•¤• The gaze of a whelkon •¤•

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•¤• The gaze of a whelkon •¤•

Postby Twisted_Swallow » Wed Aug 22, 2012 11:36 pm

•¤• The gaze of a whelkon •¤•

Skies break open
To let the son through
As eyes as deep as oceans
Gaze up at you.

Tears, not cried
And words, not said
Fill your soul
And fill your head.

Beautifull beauty
Strong and true
Seems to shine
As it gazes at you.

The gaze of a whelkon
Touches your heart
And puts together that
Which has fallen apart.
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Re: •¤• The gaze of a whelkon •¤•

Postby Twisted_Swallow » Thu Aug 23, 2012 12:18 am

The poem was inspired by this image by wind song
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Re: •¤• The gaze of a whelkon •¤•

Postby Qiokkabee » Thu Aug 23, 2012 2:48 am

I like it ^^
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