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by Elphie » Sun May 02, 2010 8:16 am
Vellamore wrote:Montague wrote:Thanks Scoobs and thanks Vellamore. I figured it was about time I made a story with
my favourite couple. And it's sort of like a an RP I'm involved in. Except in the end of
the RP the two get together... I just felt that this lil' story was perfect with an unhappy
ending... Does that make me malicious or strange? xD
Not at all, hahahha d: I think stories are better with an imperfect ending; that way, they aren't so predictable . It leaves you with more of a shock heheh d:
Whenever I write, I try to end it in a way you don't expect, almost every time . hahaha
Me too! Plus it leaves it open in the future for other things. I'm writing a story currently (which may turn into a novel at this rate xD) and it's anything but perfect. Everything seems to go wrong for the two main characters, but not in a way that makes it seem overdramatic. I'd never written one for a CS couple before... Kind of want to do another xD
A huge thanks to
Aesse forthe adorable and
perfect picture of Grimm!
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by vee. » Sun May 02, 2010 8:32 am
Montague wrote:Vellamore wrote:Montague wrote:Thanks Scoobs and thanks Vellamore. I figured it was about time I made a story with
my favourite couple. And it's sort of like a an RP I'm involved in. Except in the end of
the RP the two get together... I just felt that this lil' story was perfect with an unhappy
ending... Does that make me malicious or strange? xD
Not at all, hahahha d: I think stories are better with an imperfect ending; that way, they aren't so predictable . It leaves you with more of a shock heheh d:
Whenever I write, I try to end it in a way you don't expect, almost every time . hahaha
Me too! Plus it leaves it open in the future for other things. I'm writing a story currently (which may turn into a novel at this rate xD) and it's anything but perfect. Everything seems to go wrong for the two main characters, but not in a way that makes it seem overdramatic. I'd never written one for a CS couple before... Kind of want to do another xD
You should do more ! And I bet if you posted your story on the forums here, you'd get alot of fans and feedback(: I did that with my current story, and I made a few new friends through it, and gained some fangirls xD


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by vee. » Sun May 02, 2010 12:40 pm
Romantic Heartache (Roman) and
Minuzioso (Minny)Sorry guys, it's really longg !!! But it was fun to write:)Every girl wants Romantic Heartache to love her. He is brutally handsome and strong, with a stunning white smile, and dreamy, terrifying bloodred eyes. He is mysterious, he is quiet, he is charming, he is untouchable. He's perfect, of course ...
Isn't he ?
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Roman is stretched out in the meadow, his proud head held high, at least six females crowded around him. He pays no attention to them, not really. He's just watching the trees sway in the breeze, watching the clouds. He loves the attention, but pretends not to care, and that's what the girls like. They strive for his attention, they will do anything for it. And he can have any female he wants.
"Here Roman, do you want some water?" a pink female asks him. "I'll bet your're thirsty after that long exhausting run you just had."
"No, I bet he's tired," another girl comments, pushing the pink female out of her way. "You're so tired, aren't you ? You can come with me, and we could take a nap in my den, you'd like that wouldn't you ?"
Roman flicked his eyes to the speaker, and winked before turning his gaze back in front of him. She squealed in excitement, so pleased with herself that she didn't know what to do. The girls continued to bicker and speak to him in flirtatious tones, not another word reaching his ears. His gaze scans the meadow as a couple birds fly from the ground, and then he stops, raising an eyebrow in approval at what he sees.
A pale-coated female trots a few steps after the birds, then stops, disappointed that her hunt was unsuccessful. Thousands of black tattoos cover her body, elaborate and delicate and and beautiful. He stands, and walks away from the females gathered around him, leaving them speechless, motionless, and shocked. Roman saunters across the meadow, headed towards his new discovery.
"Excuse me, miss," he calls quietly, his voice smooth. The female's head turns toward him, a pair of wild golden eyes staring back at him. She regards him with a calm expression, and he wonders why she is not enthralled to hear his voice.
She appraises him critically, sweeping her gaze along him with a casual look about her. Finishing her examination, she looks back to his face, seeming unimpressed. "Make it quick, I've got a hunt to finish."
Roman blinks in surprise. Why isn't she drooling over him ? When he says nothing, she rolls her eyes, and pads off toward the trees, sweeping her tail through the grass. Roman trots after her, determined to catch her interest.
"Miss," he repeats, "I hadn't caught your name."
She stops suddenly, and Roman skids to a stop, nearly crashing into her in his haste. Her piercing golden gaze bores into his face. "My, you're clumsy," she mutters to herself. "Minny. Well, my name's really Minuzioso, but nobody can pronounce it, so Minny works just fine. Actually I had a friend once who called me Alice ..."
Such a strange character, Roman thinks to himself. "Well, then, Minny, perhaps you'd like to accompany me back to my den; I've just brought down a moose, and I couldn't possibly eat the whole thing myself."
Minny laughs. "Sorry mister, not interested in your tricks . Go pick one of those desperate little ladies, I'm sure they'd all love that offer." She begins to walk off again.
Roman frowns, shocked to find himself attracted to the one female in the entire territoury who isn't dying for his company. Just my luck, he thinks to himself. "Minny, wait," he calls, catching up to her. She regards him impatiently, leaning to one side. "Look ... You don't have to come back to the den today. Maybe ... I'll see you around tomorrow morning, and we can just hang out somewhere and talk. Would that be okay ?"
Minny examines his pleading face for a minute, then her expression softens to a smile. "Okay, okay. Tomorrow morning." Minny looks down, then back up to his eyes. She giggles quietly, and disappears into the trees.
Roman grins. Tomorrow morning.


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by gleebees » Sun May 02, 2010 5:26 pm
It is really cute ^^

"You're neither friend nor foe,
though I can't seem to let you go,
one thing that I still know
is that you're keeping me
down.
You're onto me, onto me, and all over.
Something always brings me back to you,
it never takes too long."
I would LOVE to be apart of a 1x1 roleplay! Just message me<3
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