Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[rose;]

Pm me too ^^

[ohbreezey]

Username: Chase the Breeze~; you can call me Breeze ^^
What You'd Like Help With: Probably, plot improving and being more literate.^^;
[strike]Preferred Instructor:/strike]
Activity or Time Zone: I'm in the US Eastern Time Zone- and I'm on throughout most of the day. ^^
Sample of Writing:

The two made their way out of the mall- Louis skipping all the way to the car, Arianna following along with a laugh that could be heard by the whole mall parking lot. Once the two finally got to it, Arianna placed her bag in the back seat of the silver car and turned back around to the passenger's side. "You know, you're a crazy person, Lou." she said, making herself comfortable for the half an hour ride back home to where they were staying. "Crazy in a good way, I mean." she added, turning on the radio. To her advantage, it was her favorite song- Radio by Hot Chelle Rae- and she began to sing along. As the song ended, she turne the volume down. "See, I'm more crazy than you. Maybe we were meant to be." she said with a giggle, and put her small hand thought her dark auburn brown hair. "Nevermind, Tomlinson, don't reply to that." she said, and laughed once more before flooding the car with music once more. She began to air drum in the air.

[city;]

Breeze, I'll steal you for plot development. [HA! Beat Rosie for once. c:]

[rose;]

Breeze, I'll steal you for plot development. [HA! Beat Rosie for once. c:]

Is that your goal? XD

[city;]

0.0 maybe.

Now. Breeze, feel free to PM me.

Update from the poll: in two hours, I shall be editing the forms to fill out. So far, I'm going to be removing the strike option!

[walk.]

Username: Wall This Way
What You'd Like Help With: I,would love help getting for literate to semi lit, also how to keep an rp going!
Preferred Instructor: -------------------
Activity or Time Zone One of the American ones but not sure!
Sample of Writing: This is me trying to be semi lit,

Tide awoke, yet again at a very early time of day: 9:00 am. Well, to her it was early anyway, especially for the first day of summer... Oh summer, here at last, after a not so great summer term, including several face slashes and failing most of her exams, it was a greatly appreciated break from the world, but she knew, tonight, off to Florida! Oh why couldn't she just stay here in Ohio! There was plenty to do... But unfortunately, a list wasn't quite manageable... She fingered her short blue hair, why had she even died it? She had to admit, it wasn't one of the smarter decisions she'd made, but it was either that, or being trapped in a Porto potty, which was then tipped upside down. Incase you hadn't guess yet, Tide is being bullied everyday, practically everyone in the school seemed to have a grudge against her, but being so negative minded anyway, it didn't affect Tide one bit. She thrust off her plain white sheets that had incased her virtually naked body like a cocoon to a butterfly. .

[abandoned.]

I would totally take you in, Walk, but I'm a bit busy nowadays ;n;

dude. city. you need to make the thread for us xD

[walk.]

Oh shame! I can write a lot longer than that but just a basic idea! I am still recovering from being harshly ejected from a Pokemon Roleplay that really wowed me, I was so excited! So I am determined to become semi lit!

[rose;]

I could take you for keeping a role-play going ^^ it's not a long class, but it works xP

[abandoned.]

Oh shame! I can write a lot longer than that but just a basic idea! I am still recovering from being harshly ejected from a Pokemon Roleplay that really wowed me, I was so excited! So I am determined to become semi lit!

I know how some of those rejections feel ;n;

Here's a few tips:

Usually, if you step away from CS, and write your post out first, then type it up, it could end up being a lot longer than what you did c: