[Paradise Lost]

Congrats Stormbird, out of everyone who entered I feel like you showed the most effort into not only putting together a bid, but doing a form that wasn't required! I hope you like him!

[Paradise Lost]

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[Shaynn]

Username: Stormbird
Name: Destiny
Gender: Male. He's male as requested.
Personality: Smart and friendly. Destiny is not afraid to do whats right. He is brave and adventurous. He loves to watch the sun rise and set. He also like to look at the stars and the moon. Destiny can sleep in when he is out late at night. He is hard-working and punctual. But he can also be so absorbed in what he's doing that he might ignore you. Over all, Destiny is a brave hard-working marble cat.
Likes: Sunrises, sunsets, hummingbirds, the moon and stars, blue objects, bright and colourful lights, fireflies, and bunblebees.
Dislikes: Very hot days, foxes, owls, bug spray, crows, anything thats supposed to kill insects, and sharp objects.
Story: "Destiny! Time for bed." Destiny heard his mother calling. It was time to sleep but he wasn't tired. He loved watching the moon and looking for constellations. "Destiny!" This time his mother sounded annoyed. "OK! Coming!" (By the way his mothers name is Primrose) "Destiny, you know that you have to come in at night. I have told you before and I'll tell you again... There are owls out there." "OK, ok. I get it! Night time is dangerous if your not careful!"

"Hi, Destiny." A cheerful voice sounded behind him. Destiny turned to see his friend Rocket, a hummingbird, floating behind him. "Its a beautiful day, isn't it?" "Its a lovely day! So how are you Rocket?" "I'm good, How are you?" "Great! Well, almost great." "What do you mean?" There was a puzzeled look an Rocket's face. "My mother keeps telling me to go inside at night. I really like to watch the night sky but she won't let me." "Hmm, I have an idea! Why don't you sleep at my house tonight! I don't live with my parent you know. We could watch the night sky together! We could stay up as long as we wanted and could have lots of fun!"

"I don't know..." Destiny was asking Primrose if he could sleep at Rocket's place. "I'll only agree if you promise not to go off on night adventures. If I know you tow thats probably what you'll do." "I won't mom. I won't!" "Al right then. But you have to be home tomorrow before lunchtime." "OK. By mom, your the best!"

"Alright. Time for some fun!" Destiny was at Rocket's house. They were deciding how to spend their night together. "You know we could go look around the human campsite..." "Rocket... That sounds... AWESOME! But I promised my mom I wouldn't leave your house during the night." "Oh come on. We're not going to let a stupid promise ruine our fun! Besides, she won't even know."

"Are you sure its safe?" The two friends were at the hman campground. "Its perfectly safe, Destiny. Lets go see if we can find some food." SCREEECH!!! "What was that?!?!" "Oh, its nothing probably just an owl." "Just an owl! Are you made! Those things eat us!" The word were barely out of his mouth before the beating of wings could be heard and talons closed around his back. Destiny let out a cry of pain and dismay before it all went black.

"Shh. I think its regaining consiousness." Destiny heard a voice speaking. "Do you think it'll be OK?" There was a second voice too. There was a male and female voice, Destiny guessed that the male had spoken first. "Are you OK?" The female asked. For the first time Destiny wondered who was talking to him so he opened his eyes and saw two cardinals bending over him. "No I'm not allright! I feel terrible! What about my friend?! He's a hummingbird. Is he ok?" "Your friend is OK. He was safe in side the tent before the owl struck. He flew home a while a go. And of course you'll feel terrible! You just got dropped by an owl from abouve the tree tops. And your wing is broken because of it!" It was the male. Then the female spoke. "I'm Ruby. And this is my mate Spark. What's your name? And where do you live?" "My name is Destiny. What part of the forest is this? I have to get home. My mother must be worried sick!" "We can get you home. You'll have to be carried but you have to tell us where you live." "I live by a small stream in a log covered in moss by a burnt tree." "We'll get you there. Now hold on."

"Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! Where did you find him? What's wrong with his wing? Why does he look so aweful!?" Destiny's mother had been frantic and very grateful to the cardinals for bringing him home. While the Ruby and Spark explained Destiny felt utterly ashamed of himself. Not only because of breaking his promise but making his mother worry do much.

After a few months everything was back to normal. His wing had healed and he flying expertly. He was healthy and strong. He was also wiser. He never lrft the log without telling Primrose and always was home before dark.

Bid: This is my bid! If you don't like it you alter it a bit.
Other: Thanks for reading! And... I can't wait to see him when he's finished!

[Paradise Lost]

Thanks for reading! :thumbup: And... I can't wait to see him when he's finished!

This is a MAJOR WIP. I'll finish soon.

good luck! and thanks
Oh and he's finished but the egg layer is on so its sorta like a surprise. When you win him I take it off so you can see what he looks like

[Shaynn]

What does the bidding star at?

