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Who's your favorite EVIL character (thank you katnisshungergames10 for the idea of this poll)?

The Demon Queen
9
26%
Andrea
1
3%
Alexa
1
3%
Aurauria
1
3%
Rhubarb
15
44%
Fuego
1
3%
Leonardo
0
No votes
Anger
3
9%
Tallon
0
No votes
Santa
3
9%
 
Total votes : 34

Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Nov 01, 2012 5:24 am

xxazul63xx wrote:Demon queen with knife through her head. T.T not a pretty image

Not very pretty at all.
Rebel Faery wrote:Me want more.

Random fact: ME WANT A CUPCAKE!!
Flashpaw100 wrote:ME WANT MOOOORE! feed your stalkero!

Don't worry, young stalkerwan. Perhaps there shall be more later.
sadiesue1044009 wrote:I love these stories!!!

Aww, thank you! :) ((oh wait, it's Halloween. Should I really be saying "awww" on Halloween? I dunno.... what do you guys think?))
Rebel Faery wrote:Hey JF, I found this quote in someone's siggy and it reminded me of Amy:

"Hard times don't create heroes.
It is during the hard times
when the hero within us
is revealed."


Don't you think so, too?

Oh wow, yeah, it does!
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:I agree!

:)
whoa gal1 wrote:so do I. but it should be: "Hard times don't create heroes. It is during the hard times when the hero, and the stupidness within us is revealed." if you wanted it to apply more to amy.

lol

IT'S HALLOWEEN!! as you all know. And what do holidays mean? Holidays mean..... SPECIAL ENTRY IN TIAJNAD! That's right! Which means (since it's Halloween today)...... I'M GONNA WRITE A SPECIAL ENTRY NOW!! Enjoy! :)















Okay, I didn't like my plan anymore. Mostly because now Jenette twisted it around. She called it a "better" plan, but I called it a "dangerous-and-I'm-gonna-die" plan.
Come on Amy! Quit moving around!
I wouldn't be moving if you wouldn't be pulling so hard! I can barely breathe!
Yeah. If none of that made sense, wait 'til you hear what comes next!
Amy, just make sure you don't lick the pie, alright?!
BUT IT TASTES SO GOOD!
Don't or else this will definitely not work.
I growled, but nodded my head.
Fine.
So yeah, there you have it. Our weirdest conversation ever. I probably should explain more, shouldn't I? Well... let's say that when I said "we should join her", Jenette took that as "Amy-means-something-else-sneaky-and-I'm-gonna-twist-it-around-so-that-it's-even-more-sneaky". Here's the thing: I'm not sneaky.
QUIT PULLING SO HARD!!
Oh yeah, she was also trying to put me in a dress. Here's another random fact: I hate dresses.
I wouldn't be pulling so hard if you would just work with me!
Finally, she got the dress on me. Why did I just put it on myself? I can't. I've never worn a dress in my life. And I don't know why.
Alright, now don't lick this, alright?
She picked up a pie and smashed it on me. I ignored the pain in my face and instead concentrated on the delicious scent of the creamy pie.
Can I even... just lick it a tiny bit?
No! Don't touch it!
Fine. Now I tried to concentrate on the pain instead of the pie. Concentrating on pie is worse then pain. PIE IS THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD! Even if somebody evil is named after it (his name is Rhubarb, and he smells funky). BTW, did I ever tell you that pie is my role model?
Alright, that should be it. You ready?
No.
The curtain suddenly burst open (Jenette was helping me with my dress in some sort of dressing room [which was a curtain in other words] she found [I don't know how she found it]). Suzi walked in.
You ready?
NO!
Well too bad!
Suzi grabbed me and pushed me forward.
NONONONONONONONONO!!!
YES! Amy, this is the only way!
NO! We could just run and hide!
Well we're NOT going to do that!
Suzi gave me one final, hard push. I ended up falling face first into the pavement and smashed my face.
OWWWW!
AMY WOULD YOU GET UP?!
I groaned and got to my feet.
Listen. There is only one way to save the world. And right now you have to do this.
Why me?
Because you saved the world before, and now you gotta do it again.
But I don't want to!
You don't have a choice. Now get going!
Why was I letting Jenette boss me around? She scares me. :what: I sighed and started walking. We were already out of the building that we had been in. I was on the street, Jenette and Suzi urging me on. I didn't want to do this. I didn't want to go to the Demon Queen! And suddenly, right there, the Demon Queen poofed out of nowhere in front of me, making me stumble back.
My apologies.
She started to walk away.
Uh.... uh..... WAIT!
She turned to face me.
Are you.... um..... the Demon Queen?
She rushed toward me and looked left and right, then straight at me.
Yes. What do you want?
Um.... I was wondering if I could..... join you?
I started to look back to see if Jenette would help me, but then I remembered that she and Suzi had left me. They had left because I was in disguise. The Demon Queen was meant to take me down to her evil lair and then Jenette and the others would force a surprise attack.
Join me? Of course! I always do love new suckers-uh, I mean friends.
She took me hand and we disappeared. We reappeared underground. It was dark, but there were torches that lit up the place. She dragged me forward and through a doorway.
What's your name?
Um.... uh..... Amanda?
Oh.... what a lovely name.
Few. She didn't recognize me! She dragged me up to a desk. A dog sat behind it. And man, was he creepy!
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Is that creepy, or what?! Anyway, the Demon Queen had me fill out a form.
Name: Amanda
Gender: Female
Hobby: Eating pie
Why you came here: To join the Demon Queen

