Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[shay ;]

[Is there anyone out thereto help me with my characters? Or just critique them?]

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@ Serenity. - I have a class for pretty posting, would you like me to PM you as well?

➸ Thank you, Zippy! I have two days until i have to leave. C:

[rose;]

[Is there anyone out thereto help me with my characters? Or just critique them?]

I would go to smamm for this ^^

[shay ;]

[ okay thanks! ]

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Username: lady. a m a n t e, but please call me Missy!
What You'd Like Help With: Critique writing
Critique characters
Being Literate
Maintaining a roleplay
Developing Plots
Developing Characters (Especially male, but even female)
Preferred Instructor:
Activity or Time Zone: UTC/GMT +1 hour as for timezone. Activity, I'd say I am online. Sometimes I'm online when I'm really not. I leave my computer on with CS up. But I am going to Italy on Friday, so... I will have only my phone. Plus, I have no idea if there is wifi.
Sample of Writing:

Rosalyn inhaled the cool air from inside the tattoo store and looked around, if she could see Rodney. He was at his usual seat, he was probably in the middle of drawing art on someones skin. She once thought about getting one of this famous tattoo's. Everytime she comes in here, that thought comes back and back. Looking away she saw a few other people giving tattoo's. But then, Rosalyn decided to take another glance at Rodney. She watched him hand the man his, of course wondeful, sketch.

At that moment someone her interrupted her quiet moment. This woman came up to her. "Hi, Blondie. You here for somebody?" she said. Rosalyn looked up at Angela. She also noticed that everybody else was looking at her. She thought of giving a sweet approach, but changed her mind quickly. "The name's Rose, and not really. Just looking for a job." she said and lifted her eyebrow. She had this weird feeling, she did not like this woman, named Angela, as it said on her tag.

Finally, after a few second's Rodney noticed she was here. "What's up?" he asked her. Rosalyn turned to Rodney, then glanced at Angela and then back at Rodney. She bit her lip. "Not much. Looking for a job. You don't suppose I can find something here?" she asked Rodney with a smile. Then again, the thought of getting a god d*mn tattoo. Everytime she see's him. After a few seconds of silence, Rosalyn got her mind of getting a tattoo, even though it was one of her long lost dreams.

Rosalyn looked at her shoes, they were new, she remembered. Stolen from a shoe store of Western avenue. It was a nice pair of summer heals, about two inches maybe three. Not much, though. After dedicating a few seconds to her shoes, Rosalyn looked back up. This time, it was only Angela, who was getting bored and annoyed by her and Rodney, he was at his chair giving a guy a tattoo. The guy seemed annoyed as well, she guessed it was because of the tattoo, even though Rodney gives lovely ones. He partner in crime was interested in the man's grim reaper tattoo, for some reason, Rodney always did that.

If someone hasn't helped you already wiith developing plots, I can do that. :3

Username: HyperJax
What You'd Like Help With:
Critiquing Work
Growing Users from Illiterate to Semi-Literate+
Developing Believable Characters
Developing Detailed Physical Descriptions
And just some miscellaneous help with roleplaying in general ^.^
Preferred Instructor:
Activity or Time Zone: My timezone is GMT, and as for activity, I'm very active. I'm online every day for several hours, unless I'm on vacation. I use several devices, including an iPhone which i carry around with me almost all of the time.
Sample of Writing:
JAXTE

Once Jaxte had reached the dock, he suddenly stopped walking and looked at a new, flashy ship docked a few ships away from his own. Standing in front of the new arrival, there was a male human dressed in a simple armorweave tunic, opening up a cargo hold and hauling out the goods. When Jaxte looked closer, he saw that the "goods" were actually weapons. Blaster rifles, vibroblades, and thermal detonators. The man turned around and greeted Jaxte. "Hello there, sir! Would you like to buy a few, erm, self-defense utilities?" He asked. Jaxte nodded, and took a look. His eyes were caught by a large, almost makeshift looking rifle with a bayonet at the front. "What's that?" He asked. "That, my friend, is a slugthrower. Real good against lightsabers, but they have pretty strange ballistics. They also use, erm, unconventional ammo.". Jaxte thought about Josephine back in his ship, and said "I'll take one."

I can help you with growing from illiterate- semi-literate, and can try adn help with critiquing characters, if you haven't been helped already ^^

@ avarice- what do you need help with, more specifically? I can see if I can help.


Just trying to get everyone some help xP There seems to be a few people floating around with no instructor, or still needing help.

[ET4252]

Username:
a v a r i c e.
What You'd Like Help With:
Honestly I have no real idea. Perhaps some critique would help in finding a proper class I would qualify for.
Preferred Instructor:
Either instructor really that believes which place I would fit in.
Activity or Time Zone:
Eastern Time. I pretty much get on often when I have spare time, meaning everyday just about, but my activity may be limited a bit more when school comes around and drags me away. The best time I can say when I'm online is 4pm - 10pm.
Sample of Writing:
Here are a couple samples of my writing in link forms for different role plays.
Sample One.
Sample Two.

I can help you with a little critiquing if you would like until you find what class you want to be in.

[shay ;]

[ Rose; okay! Thanks!

[rose;]

Send me a message, lady amante ^^

[HyperJax]

I can help you with growing from illiterate- semi-literate, and can try adn help with critiquing characters, if you haven't been helped already ^^

Nobody's helped me with those yet x3 Thanks! ^.^ So, how do we start?

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I can help you with growing from illiterate- semi-literate, and can try adn help with critiquing characters, if you haven't been helped already ^^

Nobody's helped me with those yet x3 Thanks! ^.^ So, how do we start?

Shoot me a message, I prefer to work there :3 Just give me a link to the character you need critiquing on, or something like that, and I'll start with that before the other.