Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[crescent + cheep]

@fanged- I'll take you for plot development.

@ serenity- I can do 3-4, chunky paragraphs for a reply where the role-play is moving. However, even in a literate role-play, there's going to be times when anything over 8 lines is going to be total fluff. So... I can help you, but not if you require 4 chunky paragraphs every post.

Thank you!
So... how does this work?

[rose;]

Message me, and we'll sort it out ^^

[eden .]

@fanged: my user is a total troll sometimes =3=
omg I'm waaaaanted. ;-;
okay, well, rose has taken you on for posting. would you like me to take you on for the other stuff?
looks like I'll have to make another class for literacy after all though. we have so many people wanting similar things and I feel like I'm slacking

I'm warning you now fanged: I won't be on consistently until Sunday at best. are you willing to wait? because I'd hate to see you wait. :C

[ohbreezey]

Username: Chase the Breeze~; you can call me Breeze ^^
What You'd Like Help With: Probably, plot improving and being more literate.^^;
Preferred Instructor: The Burning Rose, if that's okay. c:
Activity or Time Zone: I'm in the US Eastern Time Zone- and I'm on throughout most of the day. ^^
Sample of Writing:

The two made their way out of the mall- Louis skipping all the way to the car, Arianna following along with a laugh that could be heard by the whole mall parking lot. Once the two finally got to it, Arianna placed her bag in the back seat of the silver car and turned back around to the passenger's side. "You know, you're a crazy person, Lou." she said, making herself comfortable for the half an hour ride back home to where they were staying. "Crazy in a good way, I mean." she added, turning on the radio. To her advantage, it was her favorite song- Radio by Hot Chelle Rae- and she began to sing along. As the song ended, she turne the volume down. "See, I'm more crazy than you. Maybe we were meant to be." she said with a giggle, and put her small hand thought her dark auburn brown hair. "Nevermind, Tomlinson, don't reply to that." she said, and laughed once more before flooding the car with music once more. She began to air drum in the air.

[zippyzoo77]

I just wanted to inform everyone that I will have limited Internet for the next three days, and therefore I may not be able to respond to things here.

[rose;]

Username: Chase the Breeze~; you can call me Breeze ^^
What You'd Like Help With: Probably, plot improving and being more literate.^^;
Preferred Instructor: The Burning Rose, if that's okay. c:
Activity or Time Zone: I'm in the US Eastern Time Zone- and I'm on throughout most of the day. ^^
Sample of Writing:

The two made their way out of the mall- Louis skipping all the way to the car, Arianna following along with a laugh that could be heard by the whole mall parking lot. Once the two finally got to it, Arianna placed her bag in the back seat of the silver car and turned back around to the passenger's side. "You know, you're a crazy person, Lou." she said, making herself comfortable for the half an hour ride back home to where they were staying. "Crazy in a good way, I mean." she added, turning on the radio. To her advantage, it was her favorite song- Radio by Hot Chelle Rae- and she began to sing along. As the song ended, she turne the volume down. "See, I'm more crazy than you. Maybe we were meant to be." she said with a giggle, and put her small hand thought her dark auburn brown hair. "Nevermind, Tomlinson, don't reply to that." she said, and laughed once more before flooding the car with music once more. She began to air drum in the air.

Oh look at this, someone actually requested me x3
Anyway, I'll take you for both... I don't really have steady Internet time until Sunday, so expect pretty erratic replies until then, kay?

[Ayngel]

Username: Ayngel
What You'd Like Help With I'm looking to add more detail and make my posts bigger, trying to get to a little higher Semi lit at the moment. I also need help with the characters themselves, trying to make them more unique and different, as I noticed that some of my characters fall under certain roles, like the 'quiet one' or the 'cheerfull and happy one'. Sorry if that came out confusing.
Preferred Instructor:
Activity or Time Zone: I am on quite a bit usually, on weekends much more, but now that school has recently started, I won't be on at that time most likely.
Sample of Writing:

Daniel Summers 'Dan, Danny'- Nerd


Dan had woken far earlier than needed to get ready to school, his long brown hair was pin straight and he had dressed in yet another odd outfit. A dull blue, faded shirt that had in bold white writing 'I'm not insane, I just listen to the voices advice' wrote across his chest, the shirt seemed to be about 8 sizes too big for his skinny body. With a pair of very old looking jean, baggy and large with holes in the knees, the frayed edges of the hole showed a little cut on his knee from when something was chasing him in the park only days before, it ended up just being a overly friendly dog, wanting to play. Dan brushed his hair one more time, then reached into the very small glass container, pulling out two small white rats, each about half grown. He opened his other, much larger glass tank, empty besides a fake log and mulch and set them both in. He watched, as suddenly Mia and Lia popped out of the log, hungrily going after the two rats, which tried to run, but first Mia got one, then Lia caught the other one. Danny smiled a little at that, closing the container and picking up his bag. He was all ready to go, and having ate breakfast only minutes ago, which consisted of leftover pizza. He began out the door, waiting at the bus stop for several minutes before the bus finnaly came. He looked back at his small apartment, then hopped onto the bus. As he sat down, he took a quick glance at everyone around him, smiling slightly at the girl who got on next, with bright red hair, and seemed to have been a little late.

[maroon.]

Username: Infinity.
What You'd Like Help With: I'd like help with making my posts longer, and more descriptive. I'm fine with forms, just not with posting. >.<
Preferred Instructor: if applicable. if you don't have a preferred one, strike out. if you have multiple, list them!
Activity or Time Zone: I'm on Mountain standard time, I think it's like an hour or two ahead of Central time?Not sure...
Sample of Writing:
Kelsey looked down at her red converse high-tops, bitting her cheek. She had ever meant to get in trouble, since it was usually the other kids who got blaed.But today, it was her. Glacning up at the principals glaring face, she looked at her hnds in her lap. Though she didn't mind her nails digging into her skin, they were drawing blood.She pushed her hair out of her face, looked up and sighed.

[city;]

OMG! I'm surprised ... I thought this would be a flop a lot sooner. Thank you, CS users!

Ok. Back on topic. I shall be poofing a ton today and tomorrow. Right now, I have to go to the store, and I'm not answering PMs yet. So ... I also want to try something new. Sunday's are my editin days on CS. My break if you please. I wont be posting all that much until the end of the day, ok?

And finally ... I'm adding a class for plot development. So, I shall be working on that later. This is my only post for now. Thanks!

- city.

[eden .]

OMG CITY RIGHT. THIS IS GOING SO WELL I'M GRINNING

but anyways

I'M BACK AND READY TO GO
I've returned from my vacation, and the craziness from my orchestra retreat is over, so I should be available for teaching now. I'll be starting school this Wednesday, so from then on responses might be slow. :C
I think I'll add a "growing users to semi-lit+" class to my classes as well. it seems like that's a popular choice, and I don't want to feel like I'm not doing anything. ^^''