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Who's your favorite EVIL character (thank you katnisshungergames10 for the idea of this poll)?

The Demon Queen
9
26%
Andrea
1
3%
Alexa
1
3%
Aurauria
1
3%
Rhubarb
15
44%
Fuego
1
3%
Leonardo
0
No votes
Anger
3
9%
Tallon
0
No votes
Santa
3
9%
 
Total votes : 34

Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 21, 2012 3:24 pm

katnisshungergames10 wrote:
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katnisshungergames10 wrote:Awe. Some!!!! I LOVE he bump thingy!!

Why thank you! :)

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Oh nuts. Oh nuts. Oh nuts oh nuts oh nuts. NUTS! I hadn't expected training to be so.... vigorous! Apparently training was Suzi running around with a pointy stick trying to poke me. And I was running.
Don't run, Amy! Grab the stick so that she has nothing to defend herself!
She's got her fists!
YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!
But I couldn't turn around. If I did then Suzi would poke me with that stick like thing. I do not like pointy objects. I took a deep breath, whirled around, squeezed my eyes shut, and moved my arms up and down in a frantic motion. I felt something hit my arm and then I heard a snap. I opened my eyes slightly. Suzi was staring at me.
What? Did I get the stick?
Sort of. You hit it and flung it halfway across the room.
I GOT IT?!
I guess, but you were supposed to grab it, not fling it.
OMW I ACTUALLY GOT THE STICK!
I started dancing.
I got the stiiiick, I got the stiiiick, I got the stiiick, OH BABY!
Amy? Calm down.
STICK, YOU ARE NOT MATCH FOR ME!
Amy, it's just a stick.
I GOT YOU SOOO BAD! HI-YAH!
I did a karate chop in the air and ended up hitting my knee.
OWWWW!
AMY!
STUPID STICK! YOU MADE ME HURT MYSELF!
I suddenly fell to the ground, shoved by something. I bashed my face against the hard ground.
OWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOW!
I whirled around and faced Jenette, who was snickering slightly.
YOU SHOVED ME!
You weren't listening.
YEAH! BUT YOU COULD'VE SHOUTED AT ME!
I did. You didn't hear me.
*grumble*
Amy, listen. You did good. But good doesn't win the battle.
Yeah. Awesome epic super kan-fuy powers does. And I don't got that.
Get.
Huh?
You said "I don't got that". It's "I don't get that."
Got, get. All the same to me. :D
Amy, would you please be serious?
Actually, I think that's impossible for her.
HEY! I heard that!
Yeah, that's why I said it out loud.
I frowned and gave Suzi an evil look.
You look like a dead whale.
I gave her an even eviller look.
Now you look like a dead whale that died twice.
OH! Jenette must have killed it!
I heard that, Amy.
Oh nuts. I forgot that she could read minds since she was an angel and all. OH NUTS! I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING! SHE CAN READ EVERY SINGLE WORD I'VE BEEN WRITING AND THINKING! OMW THAT'S SO CREEPY!
Amy, stop shouting.
AGH! OMWOMWOMWOMWOMW-
I MEAN IT!
I blinked.
Listen. We'll go through this again, and this time you actually grab the stick and fight with it. Don't throw it halfway across the room.
I nodded.
Fine.
Suzi walked over and picked up the stick again and started chasing me. I immediately started running again. Jenette slapped her forehead.
QUIT RUNNING AND GRAB THE STUPID STICK!
WHAT'D THE STICK EVER DO TO YOU?!
Suzi chased me. I ran. It was a reflex that I couldn't control.
Amy! Look out!
Something suddenly rammed against my head and I blacked out.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby VesVes » Sun Oct 21, 2012 3:40 pm

Haha, the stick! XD But that was a cliffhanger there. Here are my guesses as to what hit her:

1. Someone with another stick
2. The Demon Queen
3. Some other random villain
4. A Bighorn sheep

And a very funny entry! Good work! :)
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:54 pm

Oh my StarClan, I'm crying with laughter: "You look like a dead whale." "Now you look like a dead whale that died twice". XD

And my guesses what she banged her head on:
a) Rhubarb
b) The wall
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby xxazul63xx » Mon Oct 22, 2012 2:54 am

I was gone for only two days and you already wrote like twenty more entries! O.O I'm out of practice.........
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:45 am

Man, I hate suspense...
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

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Postby star star. » Mon Oct 22, 2012 7:55 am

Lol.... BEST ENTRY EVA!!!!





