temper but will forgive you if you give me a heartfelt apology. However due to the obtuse stubbornness that everyone around here seems to possess that usually doesn't happen. I guess I'm neutral physically. I don't consider myself that good at hunting but I'm not that bad either. Same goes for a lot of things."
Pros: "I'm a very trustworthy person because I don't break my word. Although it doesn't seem quite like it when you first meet me I also have a nice sense of humor and if you get me relaxed then you'll usually find me pleasant to be around. Therefore I can be both a pain in the tail and the fae who makes your day. You choose. I'm stronger than your average she-wolf. Strong enough to overpower many brutes actually. Really I'm not that agile or anything but if there's one thing I have it's instinct. My sense of eminent danger and survival in general is very strong so it's likely I'll have my teeth at your throat before you can say 'surprise!'"

Appearance: Vesper's fur is actually light brown, but in the sunlight red patches reveal themselves and then she appears to be a soft red fae. Her fiery orange eyes show her emotions as clearly as if she speaks them aloud. She has long, wooly fur and large ears. Her muzzle is capped with a sizable dark brown nose.

s a v e m e

Name: "I'm Sauver." [pronunciation: sAH-verr]
Nickname: "Call me anything you want."
Gender: "I'm a brute. Hopefully you recognized that."
Age: "I'm quite young, only 3 years or so."

Pack: "I am part of the White Moonlight Pack."
Rank: "I'm a hunter."
Cons: "I'm particularly stingy and easily offended, however mellow I might seem. If you want to keep your ears, you'd best not upset me. I'm also not that responsible and am a little forgetful. If you want to get to know me it will usually be you who has to approach me. I usually scare away the prey for miles so hunting isn't really my thing..."
Pros: "I'm a laid-back, calm wolf. I almost never get nervous anyway, and it seems wolves like to talk to me. I am also very mature for my age, since I'm living with a pack of older wolves. Talent-wise I am a pretty good fighter. At least I have won the majority of my fights since I'm quick on my feet and know when it's appropriate to back down."

Appearance: Sauver is a silvery gray brute with a short, thick pelt. He has very few hints of brown woven throughout but they are still there. The underside of his shortish muzzle is a patch of crisp white and his eyes burn yellow-amber when he is angry. His black nose and long tail prove noticeable features.

Name: "...Fuir..." [pronunciation: foo-wh-ere]
Nickname: "I'm just Fuir."
Gender: "Brute."
Age: "Getting on 4 years."

Pack: "I haven't been in a pack since I was little."
Rank: "I told you, I'm alone!"
Cons: "I've always been shy but after seeing my parents f-- nevermind. Let's just say I've become even more secluded. I know that large packs attract more hunters so I've tried to avoid company at all costs. It's come to the point where I don't reply unless necessary. Sometimes I have breakdowns/get angry for no reason. I am very emotionally unstable."
Pros: "I am, or used to be, really nice. I love pups and I wouldn't turn away other wolves. You'll have to talk to me later to find out anything else. Bye."

Appearance: Fuir is a stocky wolf with fur the color of coal dust. He was once quite handsome but now his smoldering grey eyes are void and his face is pulled in shadow. It seems once you look at this wolf's face then everything around him seems too colorful and bright. He has long legs and large paws.

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((Great! Your third one is also accepted, but remember to delete the "pack" section from them all. Thanks!))