[Paradise Lost]

anything really, you can start it at a 09 rare or a 2012 common i mean I dont personally care

[Shaynn]

OK. I sent a trade.

[Paradise Lost]

yup I got it and thanks for trying out :3

[Shaynn]

Username: Stormbird
Name: Destiny
Gender: Male. He's male as requested.
Personality: Smart and friendly. Destiny is not afraid to do whats right. He is brave and adventurous. He loves to watch the sun rise and set. He also like to look at the stars and the moon. Destiny can sleep in when he is out late at night. He is hard-working and punctual. But he can also be so absorbed in what he's doing that he might ignore you. Over all, Destiny is a brave hard-working marble cat.
Likes: Sunrises, sunsets, hummingbirds, the moon and stars, blue objects, bright and colourful lights, fireflies, and bunblebees.
Dislikes: Very hot days, foxes, owls, bug spray, crows, anything thats supposed to kill insects, and sharp objects.
Story: "Destiny! Time for bed." Destiny heard his mother calling. It was time to sleep but he wasn't tired. He loved watching the moon and looking for constellations. "Destiny!" This time his mother sounded annoyed. "OK! Coming!" (By the way his mothers name is Primrose) "Destiny, you know that you have to come in at night. I have told you before and I'll tell you again... There are owls out there." "OK, ok. I get it! Night time is dangerous if your not careful!"

"Hi, Destiny." A cheerful voice sounded behind him. Destiny turned to see his friend Rocket, a hummingbird, floating behind him. "Its a beautiful day, isn't it?" "Its a lovely day! So how are you Rocket?" "I'm good, How are you?" "Great! Well, almost great." "What do you mean?" There was a puzzeled look an Rocket's face. "My mother keeps telling me to go inside at night. I really like to watch the night sky but she won't let me." "Hmm, I have an idea! Why don't you sleep at my house tonight! I don't live with my parent you know. We could watch the night sky together! We could stay up as long as we wanted and could have lots of fun!"

"I don't know..." Destiny was asking Primrose if he could sleep at Rocket's place. "I'll only agree if you promise not to go off on night adventures. If I know you tow thats probably what you'll do." "I won't mom. I won't!" "Al right then. But you have to be home tomorrow before lunchtime." "OK. By mom, your the best!"

"Alright. Time for some fun!" Destiny was at Rocket's house. They were deciding how to spend their night together. "You know we could go look around the human campsite..." "Rocket... That sounds... AWESOME! But I promised my mom I wouldn't leave your house during the night." "Oh come on. We're not going to let a stupid promise ruine our fun! Besides, she won't even know."

"Are you sure its safe?" The two friends were at the hman campground. "Its perfectly safe, Destiny. Lets go see if we can find some food." SCREEECH!!! "What was that?!?!" "Oh, its nothing probably just an owl." "Just an owl! Are you made! Those things eat us!" The word were barely out of his mouth before the beating of wings could be heard and talons closed around his back. Destiny let out a cry of pain and dismay before it all went black.

"Shh. I think its regaining consiousness." Destiny heard a voice speaking. "Do you think it'll be OK?" There was a second voice too. There was a male and female voice, Destiny guessed that the male had spoken first. "Are you OK?" The female asked. For the first time Destiny wondered who was talking to him so he opened his eyes and saw two cardinals bending over him. "No I'm not allright! I feel terrible! What about my friend?! He's a hummingbird. Is he ok?" "Your friend is OK. He was safe in side the tent before the owl struck. He flew home a while a go. And of course you'll feel terrible! You just got dropped by an owl from abouve the tree tops. And your wing is broken because of it!" It was the male. Then the female spoke. "I'm Ruby. And this is my mate Spark. What's your name? And where do you live?" "My name is Destiny. What part of the forest is this? I have to get home. My mother must be worried sick!" "We can get you home. You'll have to be carried but you have to tell us where you live." "I live by a small stream in a log covered in moss by a burnt tree." "We'll get you there. Now hold on."

"Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! Where did you find him? What's wrong with his wing? Why does he look so aweful!?" Destiny's mother had been frantic and very grateful to the cardinals for bringing him home. While the Ruby and Spark explained Destiny felt utterly ashamed of himself. Not only because of breaking his promise but making his mother worry do much.

After a few months everything was back to normal. His wing had healed and he flying expertly. He was healthy and strong. He was also wiser. He never lrft the log without telling Primrose and always was home before dark.

Bid: This is my bid! If you don't like it you alter it a bit.
Other: Thanks for reading! And... I can't wait to see him when he's finished!

I finished my entry! My story is kind of long but I worked really hard on finishing it! I hope you like it.

Is there an end date for this?

[Paradise Lost]

Your stories wonderfull! I can tell you worked hard on it, and the bidding ends in about a week - 2 weeks.