After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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Who's your favorite EVIL character (thank you katnisshungergames10 for the idea of this poll)?

The Demon Queen
9
26%
Andrea
1
3%
Alexa
1
3%
Aurauria
1
3%
Rhubarb
15
44%
Fuego
1
3%
Leonardo
0
No votes
Anger
3
9%
Tallon
0
No votes
Santa
3
9%
 
Total votes : 34

Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:54 am

New entry!!

















Oh nuts. Oh nuts oh nuts OH NUTS! I was a demon?! OMWOMW!!!
WHAAAAAAAAAT?!
Yes, and now I get to decide what to do with you.
Oh nuts.
Let's see...... guards?
She whistled and weird dogs came in.
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Yeah, they all looked like that. 100% CREEPY!
Take her to the fire pit.
Fire pit? That didn't sound good. Amy? Where are you?! i jumped at the sudden voice in my head. What the heck? Where did that come from? Amy, it's me, Jenette. Where are you? I can't find you... Uh.... I'm in this strange room thingy and the Demon Queen knows who I am and she turned me into this scaly demon thingymajig. What?! Don't worry, we're on our way. Just stay put. The guards grabbed me and started marching me out of the room. Uh.... Jenette? There's something else. They're taking me to some sort of fire pit. Fire pit? No! Amy, you have to get out of there... NOW! What? Why? Suzi told me that the fire pit is where demons go to get exterminated. EXTERMINATED?! Yes! Now get. Out. Of. There. NOW! But there are creepy guard thingies everywhere! I don't care what's there, Amy! If you don't get out you're dead.... LITERALLY! Man, you're shouty today, aren't you? My apologies for that, I just don't want my sister to die! And that sentence, man, that put me into action. I bit my lip and shoved the guards away. I started running once they had let go of me. I didn't know where I was going, of course, but I ran.... straight into a dog.
AGH! SORRY!
I started running away.
Wait! Amy?
I stopped dead in my tracks and turned around. I had run into Jenette!
JENETTE!
I ran to her and toppled her over with a hug.
Amy, get off! Demons! Remember?
OH! RIGHT!
Can you stop yelling?
SURE! I mean sure.
Good, now let's get going! The others are waiting by the entrance.
We started running toward the entrance... and stopped dead in our tracks. The Demon Queen was there, along with five guards. One guard grabbed me, another Jenette, and Gish, Suzi, and Ginger already had guards that had grabbed them.
Hello, hello. Thought you could escape, huh? Well nobody escapes THE DEMON QUEEN!
We all stared and said nothing, wondering what would happen next.
But guess what? I'm not going to kill you. I'm going to do something far more worse.
She spread open her arms and suddenly three more arms popped out. She aimed one at all of us.
WOAH! MAN, YOU'RE CREEPY!
Quiet! I think you all need to take a vacation.
Black smoke stuff shot out of each of her hands and surrounded all of us. I felt like everything was spinning.
Good luck... escaping time!!
And with those last words, everything went black.

My eyes slowly opened.
Amy? You okay?
Think so. You okay?
I didn't even know where I was. We were laying in dirt. All five of us; Jenette, Suzi, Gish, Ginger, and me.
Yeah. Everybody else is, too.
I sat up and looked around. Sand was everywhere. The wind was blowing a lot. I looked down at my paws and breathed a sigh of relief. I was back to normal me. I was no longer a demon.
Hey Jenette? Where exactly are we?
Everybody looked at Jenette (since she knew practically everything what with being an angel and all).
The Demon Queen sent us here.
Where would "here" be?
She..... she sent us back in time.















And that is the end of book one! Hope you guys enjoyed it! I will try and start the second book soon. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby are you kitten me » Mon Nov 05, 2012 7:15 am

AMW!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
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Postby daz » Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:12 am

COOL!!! tee hee!
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Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:45 am

Oooh, suspense. O.O
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

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Postby xxazul63xx » Mon Nov 05, 2012 11:10 am

*drops dead*
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Postby VesVes » Mon Nov 05, 2012 2:51 pm

Suspense! Can't wait for Book 2! Maybe they'll meet dinosaurs, since they went back in time!
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:21 pm

rhinorhi221 wrote:AMG!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

lol
Flashpaw100 wrote:COOL!!! tee hee!

Thank you.
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Oooh, suspense. O.O

:lol:
xxazul63xx wrote:*drops dead*

XD
Nyota Hyena wrote:Suspense! Can't wait for Book 2! Maybe they'll meet dinosaurs, since they went back in time!

Oooohhhh, that's good idea! Might just use that (if I do I shall credit you).

Escape From Time - The Second Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!
((yeah, I already started writing it. I couldn't wait!!))

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Mar 29, 2013 3:27 am

O.O I've finally started to read the new series. Wow... :) Loved it...
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 29, 2013 9:24 am

Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
O.O I've finally started to read the new series. Wow... :) Loved it...

Thanks, Shadow! Glad you like it! :thumbup:

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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