Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[shay ;]

Username: shay&&&
What You'd Like Help With:
- Getting Literate
- Stop Being a Mechanic
- Character Critique
- Character Making Lessons [ or whatev this is called :p ]
Preferred Instructor:
Any lovely person out there, who is willing to help meh.
Activity or Time Zone: [UTC +1] Central European Time Zone
Sample of Writing: This is meh sample! I hope it's good enough to work with. :p

[dovelydragon]

Username: Blueball Blitz
What You'd Like Help With:
~Making better Forms
~Finding a way to post longer posts
~Just becoming more literate in general C:
Preferred Instructor: Anybody who is willing :3
Activity or Time Zone: I live in Pennsylvania, and am pretty active but I do still have a life
Sample of Writing:

Harry Edward Styles .

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. I lifted my head to look in the direction of Louis. "Oh hey Lou... Just checking some Tweets..." As I threw My phone softly on the bed next to Me, I stood up. I Traced my fingers through my Curly locks. The stress of having to put up with that annoying girl all the time and act like i was dating her? It was getting to me. I knew i could get any girl i wanted, so why did i have to pretend with her? Well, at least i used to be able to... Before our fame died down...
{{ Sorry i have a bit of WB }}

Vitani Dashy Shade.
❝I cant be no superman...❞

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Outfit: Stars :3
Mood: Normal
With: Mason
Tagged: Niall - Superbia

. I fixed her hair in the mirror. It felt strange going on a date with my friend... But it was just acting, right? As i pulled my hair in to pretty bun, a soft smile eased on my lips. It was just kinda funny to me. The whole acting thing... I did feel bad the boys fame had slipped away from them, but couldn't they get their own girlfriends? I knew for sure Niall could... he was the sweetest boy on the planet. I shook my head. Yes, Niall was so sweet and massively charming, he was my Mate. And i wasn't going to let anything change that.

Slipping my Top over my head, I straightened it nicely. Although it didn't feel very different then getting ready for a normal date, the fact it was with Niall. My phone buzzed on the dresser across the room. I rolled my eyes and made my way over to my IPhone. Of coarse, More tweets. The fans were so sweet Trending #Nash. Was it wrong? Was it wrong to be living this lie? I didnt know but shrugged off the feeling. After Retweeting a few sweet Tweets i set my phone down and went into the bathroom to apply a bit of makeup.

This is me on a really good day ^^

[Vargulf]

you needa help pay for a stamp, and other xD No, just kidding. I'm ordering one soon thgouh...
What do you want your username to be on ou link picture thing though?
She wolf- What do you need help with? o.o

I filled a form out awhile back and really haven't gotten any feed back...I'm just looking for some one who's got time to help with rps.

Username: She Wolf Alpha
What You'd Like Help With: expanding my vocabulary and making my posts more colorful
Preferred Instructor: the burning rose
Activity or Time Zone: I'm Eastern time and I am usually on after two o'clock
Sample of Writing: The warmth of the sun's rays made a halo of light off of his pure white coat as he rolled onto his back to let it embrace his underbelly. "Conri wake up you lazy wolf" His best friend howled at him as he stood over his large frame. Conri opened his eyes as he let out a sigh, letting his pack mate know that he had no interest in moving, "Dongo don't you have something better to do...can't you see that I am busy?" Conri then turned his back towards Dongo as he retreated back to a slumber. Dongo then shook his head as he walked away, "I swear some days you are no fun at all."

[alltherowboats]

Username: inutheidiot (Call me Inu )
What You'd Like Help With:
More descriptive writing that doesn't feel too fluffy
Lengthening my posts to semi-lit+ standards.
Character development
Preferred Instructor: an asian to the knee
Activity or Time Zone: CST
Sample of Writing: Julian shifted slighty in his uncomfortable movie-theater chair and made a mental note to never let Genevieve set him up on a date again. The vaguely pretty brunette in the seat next to him seemed to have no respect for personal boundaries; she was so close to him that she might as well have been sitting on his lap, and he reminded himself to thank God for the armrest that kept her from actually doing so. The second the movie ended, Julian stood and made for the exit, muttering something about going to the restroom to his annoyed date. He took refuge in the men's room, pulling out his cell phone and texting Genevieve about the extent of his hatred for her. He exited the restroom, rejoined his date, and spent the twenty minutes it took to drive her home reminding himself that he couldn't leave her stranded on the side on the road every time she opened her mouth or batted her lashes at him. By the time he arrived home, he didn't want to do anything but sleep. He was out the second his head hit the pillow, not even bothering to change clothes first.

