{ ＩＮＫＬＩＮＧＳ } A Thread For Writers

[deer;;]

I suck at first chapters to be honest. x3

I`ll fix it up now~

[team free kick sass]

Hrrrng, just like with le asians story, it doesn't intrigue me much =/, Celestii. I mean, it could flourish into a wonderful adventure with the right author, who could very well be you, but I'm not sure about it, it's just kind of boring, sorry >_>

[deer;;]

I`m trying to figure out how to fix it. xD

I got rid of some of it and changed most if the it`s. I`ll show you when I`m done~

[crescent + cheep]

I suck at first chapters to be honest. x3

I`ll fix it up now~

You are the opposite of me ^^
I'm excellent at first sentences, but the rest of the story is the trouble D:
I want to write. I really do, but my story isn't going well, and argh. I need two xD
Anyone want to read my first chapter?

[deer;;]

I suck at first chapters to be honest. x3

I`ll fix it up now~

You are the opposite of me ^^
I'm excellent at first sentences, but the rest of the story is the trouble D:
I want to write. I really do, but my story isn't going well, and argh. I need two xD
Anyone want to read my first chapter?

Sure, I will. c:

[team free kick sass]

@Fanged- I'd be happy too ^^

[Randy.]

Username: PlagueDoctor
What we will call you: Plague
Will you critique other's work?: Absolutely!
Links to your story if you have any: I don't have any currently...
Anything you want us to know?: I do have a tendency to swear and have a little violence in my stories.

[haadez_]

Could someone read my first couple of chapters of my story and tell me what you think of it? I need someone to critique it before I continue writing.

[deer;;]

Could someone read my first couple of chapters of my story and tell me what you think of it? I need someone to critique it before I continue writing.

I`d be happy to x3

[team free kick sass]

@Plague, you probably are already aware of this, but please note that swears that aren't part of a story are forbidden here [I hate to mini-mod, really, by the way >_>] and everywhere else on Chicken Smoothie. I wasn't sure if you meant you like to swear in your stories or just when posting, so I thought I'd give this heads-up just in case.

Even if you do swear in your stories, it is good to remember that if you are posting them on CS, don't overuse swears and curses, and if you do use them a lot, star them out.

Of course, like I said, you probably already know, but oh well. XD