Goennec and Arbex Fan Club

[Teeze]

That fact that you decided to make her a pet is really of no consequence and does not need permission, as it is really simply another status for them. As long as it is a credible pet scenario and still fits the standards of the species with twists for domestication, it is more than alright. The problem with this particular pen was that unfortunately neither form was valid, as was the very unfortunate case of so many of the goennecs this round. While I am not the type to think longer = better, and I have been very much a fan of quite a few short forms, these need to be properly constructed and give out a proper character essence. Your form felt more like a plotless short story as opposed to a character description, and unfortunately, it left the character bland and without a solid foothold so to speak. LM's form was unfortunately disqualified due to the fact that she did give it a condition that needed permission due to the massive influx of disabling or negative conditions given for the sake of being given to goennecs lately. When turned to yours, however, neither of us felt like the character could be properly grasped.

Thank you Tammanae, I was confused because I wrote the description pretty much the same way I wrote all my other ones that I won with, but now that you mention it I do see how it is a bit vague. I will see if I can reword it so it's more clear. Thanks again.

[.kestral]

Can I have some feedback on my form, its here viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=40888287#p40888287

[Toadfoal]

Ah, it lives! I really need to reply to the RP, I'll remember to do that, hopefully this weekend.

[Tiikeria]

How I feel about Forest Fire, and the story he's giving me:

[Lady Masquerade]

Tiki, all your doing is making me more nervous about your form. xD

[Desmond]

I want to hug Baron, too. <33 He and Toby... I just. I have no words for this kind of cute.

[Tiikeria]

Actually, you're making me nervous, Lady. XDDDD

[Lady Masquerade]

As soon as I saw Baron the first thing that went through my mind was 'Well, I know that B will be going for him.' cx
He is lovely though, those colors are very nice. I like Birdcatcher and Franklin aswell, they are simple but nice Goennecs.

Haha, thanks. ^-^;'' I really expected a lot more competition for him, since he is just one of the most adorable Goennecs I've ever seen. I think it's the eyes, the folded ears, and that blue nose. His face is just heart melting, and really does give lots of inspiration. cx

[.kestral]

B, you have me terrified by the way.

[! october]

I'm super excited to see the results of this round; I really hope that I was able to repair my previous form's issues.

In other news, I recieved some beautiful art of Mikhail from CrimsonCatFish. :D <3