[ophio]

Username:Bunny VS Cool Whip (Bunnies Fine )
What You'd Like Help With:
~I would to step into Semi lit+
~I would like to learn to develop my characters personalities,and learn to play them well
Preferred Instructor:Any friendly instructor that would like to help me!
Activity or Time Zone:CST,i'm usually on at about 3:00-9:00 on Mon,Wed,and every other Fri,On Tues,and Thurs i will be on from around 3:00-4:30,then back on at about 8:00,Sat,and Sun I'm on about all day.(This is my normal schedule i will inform you if something will change)
Sample of Writing:(Example of my character descriptions)

[size=150]~Melanie Rosalind Fall~
Melanie is 16 almost 17 she has picked up the nicknames of Rose Rosa or Mel,she isn't to fond of Rosa so Mel is fine she has bright red hair and deep hazel eyes.She seems very cold at first she pushes her fears aside and also tries to push herself away from people,and thinks she doesn't need a lover in her life but she has moments when she realizes that without someone to go to how alone and lost in the world she really is.She doesn't think of her "Gift" as a gift,it's been more of a curse to her.Her rank in the group is fighter/protector,to her this means she has to protect everyone and fight to do so from the creatures that are classified as the were-wolfs enemies protecting everyone encluding any lover that may come into her life.When she was younger her mother died in a car accident and her life went downhill from there,father becomes drunk and abusive,everyone she new found out about what she was and somehow ended up getting hurt,she finally decided to run from it all,and hopefully no one else would get hurt...

>.:Kayith Jackson Vex:.<
Kayith is kind but has a temper,he has picked up the nicknames Jack and Kay,he is fine with both of them just witch ever you wish to call him.He doesn't mind the were-wolves and actually likes one of there kinds company,if it wasn't forbidden he would interact with them a large amount of the time,Kayith has jet black hair a bright blue eyes.Though he fears he might be putting the one he loves and himself in danger.So he continues to question his decision to enter the forest that day,that time,everyday he has to ask himself what might have happened if he hadn't gone,but he knows that he did make the decision,and this was his road now,he doesn't know where it might take him,nor how it might end.When he was younger his Parents were murdered and he became an orphan until her turned 12 when a couple adopted him he doesn't like them that much and often sneaks away,he is now 18 and hopes everything will turn out alright in the end...

(Example of my post length)

Melanie wandered through the forest,she stayed close to the camp that the group of were-wolves had set up.A slight wind had picked up and she held her gray hoodie tight just around her head keeping her forehead hidden her hazel eyes peered to the ground as she thought about what had happened in the past few days.Lets see i met a guy in the forest,figured out he was a human,ended up blowing my cover,and somehow didn't get caught... she let out a sigh.She could see her breath as it faded with the breeze; clouds hung over the sky as she continued to think.

Kayith stood at the edge of the forest he just looked,questioning his decision to enter a few days ago,though he couldn't seem to take his mind off of all the creatures there,so many unanswered questions so many questions he didn't want to know the answer of,for fear of what the answer might be.He crossed over the boundary that lead into this place,leaves crunched on the earth beneath him but he continued to walk.his jacket was zipped up tight though he was still slightly chilly.His mind never crossed to how his adopted parents might react to him entering the forest,but he had already,and there was no turning back.

