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by l'amour. » Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:41 pm
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I can barely catch the remnants of a floating memory as it rides the waves of my mind.
I remember the first time I caught her eye. I was the outcast, the Don Juan of the school, always aching for another make believe adventure of mine.
She was an outcast too, but a popular one, like the leader of her fellow outcasts. She was artsy. Talented. Smart. Cute.
But, she was never a possibility for me.
Until one day, when her car broke down in the middle of winter.
I was also a car mechanic on the side of my make-believe escapades, and I wouldn't have saw her if she wasn't slumped by her car, the snowflakes gently floating onto her hair, and me fighting an "enemy" with my crossbow.
Then she heard me, which wasn't a surprise; she used to say I sounded like a tennis player with all my grunts and "uh's".
I swear her eyes lit up like a kid in a candy store when she met mine. Maybe it was because she had found someone to fix her car, maybe it was because of some deeper reason that I hoped was true, maybe it was just her relief at seeing someone.
She rushed over to me, the smile practically falling off her face. "Can you help me? Please?" she practically begs, her liquid brown eyes boring pleadingly into mine.
"Of course," I say with a touch of glee; it's almost Christmas, and I'm definitely in the Christmas spirit; maybe this is Santa's early gift to me?
She watches me as I work on the car, lifting up the hood and tinkering with the engine, finally deciding to make quiet conversation.
"So." She begins rather timidly for someone I thought to be extremely brave.
"Mmmm?" I say, my face still stuck in the hood.
She clears her throat and begins again. I can feel my cheeks heating up to a warm steady blush, but I ignore it as I focus my attention on the car and to what she's saying.
"You're that guy who they say is like Don Juan? Personally, I don't think there's absolutely anything wrong about having a little adventure once in a while," she says slightly matter-of-factly but still kindly. "What's your name again?"
"Zephyr." I respond bluntly. "And yours is Reese, I know. You are popular enough."
She chuckles, and it's like water flowing over smooth river rocks. "That's just a bunch of lies. Watch where the prom king and queen or the most popular girl in 8th grade ends up in the real life. Maybe they should go through an adventure to see what life really is."
I laugh back.
"Hah, you're telling me."
And so began my long and fabled history with Reese.to be continued...
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by vixiebun » Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:19 pm
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by cass. » Thu Aug 23, 2012 9:38 am

eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her dress brushed the muddy road, but it went unnoticed. the breath caught in the highwaywoman's throat as she stared at her victim, resplendent in blue silk. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
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by F r o z e n.R a i n » Thu Aug 23, 2012 9:44 am
Sailor. wrote:
eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her breath caught in her throat and her heartbeat became so loud and fast she feared or would burst rough out of her chest. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
-Sai. c:
Yes X3
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by vixiebun » Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:13 am
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Sailor. wrote:
eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her dress brushed the muddy road, but it went unnoticed. the breath caught in the highwaywoman's throat as she stared at her victim, resplendent in blue silk. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
-Sai. c:
Hey don't ask just do it if u feel like it its your owb desion not thiers if they like great or they don't well thats their porblum for noting see great writeing
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Jessica star and rainbow skittes

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Ine fall eveing two rabbits one was pink with brown and had wings the other ahd rainbow spots kinda oflike skittles thats where it got its name from while the other rabbits name was jessica they were best freidns but secatly they both lved each other very much and would go to the end of the earth for each other ... Courine shall be when i feel like it

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by F r o z e n.R a i n » Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:18 am
Im so lazy lol -///- wrote:= 0 . O ok
Sailor. wrote:
eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her dress brushed the muddy road, but it went unnoticed. the breath caught in the highwaywoman's throat as she stared at her victim, resplendent in blue silk. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
-Sai. c:
Hey don't ask just do it if u feel like it its your owb desion not thiers if they like great or they don't well thats their porblum for noting see great writeing
An fall to reamber

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Jessica star and rainbow skittes

