The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[! october]

I would like some critique please!
Username: WarriorCat33
Link to your form: viewtopic.phpf=10&t=118117&p=4284078#p4284078

(You'll need to scroll down a little. :3)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: Saturday Afternoon
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine.

[Xanre]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Xanre, No. XV
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=3370
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: One week from now (14th)
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either. Don't care.

The form is still under major progress, but I want to get critique on his backstory so far.

[Papercutt.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: ~Sixx~
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=4341965#p4341965
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN
Deadline for your form: Not sure
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Both are good but i would prefer here.

[Desmond]

I would like some critique please!
Username: -3B-
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=4330551#p4330551
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN
Deadline for your form: 14th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM me, please!

I've added and developed a lot more since I last posted this form.

[Papyrsatyr]

Bump Bump. ^ ^; If you want you can ask a question on my formspring so you can remain anonymous.

[Chelz]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Chelz
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=3440
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough As Nails (TaN)
Deadline for your form: 14th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? If possible, I would prefer PM. :3

I'm currently still editing things, but I thought it would be nice to have some feedback. xD

Form has been collected. There is therefore no need for the critique.

[kitten5862]

I would like some critique please!
Username: kitten5862
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=4338946#p4338946 I think it is the 4th form down.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: Friday/Saturday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either one is fine =)

[Inari Rose]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Sheba_angel
Link to your form: Form
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: tomorrow
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

[iPawki]

I would like some critique please!
Username: ~ Daydreamer ~
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=3460#p4406915
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: Tomorrow (Around 21 hours?)
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here please, or PM if you like that more. XD

[bearlygrunge]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Autumn.Zephyr
Link to your form: Clickie!
Not finished yet. . . :C
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: Tonight @ 10 o'clock pm. D:
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either or. Whatever is easiest.