*Both examples from a forbidden romance 1x1*

[rose;]

oh wow. Why so many people all of a sudden?
If you want me as a teacher, please pm me :3 I dislike volunteering if you didn't specify... Note that in best with plot development and answering questions and giving advise though

City, I think you should include in the form thing a question of how they found us. I know km curious x

[Kienwynn]

Username: Kienwynn
What You'd Like Help With: Growing to semi-literate+, developing good personalities, making my own form and maybe maintaining a role play
Preferred Instructor: Any of the below, please.
Ɔᴇʀᴛᴀɪɴ Ɖᴀʀᴋ Ƭʜɪɴɢs
abandoned.
Smamm
an asian to the knee
zippyzoo77
Her
Activity or Time Zone: Eastern Time Zone. I'm on in afternoon & evening.
Sample of Writing:

Elliot had found his way back to the clearing of huts and had heard every word of Reapers proposition. His heart banged at the mention of freedom but he didn't trust Reaper and if Fable took the deal he wouldn't trust Fable either. He shifted to his human form and walked to Fables side. "Don't take the deal. You don't know if this item he speaks of even exists, he could just want to get rid of Cera." Silently he added, "I refuse to follow one crazy person following another insane person."

Emalae flipped over the small ornament in her hands not very satisfied with the craftsmanship. "Manufactured." She muttered frowning as she felt someone's eyes on her. Her eyes moved up to a blonde girl. She arched an eyebrow at the girl as their eyes met then returned the ceramic object to its shelf and continued down the line, looking at less obviously manufactured objects. She was good at identifying other Phoenix's, something she had grown at in skill over the years, the blonde was a Phoenix.

[rose;]

asian makes the best forms x3

I can help with maintaining a role-play, unless zippy is around and wants to take you

[placebo.]

Username: Wolfdoglover12
What You'd Like Help With: Using the Mobile Site [Apple Products]
Maintaining a Role Play
Animal Roleplaying
Developing Your own Form
One on One role play Tutoring
Developing Detailed Physical Descriptions
Preferred Instructor: I would like, Eighteen for my Mobile teacher and the rest are just opereated by one person…I think.
Activity or Time Zone:I am on every day for at least an hour. I am currently in Mountain Time.
Sample of Writing: Mandy glanced up her bright blue eyes surveyed the grassland. As she stared a flash of brown caught her eye. Something was coming towards her. Mandy’s muscles twitched with the urgency to run but she held them still with her mind. As her heart pounded faster her ears flicked. The noise was like a thrashing of brittle grass. Mandy was greatly confused by this, nothing had ever sounded like this.

Suddenly a strange creature slammed into her side. Mandy withered under the creature’s great mass. Her long lean legs thrashed around as she broke into a cold sweat. Her mind was whirling wildly as she struggled to dislodge this strange thing on her. When she finally succeeded she stared at this enemy. It look like a large cheetah but with thicker spots. Mandy only had an instant to stare before she tore off across the grassland. Her only motive was to get away.

[eden .]

Username: inutheidiot (Call me Inu )
What You'd Like Help With:
More descriptive writing that doesn't feel too fluffy
Lengthening my posts to semi-lit+ standards.
Character development
Preferred Instructor: an asian to the knee
Activity or Time Zone: CST
Sample of Writing: Julian shifted slighty in his uncomfortable movie-theater chair and made a mental note to never let Genevieve set him up on a date again. The vaguely pretty brunette in the seat next to him seemed to have no respect for personal boundaries; she was so close to him that she might as well have been sitting on his lap, and he reminded himself to thank God for the armrest that kept her from actually doing so. The second the movie ended, Julian stood and made for the exit, muttering something about going to the restroom to his annoyed date. He took refuge in the men's room, pulling out his cell phone and texting Genevieve about the extent of his hatred for her. He exited the restroom, rejoined his date, and spent the twenty minutes it took to drive her home reminding himself that he couldn't leave her stranded on the side on the road every time she opened her mouth or batted her lashes at him. By the time he arrived home, he didn't want to do anything but sleep. He was out the second his head hit the pillow, not even bothering to change clothes first.

I can take you but I'm warning you I'll be gone for a while, especially this weekend. I'll be at a tournament. in general, I've been hard to reach ... ><