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Postby TPDebate » Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:31 am

yay! suzi good! and I think I would hove run too. but, there is a game that trains you to not run when somebody is chasing you like that. It is called everyones-it tag. the name explains it all. THE ANOING AMY IS KNOCKED OUT! YAY! RELIEF FOR ALL!
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Oct 23, 2012 8:57 am

Nyota Hyena wrote:Haha, the stick! XD But that was a cliffhanger there. Here are my guesses as to what hit her:

1. Someone with another stick
2. The Demon Queen
3. Some other random villain
4. A Bighorn sheep

And a very funny entry! Good work! :)

Thank you! :)
Rebel Faery wrote:Oh my StarClan, I'm crying with laughter: "You look like a dead whale." "Now you look like a dead whale that died twice". XD

And my guesses what she banged her head on:
a) Rhubarb
b) The wall

lol, yeah, I liked that part too. :) And she banged her head on Rhubarb? lol XD
xxazul63xx wrote:I was gone for only two days and you already wrote like twenty more entries! O.O I'm out of practice.........

Yeah, Katniss kept on telling me to write more. ;) And that's fine, I understand. I was gone all day yesterday and couldn't get on the computer, and when I could get on today I saw all these posts and was like :shock: WOW. LOTS of posts!
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Man, I hate suspense...

Heheh, but I like it. Can you tell?
katnisshungergames10 wrote:Lol.... BEST ENTRY EVA!!!!

Thank you! :)
whoa gal1 wrote:yay! suzi good! and I think I would hove run too. but, there is a game that trains you to not run when somebody is chasing you like that. It is called everyones-it tag. the name explains it all. THE ANOING AMY IS KNOCKED OUT! YAY! RELIEF FOR ALL!

lol

MORE! :)















