[T-O-X-I-C]

This my catty bumblekit/paw/stripe/star of skyclan. son of cloudstar

This cat is ma second fav warrior i made.
My first is Hawk that flys at night now Hawkpaw/storm/star of Windclan

I kinda rushed it at the sun because i had to look after my dog so i had to do that quick

Hope you enjoy it

[T-O-X-I-C]

Bring on tha feedback

[.Missy.]

This isn't intermediate. Sorry.

[batheir]

Hem, isn't Intermediate? How? I love it. It looks Intermediate worthy to me, very beautiful.

[Dragon Documentary]

it is great and wow .Missy. that was really rude... anyhoo I love it great job!

[.Missy.]

Excuse me? I am telling the truth. It looks fine, but it belongs on beginners. They are getting closer, that art, but not quite intermediate yet. Keep trying!

[Aralas]

Instead of telling them that it isn't good enough, which will do nothing to help, why not ask a mod if it isn't intermediate worthy? :3

[.Missy.]

Well, let me give some tips. You should use pen,with 77% Smoothing for the lines. And the should needs to be placed higher, the leg back more. The shading should be less vibrant, and not as much in the face. I hope this helped c;

[rachiechu888]

I think the shoulder is actually fine, but I agree that the shading is too much. Maybe lessen the opacity? Also, this is really good! I can't draw cats very well at all! D:

[T-O-X-I-C]

I took your tips XD I will post the link in a min