Once I filled it out, the creepy dog took it and put it into a file cabinet.
Welcome, Amanda.
The Demon Queen smiled at my evilly.
Now, why don't you follow me?
She led me into a room. Suddenly, she grabbed my arm and hurled me onto a table. She chained me down then smiled evilly at me.
Hello, Amy.
I gulped. She knew who I was!
Uh..... I don't know an Amy!
It was stupid of you to come here. And now I can kill you without any interference!
She pressed a button on a remote control and smiled evilly.
Enjoy your last moments!
And with that she left me alone. I heard creeky noises. Suddenly, the lights flickered on and I screamed.
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Oh nuts. Oh nuts oh nuts oh nuts. CREEPY ANIMALS! They all started to creep toward me. The spiders started crawling all over me.
AGHAGHAGHAHGAHGHA!
I hate spiders! The owl skeleton started to fly around me face. The bat started waving the weird knife thingy in my face. There was a sudden noise and they backed away (even the spiders) into the corner of the room. The Demon Queen walked in, still smiling evilly.
Alright, enough of that fun, it's time to get to the real work.
She clapped her hands. A strange horse walked in.
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It smiled evilly at me. It pulled out a needle and jammed it into my arm. It was so sudden and so frightening that I screamed a bit more.
AGHAGHAGHAHGAH! OWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!
Then the horse thingy pulled the needle out and grinned evilly at me. The Demon Queen held up a mirror.
This is you, now, Amy.
I looked into the mirror and screamed.
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What did you do to me?!
Ah, my dear Amy, I have turned you into a demon.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby daz » Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:46 am

That reminds me of TJOC. But good entry!!!!!
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Postby star star. » Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:19 am

NU!





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Postby VesVes » Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:38 am

Demon Amy?

We are all gonna die. I can feel it.
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Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Nov 01, 2012 12:07 pm

that's it everybody, were doomed........... Time to go to equestria
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Nov 01, 2012 12:14 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:That reminds me of TJOC. But good entry!!!!!

Yeah, sorta. :)
katnisshungergames10 wrote:NU!

XD
Nyota Hyena wrote:Demon Amy?

We are all gonna die. I can feel it.

lol
xxazul63xx wrote:that's it everybody, were doomed........... Time to go to equestria

lol

Okay, I iz super mad. Just finished carving my pumpkin. I was originally going to do a Mockingjay from The Hunger Games, but my pumpkin ended up being to small for the design. So I decided to spell out the words "Hunger Games" onto my pumpkin. Well, that didn't work either because the letters were to small. So then there's all these little holes in my pumpkin from the "Hunger Games" text. I flip it around and finally decide to just do a cross. It looks SO STUPID! The cross is all lopsided and it just turned out horrible. After all that time I spent on it! Grr, I just hate it. I hate it so much. If you guys still want to see pics of it, though, just ask. I don't think you'll want to see it, though. It's hideous.

Anyway, onto a little bit more happy things, I posted something new on the TIAJNAD Facebook page if you guys want to go see. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:37 pm

Well at least you got to do a pumpkin. I wasnt allowed to do anything halloweeny. I couldnt go trick or treating because both my parents were working and I wasnt allowed to go alone. We didnt have any candy to give out cause nobody thought of buying any. My stepdad said he'd take us to the cinema to make up for it, but I'm still upset!

Okay, halloween rant over. I lovelovelove that entry. TIAJNAD just got a whole load intresting. Now I wanna know what happens when Jenette and the others come to attack. Do they even recognise her?
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Nov 02, 2012 4:39 am

Rebel Faery wrote:Well at least you got to do a pumpkin. I wasnt allowed to do anything halloweeny. I couldnt go trick or treating because both my parents were working and I wasnt allowed to go alone. We didnt have any candy to give out cause nobody thought of buying any. My stepdad said he'd take us to the cinema to make up for it, but I'm still upset!

Okay, halloween rant over. I lovelovelove that entry. TIAJNAD just got a whole load intresting. Now I wanna know what happens when Jenette and the others come to attack. Do they even recognise her?

Oh wow, that must've stunk. I'm sorry that happened. That's worse then my not carving my pumpkin correctly! At least you get to go to the cinema, though. :) And it turns out that my mom might let me buy a new pumpkin and carve a Mockingjay on it for Thanksgiving. So that's okay, I guess. Still really wish I could've done it for Halloween, though...
And thanks! I enjoyed writing it. Sorry if it seemed a bit rushed, though. I had to do school...

ANNOUNCEMENT! NaNoWriMo started today, so I will be very busy writing my NaNo story. It's called "Wings". If you want more info on it, just click the "Advanced Reader" link in my sig. I hope you guys understand!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:06 am

Nuts! Just when it started to get intresting...
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:30 pm

Rebel Faery wrote:Nuts! Just when it started to get intresting...

Sorry.
I would write more now, but I have to get to bed. I'll try and write more tomorrow since I'm ahead in my NaNoWriMo story. :)
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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