Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

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Username: Wolfdoglover12
What You'd Like Help With: Using the Mobile Site [Apple Products]
Maintaining a Role Play
Animal Roleplaying
Developing Your own Form
One on One role play Tutoring
Developing Detailed Physical Descriptions
Preferred Instructor: I would like, Eighteen for my Mobile teacher and the rest are just opereated by one person…I think.
Activity or Time Zone:I am on every day for at least an hour. I am currently in Mountain Time.
Sample of Writing: Mandy glanced up her bright blue eyes surveyed the grassland. As she stared a flash of brown caught her eye. Something was coming towards her. Mandy’s muscles twitched with the urgency to run but she held them still with her mind. As her heart pounded faster her ears flicked. The noise was like a thrashing of brittle grass. Mandy was greatly confused by this, nothing had ever sounded like this.

Suddenly a strange creature slammed into her side. Mandy withered under the creature’s great mass. Her long lean legs thrashed around as she broke into a cold sweat. Her mind was whirling wildly as she struggled to dislodge this strange thing on her. When she finally succeeded she stared at this enemy. It look like a large cheetah but with thicker spots. Mandy only had an instant to stare before she tore off across the grassland. Her only motive was to get away.

[Chase the Wind]

Username: Chase the Wind
What You'd Like Help With: I would like to move up to the semi-literate or higher. I'm planning on coming back to role playing after being off for about 3 months or so, and would like to come back semi-literate. I'm also always up for boosting my character development, as I love to develop deep characters.
Preferred Instructor: Aw gosh, I don't know...I looked at all of them and they're all just so great!
Activity or Time Zone: I try to get on as often as I can. I'm on about 3 or 4 hours a day, but that's in bursts, not all at once. My timezone is Eastern Standard Time (GMT-5)
Sample of Writing: Here's a bit with one of my more developed characters. This is rather long for me:
Link padded through the forest, sighing. His tabby tail scraped the leaves that carpeted the floor. "How do I tell her?" he sighed, speaking aloud. "She's going to find out soon. I can't hide what I see in her for long." He looked up at the stars, and let out a wail. "Violet! Why did you have to die and leave me here all alone? Why couldn't I have done something?" But the stars glittered coldly back at him. With another yowl, he turned and continued through the dark wood.

[Ico]

Username: I'm Ico, and I'm normally called that. I try to be as nice as I can be; although that's a little hard for me. I have anger issues, and I try to handle them. Sorry, I feel like I'm writing a biography about me. x3
What You'd Like Help With: I wish to be helped with grammar and work on BB coding; I'm alright at my BB coding, but I just want to be better at it.
Preferred Instructor: It would be nice to have Smamm or an asian to the knee as my instructor, but any of them are fine. c:
Activity or Time Zone: My time zone is Mountain Standard time, and in my time zone I'm normally on, during weekdays, 6:30-7:15 in the morning and 5:30-9:30 at night. Some times 'til ten at night, but I normally get bored then. x3 And on weekends, random times. It's hard to say because I never know when I'll be able to come on.
Sample of Writing:

₪ Flamepaw ♂

[size=95]Flamepaw hastened out of the apprentice den with crust still stuck in the corner of his eyes from his nap. There's something I gotta have to do! he thought to himself. Then he spotted Spottedpaw and her kit at the entrance. He casually walked over to the young queen. "Any need of assistance?" he asked in the most dorkiest voice. He sat down and licked his paw while he waited for a reply.

₪ Pantherstalk ♀

Pantherstalk lifted her head when the sound of her name reached her ears. She stared at the own who leads her clan and nodded. Her body lifted from the ground and took a stretch before she padded over to Breezepaw. Kindly and respectfully, she approached the young apprentice and said, "Where do you wish to hunt?"

That is actually not that recent, but if you want something more recent please tell me because I will find something. c:[/size]

Who were you talking to Karma?

[city;]

Whoops! I was talking to free. and limitless.

[Ico]

Oh okay, thank you. c:

[Vespur]

Username: Bati
What You'd Like Help With:
-Developing Forms
-Illiterate to Literate
-Animal Roleplaying
-Making Characters
Preferred Instructor:-anyone is fine really-
Activity or Time Zone: Eastern Time USA
Sample of Writing:
Leo's eyes glittered when he noticed her face brighten on his pupils. She was a kind of cute when she blushed, he had to admit that, I mean it would have made any girl who knew him to must have done the same if Leo did so. Though strangely that was not true at all, not even close. Somehow, if this girl was anyone else he might have just ripped out her neck when he had the chance of a human meal, but sence this was Cassie it seemed like both his mind and body knew it was wrong. It was both odd yet scary at the same time. He himself would have to ask his pack about the reason she got him to stop, and if it would affect him in any way to the point of total submission. Blinking his eyes fastly, he threw away that thought with a shake of his head, and turned it quickly to notice the sun's thin line of color just over the horizon now. Darkness was coming and with it predator's of the night as well. He had to hurry for both of their sakes.
Once he was sure Cassie was ready he took off into the disappearing sunset that had already turned the sky a golden hue of color. His feet fastly tapped against the ground as his body rolled across the earth with somewhat a normal pace, even if Cassie did slow him down a bit more than normally. The cabin he knew was a good ten minutes away, and with his speed in not a bolt it was maybe twenty or so. He had to be quick, because not to make himself feel pressured but the sudden smell of wild wolves rested around this edge of the pack grounds, and for once he hated his Dad for picking the location of the cabin a bit off the middle ground for the pack.

[Noel]

Bati, as far as I can tell, you've stop replying to two instructors(myself and another who I'm forgetting, who posted saying you abandoned their class when I started helping you). Please keep up with the instructors who accept you and don't drop them and try to get another without warning.

[abandoned.]

Username: Bati
What You'd Like Help With:
-Developing Forms
-Illiterate to Literate
-Animal Roleplaying
-Making Characters
Preferred Instructor:-anyone is fine really-
Activity or Time Zone: Eastern Time USA
Sample of Writing:
Leo's eyes glittered when he noticed her face brighten on his pupils. She was a kind of cute when she blushed, he had to admit that, I mean it would have made any girl who knew him to must have done the same if Leo did so. Though strangely that was not true at all, not even close. Somehow, if this girl was anyone else he might have just ripped out her neck when he had the chance of a human meal, but sence this was Cassie it seemed like both his mind and body knew it was wrong. It was both odd yet scary at the same time. He himself would have to ask his pack about the reason she got him to stop, and if it would affect him in any way to the point of total submission. Blinking his eyes fastly, he threw away that thought with a shake of his head, and turned it quickly to notice the sun's thin line of color just over the horizon now. Darkness was coming and with it predator's of the night as well. He had to hurry for both of their sakes.
Once he was sure Cassie was ready he took off into the disappearing sunset that had already turned the sky a golden hue of color. His feet fastly tapped against the ground as his body rolled across the earth with somewhat a normal pace, even if Cassie did slow him down a bit more than normally. The cabin he knew was a good ten minutes away, and with his speed in not a bolt it was maybe twenty or so. He had to be quick, because not to make himself feel pressured but the sudden smell of wild wolves rested around this edge of the pack grounds, and for once he hated his Dad for picking the location of the cabin a bit off the middle ground for the pack.

Bati, we had a class going, but you never responded back so I could continue helping.
If you'd like, I can take you in once more, but things will move a lot slower.

[Hakana]

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