Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[hazelnut.]

Personality.

Thanks ^^

[eden .]

Is there anyone who can help me with improving my writing or developing character personality?

I can help you out with characters and length, if you'd like.

[Caskett]

Is there anyone who can help me with improving my writing or developing character personality?

I can help you out with characters and length, if you'd like.

Sure, thanks!

[free.]

@ an Asian to the knee;
I don't know if saw this or not so I'm quoting it just in case. :)

Username: anonymous. { I usually just respond to Free though :3 }
What You'd Like Help With: Coding, please.
Preferred Instructor: an asian to the knee. Since in fact she is the only one doing coding. :)
Activity or Time Zone: I'm on the west coast time zone in America. So that means I'm three hours behind east coast people. That's alright, though, as I drift on and off CS throughout the day. I'm not always on, but I can shoot replies to PMs and usually get back to you a few times a day.
Sample of Writing:

[Ayngel]

Could someone help me with my character personality improvement? Thats what I'm trying to improve the most, and the size and quality of my post. ^-^

[eden .]

@ an Asian to the knee;
I don't know if saw this or not so I'm quoting it just in case.

Username: anonymous. { I usually just respond to Free though :3 }
What You'd Like Help With: Coding, please.
Preferred Instructor: an asian to the knee. Since in fact she is the only one doing coding.
Activity or Time Zone: I'm on the west coast time zone in America. So that means I'm three hours behind east coast people. That's alright, though, as I drift on and off CS throughout the day. I'm not always on, but I can shoot replies to PMs and usually get back to you a few times a day.
Sample of Writing:

whoop no, I didn't see it. sure, I'll take you on cx

[city;]

Username:
cιтy gιrl.
What You'd Like Help With:
-needs to be more literate-
Preferred Instructor:
Le Asian, or Rose
Activity or Time Zone:
MST [mountain standard time]
Sample of Writing:
Either 'x' in my siggy. Both are long, but I don feel they flow enough.

0.o I am asking for help on this, shmank Choo very much.

[rose;]

ugh >.< You guys kill me. I dunno how to teach that class. Like at all. It's more difficult than I thought .-.

[city;]

[Color=#818181] Shucks >.< I tried. Le Asian, you up to it? I'm difficult ...

All I do is ask them questions to prod them in the right direction. It is harder than your think, though ... [/Center][/size]

[rose;]

Well, thats what I do for plot and stuff, but I can't see that working for literacy >.< I can try and help though, if you really want me to