My eyes fluttered open. I moaned, my head hurting. Where was I? What was going on? Why were these thoughts always going through my head? A voice spoke through the darkness (their words will be in tangerine).
Ah, you are awake.
AGH! WHO IS THERE?!
No need to shout. This will be fast..... and painful.
Oh well gee, thanks for telling me!
You are welcome.
Hey, where are my friends?
At the moment they are locked up in cages and are being forced to see your death.
My death?
I squeaked.
Yes. And it will start in 5.... 4....
WAAAAAAAIT! Can I at least see you?
Oh, fine.
Lights suddenly flickered on, revealing the dog who had been speaking to me before.
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She looked CREEPY!
Happy? Now let's begin. 5..... 4..... 3..... 2.....
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAITTTTT!
OH WHAT NOW?!
Nothin'. I just wanted to delay.
The dog growled.
5....
WAIT WAIT WAIT!!! What's your name?
My name is Andrea! Now shut up! 5..... 4..... 3.... 2.... 1....
WAIWIAITAIWAITWIAITWIAITWIAWAITTTTT!
WHAT?!
I'm hungry. Got any cupcakes?
5, 4, 3, 2, 1, start!
I heard a screeching noise and looked around (now that the lights were on I could see). I was tied to a wooden board that was laying on a conveyer belt. The conveyer belt started moving (hence the screeching noise). At the end of the conveyer belt was a furnace that was lit with blazing fire. I looked at the tied up me, then at the conveyer belt, then at the fire. Nuts.
AGAHGAHGHAGHAHGAH! LET ME GO!
Finally figure out what is to happen, have you?
YES! I NO LIKEY YOUR PLAN!
That's the idea. You're not supposed to like it, dingbat.
Huh. Dingbat. Never heard that one before.
Hey! You're the.... uh..... dingobat!
Dingbat.
LET ME GO!!!
No can do. It's my job that you die.
Wow. Your job stinks.
Quiet!
I got closer and closer to the fire. I could feel the heat already.
AMY!
Jenette?
USE YOUR POWER! GET OUT OF THERE!
Quiet, you!
WHAT POWER?!
YOUR POWER!
WELL GEE, THANKS JENETTE! THAT'S REAL SPECIFIC!
CONCENTRATE!
WAIT, WHY ARE WE YELLING?! HOW ARE YOU SPEAKING TO ME?!
THERE'S A MONITOR ON THE WALL AND I CAN ONLY YELL FOR YOU TO HEAR ME! NOW CONCENTRATE!
I WOULD IF YOU'D STOP YELLING!
Oh wait, I was yelling too. I shut up and concentrated, even though I had no idea what to do. I suddenly heard a snap and opened my eyes. The rope that tied me to the wooden board had been cut free!
I HEARD THAT! AMY, YOU'RE FREE! GO! RUN!
I got off the board and hopped onto the ground. And just in time, too. Right as I hopped off the board I was on fell into the fire and was consumed. And I would've been too, if I hadn't broken free.
Stop! Come back here!
Andrea suddenly picked up a bow and arrow. She quickly put an arrow on her bow, pulled back, and let the arrow fly toward me. I ducked and the arrow flew right over my head.
Come. Back. Here!
NEVER! MWAHAHAHAHA!
I ran for a door and swung it open then ran inside without even looking. I slammed the door behind me and locked it. I breathed a sigh of relief. Then I turned around..... and stared right into the eyes of another dog.
AGHAGHAGHAHGAHGHAHGAHGAH!
I fell to the ground, startled by the sudden appearance.
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(her words will be in green.)
Don't worry, I'm here to help. Andrea has kept me here for years, and I just broke out now. I can help you get out.
Well dude, help me!
The dog helped me up and led me down a hallway.
My name is Alexa, by the way.
Amy.
We shook paws as we were running. She opened up a door.
Inside here!
She shoved me in then ran in after me. Then she slammed the door shut and locked it. I looked around, trying to figure out where to go next. But I couldn't. We were in a blank room. Well, not completely blank. There was a weird machine thingy. But other than that, there was nothing.
Where do we go next?! Where do we go next?!
I looked around, hopping up and down, all worked up.
No where. You stay right where you are.
Huh?
Alexa pressed a button on a remote she suddenly had in her hand. The strange machine thingy had a door that opened up. Then she quickly pushed me through the door and into the strange machine (which was just my size [I was very squashed]). Then she shut the door of the machine and locked it, locking me in.
HEY! LET ME OUT!
Sorry, but that's a no. I have to get your power so that I can rule the world!
What about my friends?!
Who? Oh, your little gang? They're already dead. Andrea killed them for me before she tried killing you.
Wait, you and Adrea are together?!
Yup. Except she wanted to kill you and I wanted your power, hence why she tried killing you and I brought you here. This machine can suck up all your power and puts it in a bottle. Then if I drink your power it is put into me and I will be able to rule the world with your power.
She pressed another button on her remote. I felt a tingly sensation go through me. Suddenly I felt electricity through me, zapping every bone in my body. I yelped at the sting. I looked through the window on the door of the machine. I stared at Alexa, who was smiling giddily as if it was Christmas for her! I suddenly saw the door being burst down, and Alexa going into a frenzy, her smile leaving her. I saw a flash of green, and then brown, then white, and then a braid. I heard punching sounds, and then the door to my machine was ripped open. I stared into the eyes of my friend, my sister, my fellow secret agent, Jenette.
JENETTE!
I jumped onto Jenette and hugged her.
Hey, Amy.
And, you won't believe this, but she actually hugged me back! She never did that!
It's alright. We gotta get out of here.
She pulled away from me. I looked around the room and saw Suzi, Gish, and Ginger.
Come on, let's go. There's an exit right outside of this room.
We headed for the doorway, but right as we did we all fell to the ground. Why? I do not know.
Wait up, kiddies! You didn't say goodbye to your dear old friend!
We all turned our heads and I swear I died then and there when I saw who was waiting for us. No, it wasn't Suzi. It was the Demon Queen.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby star star. » Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:08 am

Ohhhhh..... YES!!! REVENGE ON THE DEMON QUEEN!!!!

Make a new poll, maybe, asking who our favorite evil charators are? That would be so cool!!! And the Demon Queen be on there. :twisted:





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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:15 am

katnisshungergames10 wrote:Ohhhhh..... YES!!! REVENGE ON THE DEMON QUEEN!!!!

Make a new poll, maybe, asking who our favorite evil charators are? That would be so cool!!! And the Demon Queen be on there. :twisted:

lol, thanks for the idea! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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