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Ine fall eveing two rabbits one was pink with brown and had wings the other ahd rainbow spots kinda oflike skittles thats where it got its name from while the other rabbits name was jessica they were best freidns but secatly they both lved each other very much and would go to the end of the earth for each other ... Courine shall be when i feel like it
You know, that is true and all, but some people
want others to like and give critique. It helps people improve when tehy want the help, if there's anything they need help on. If they like their stories enough not to need suggestions, that's awesome, but if they want light cxritique and judging, that's awesome, too, that they easily can handle opinions.
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by vixiebun » Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:52 am
F r o z e n.R a i n wrote:Im so lazy lol -///- wrote:= 0 . O ok
Sailor. wrote:
eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her dress brushed the muddy road, but it went unnoticed. the breath caught in the highwaywoman's throat as she stared at her victim, resplendent in blue silk. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
-Sai. c:
Hey don't ask just do it if u feel like it its your owb desion not thiers if they like great or they don't well thats their porblum for noting see great writeing
An fall to reamber

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Jessica star and rainbow skittes

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Ine fall eveing two rabbits one was pink with brown and had wings the other ahd rainbow spots kinda oflike skittles thats where it got its name from while the other rabbits name was jessica they were best freidns but secatly they both lved each other very much and would go to the end of the earth for each other ... Courine shall be when i feel like it
You know, that is true and all, but some people
want others to like and give critique. It helps people improve when tehy want the help, if there's anything they need help on. If they like their stories enough not to need suggestions, that's awesome, but if they want light cxritique and judging, that's awesome, too, that they easily can handle opinions.
Agreed some people do want that

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by rose tyler, i » Thu Aug 23, 2012 12:39 pm
F r o z e n.R a i n wrote:Im so lazy lol -///- wrote:= 0 . O ok
Sailor. wrote:
eliza • beth
highwaywoman • heiress
she rode out into the road, pistol cocked and ready in her hand.
facing the gaily adorned carriage, the young woman raised her arm.
'stand and deliver!'
her voice, though purposely gravelly, was far too feminine for her liking. she pushed her horse further out, into the path of the slowing carriage. the vehicle ground to a halt, the two chestnuts breathing heavily, flanks shining with sweat. eliza raised her eyebrows as a young woman got out. her dress brushed the muddy road, but it went unnoticed. the breath caught in the highwaywoman's throat as she stared at her victim, resplendent in blue silk. the woman was beautiful, dazzlingly so.
somehow Eliza found the voice to speak, but it sounded high-pitched and desperate.
'your money or your life.'
'oh, if it is to be so,' said the woman, calmly looking Eliza in the eye, 'then it shall have to be my life.'
with that, she took a pistol from within the folds of her dress, and brought it to Eliza's head.
'my names Beth, by the way,' she added with a smile. 'and I already know yours, Eliza.'
Should I continue? :3 I know I have a horrible style of wrting, but I've been wanting to write this for a while.
-Sai. c:
Hey don't ask just do it if u feel like it its your owb desion not thiers if they like great or they don't well thats their porblum for noting see great writeing
An fall to reamber

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Jessica star and rainbow skittes

Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Ine fall eveing two rabbits one was pink with brown and had wings the other ahd rainbow spots kinda oflike skittles thats where it got its name from while the other rabbits name was jessica they were best freidns but secatly they both lved each other very much and would go to the end of the earth for each other ... Courine shall be when i feel like it
You know, that is true and all, but some people
want others to like and give critique. It helps people improve when tehy want the help, if there's anything they need help on. If they like their stories enough not to need suggestions, that's awesome, but if they want light cxritique and judging, that's awesome, too, that they easily can handle opinions.
True. I would like to know if anyone was even
Reading my story before I go through all the trouble to type up some more. I mean, why write more if nobody likes it or wants to read it? I'd like to know if people like my story before I continued.
By the way, I like your story, Sailor. It has potential :3
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by vixiebun » Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:00 pm
Space Ferrari wrote:If you ask, nobody is going to say "No" because it would be rude.
Honestly sometimes I feel like telling someone "No don't continue!" just to be a troll.
Soe,times no one responds it makes me feel bad and give up writeing


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