[Desmond]

Owner: -3B-
Name: König [German, "King"]
Gender: Male
Age: 7 years
Height: 19.3hh
Poem: A crown created of horns and bramble,
A hardened heart of stone and rose thorns -
The king stands before his one true kingdom.

Light in the darkness, darkness in the light,
The true king is the balance of nature.
In peace he is the tyrant, cold and cruel -
In war, he is the harborer of souls.

The sacrificial lamb, sent for its death,
The conqueror, the war hero who won the fight -
He is both, and neither; he is the king.

Notes:
I alluded to his coat in the line "Light in the darkness, darkness in the light" - the Tobiano white markings are the light in the "dark" of his grullo coat. And I tried to write a line about his eyes, but it ended up getting nixed. .-.; /fail

[Hyeva!]

Owner: EvaLine!!
Name: Born This Way (aka Waya)
Gender: Male
Age: 6.5 years
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:

Paradise
I lie,
I fight
I own the night.
I run,
I scream
I have one single dream
Of winning you..

You, my paradise..

My toes,
My head
My familys dead.
My body,
My mind
My talent to find
The way to your heart..

You, my paradise..

A story,
A tale
A love thirsty male.
A promise,
A mare
A suspicious air
that blows you to me..

You, my paradise..

Betrayal and courage,
I have no knowledge.
That feeling is is new,
A feeling 'bout you.
For a reason, I
want you close by.
But your heart are in chains,
for another that pains.
He keeps you away,
but I will someday,
Fight for my love,
with strenght for above.
I will wait for that day,
when I'll take you away.
I will think twice,
before I show you my paradise..

[Ralonica]

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[Ralonica]

Owner: EvaLine!!
Name: Born This Way (aka Waya)
Gender: Male
Age: 6.5 years
Height: 19.3hh
Poem:

Paradise
I lie,
I fight
I own the night.
I run,
I scream
I have one single dream
Of winning you..

You, my paradise..

My toes,
My head
My familys dead.
My body,
My mind
My talent to find
The way to your heart..

You, my paradise..

A story,
A tale
A love thirsty male.
A promise,
A mare
A suspicious air
that blows you to me..

You, my paradise..

Betrayal and courage,
I have no knowledge.
That feeling is is new,
A feeling 'bout you.
For a reason, I
want you close by.
But your heart are in chains,
for another that pains.
He keeps you away,
but I will someday,
Fight for my love,
with strenght for above.
I will wait for that day,
when I'll take you away.
I will think twice,
before I show you my paradise..

Congratulations. ^ ^ I absoultely fell in love with your poem - especially the flow of it, and how I thought it really connected with the Cretoz. There were some beautiful poems of him, but I thought this one worked the best.

[Hyeva!]

omg! Thank you soo much!
I'm really glad you liked my poem, I will take good care of him! Thank you ^^