The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[neonfrozen]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
KoowieTheDog

Link to your form:
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Adoption Agency you are applying for:
♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪

Deadline for your form:
I'd like the critique to be done by 5th, but the codedrop is on the 7th.

Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM would be the best.

[Ray.]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
~RayRay~
Link to what needs critiquing:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1383996#p41209310
What is it:
Short story

[Papyrsatyr]

This is a critique for KoowieTheDog!
Who the critique is for: Koowiethedog
What you had to say about it: Honestly it's a nice form and I don't have all too much to add to it. If you're going for it without competition you should be fine for the most part, however if you are facing compeititon and need some advice on what to add. A little bit explaining a bit more of their personality and why they act as such might help strengthen your form. So going into his past, maybe a small bit on it even if it's a "normal" life.

may edit this later because oh my god headache.

[neonfrozen]

This is a critique for KoowieTheDog!
Who the critique is for: Koowiethedog
What you had to say about it: Honestly it's a nice form and I don't have all too much to add to it. If you're going for it without competition you should be fine for the most part, however if you are facing compeititon and need some advice on what to add. A little bit explaining a bit more of their personality and why they act as such might help strengthen your form. So going into his past, maybe a small bit on it even if it's a "normal" life.

may edit this later because oh my god headache.

Okay, thank you! I just needed some critique becaue I have writers block and I dont know if that is making my stories turn out bad xD

[Papyrsatyr]

Bump!



By the way while I'm bumping have a picture of my amazing babuu Zig that I adopted from the agency! <3

[Lizbutt]

I would like some critique on my poem please!
Username: Carry
Link to what needs critiquing:Here
What is it: The poem on the image
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

bumping this, it was never given a critique.

[Ray.]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
~RayRay~
Link to what needs critiquing:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1383996#p41209310
What is it:
Short story

[Papyrsatyr]

Nothing stops you from doing a peer to peer critique of your own stories together. The motto of this place is practically "you scratch my back I scratch yours."

Also drawings should be taken to the artist army for critique. This is mainly for writing.

[maliy]

I would like some critique on my form please!

Username: Maliy

Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1391983&p=41503737&hilit=22#p41503737

Adoption Agency you are applying for: Jelly bean dragons.

Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) Sep 16.

Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM

I want pretty harsh critiques please!

[Tatzel]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
See it? Look up...a little to the right...there it is! Wow!
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1398401&p=41742029#p41742029
What is it:
I guess you could call it a diary. It kind of is...?
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Here