≈WillowClan≈&☼FrostClan☼

[opti-mism]

((I've finished Dawnpaw! I'll make a female warrior for Frostclan as well, because it seems Frostclan needs some more members. ^3^ But i'll make her later, I'll start with Dawnpaw for now, to get her started. :3 ))

[F r o z e n.R a i n]

{ accepted, but I'd appreciate it if you took away the parts saying 'her eyes aren't like anyone else's' and that 'they look like gemstones'. The first one is controlling other player's descriptions in a way, whether it was meant to or not, and the second is slgihtly unrealistic, and not appreciated. OTherwise, it's good ;3 }

[Chameleon]

{ Wait, is Dawnpaw in FrostClan or WillowClan? It says on the form she's in FrostClan... ? ;p }

[F r o z e n.R a i n]

{ Sorry, I got mixed up XD But the stuf I said still applies. }

[Chameleon]

{ Oh, okay. And, yeah, I suppose, but Rose really was just trying to be detailed. :3 Oh, and I really like your new username! ;3 }

[F r o z e n.R a i n]

{ Detailed is one thing. It's another thing when something is controlling what other characters can and cannot lok like, and being a little too detailed ;3 And thank you ^^ }

[opti-mism]

((Sorry, i just try to give my characters distinguishable and precise details. ^-^' I've been developing her for a while, since before this rp and i was looking for one that would be good to work her into. I completely understand where you are coming from, i'll edit the eyes down a bit. It's just, I've rped a lot, and had experiences where other roleplayers directly take my descriptions from eyes, edit them a tiny bit, and make it for their characters, so I've tried to keep them realistic and original. And now i'm just rambling. XD I don't try to restrict what others look like, i just try to make her distinguishable. I'll go back and edit that right away.))

[jarvis.]

(hehe, i've been to so many rp's where there's a she-cat and the description is like, a gorgeous silver she-cat with long shining fur and the fluffiest tail along with eyes that look like diamonds. . . i'd be like. . . that's nice)

[F r o z e n.R a i n]

{ Thank you X3 Lol, I understand completely. I did that exact same thing on my old account, the one I had deleted due to viruses. It was ♥Black-cat-spirit♥, and I kept forgetting not to tone down certain things XD If I see anyone with a description close to yours, I'll let them know ^^

And Zebra, that's ridiculous XD }

[jarvis.]

I hate when people do that, it's annoying, and it makes their characters sound all perfect)