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Postby anomaly. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:50 pm

Raina's Theme song: :P Illusion by Dj Tiesto
The bell rings, I slowly make my way to my first period science class. I change direction and go to my locker to get some books. Having a locker between two guys wasnt so bad execpt if they thought you were crazy Sl*t. I unlock my locker and rab my things. The cute one,Ray, tries to start a conversation.His Brown eyes brighten form behind his glasses as he sees me.It almost makes my heart skip a beat.He was so cute. I could hear his music playing loudly. He then breaks out in a dance. He wanted to show me his new moves.Just as he finshes he asks me if i liked it. I stalk off in the middle of his sentence. I wasnt in the mood to talk to anyone. I hear his locker slam behind me and the footsteps of him catching up.
I will walk you to class.He says.I ignore him even though it was hard. A friend tries to talk to me in the hall. I hold up my hand and ignore her. I turn to my class and open the door. I sit in my usual seat at the back and study for the exam that is coming up. I hear the others chat to their friends. Thats what sucked about this class i had no friends in here, Other than ray but we dont usually talk. I didnt really consider him a friend. The teacher soon walks in and everyone gets quiet. I raise my head to participate in the lesson he was giving. An hour in to the class the P.A system crackles to life.
Code red! Code red! This is not a drill! The class erupts into panic. We all hide in the corner between the two doors. My teacher shuts down the lights and locks the door. A small flicker of fear flames through me. I can hear the voices outside and the footsteps getting closer.I can feel ray getting closer to me.
Its this room sir. They are right outside the door now. The door handle wiggles. a tear streams down my face. I was very afraid now. the door burst open nad a group of people in metal suit walk in. No one can their faces because of the strange helmets they wore. The guns in their hands scare me. A bunch of girls scream. One steps forward and i notice the skull pattern on his helmet.
Raina Jenkins? He questioned. I was pushed forward. He pulls out a gun and shoots me. I yelp out in pain but collaspe to the floor unconious i thought i was dead. I was still aware of what was going on. I can hear that they have left the room and We head down the hall. I hear a door open and close. I know we are outside now. I can hear the roars of strange cratures the sounds of loud guns and bombs going off. If i could cry i would. Soon i come to and can see what is going on. I see strange aliens. I notice i was thrown over the shoulder of the one who shot me.I pound on the persons back. All i accomplish is slicing my hand wide open. I see one of the aliens go inside. I hear the guns inside aswell. I knew what was going on in there. I cry. I watch as they execute one of our principals. I see some other students being killed. I shriek. I throw myself around. the person eventually losses balance and falls over. I jump up and run to the one alien holding the body of my prinicipal. The expression of fear adn pain painted forever on his face. I grab his gun nad shoot it many times. Once it falls dead i fall to my knees and cry. A smaller alien hits me on the back of my head. I fall unconious.

I wake up in a white room with a skull in my face. I scream and skitter away. I fall of the table and shake in the corner. The man moves and places his cold metal hand on my shoulder. I push it away. Surprisingly its heavy. I shake. He then speaks the kind in his voice frightens me.
Please dont be afraid. I shake my head.
Y-You Shot me. I say.He sighs.
We had to make people think you were dead. Dont worry your safe now. I look at him angry. I punch him but it doesnt make a difference.
I wanna go home its safe there. I say. he shakes his head.
Not anymore the Covenant invaded looking for you, and others like you. the only thing that can keep you safe now is armour. Now what colour.he says. I knew i was not going to win this fight. I am now confused.
what is the Covenant?i ask. He shakes his head.
A group of aliens. Mostly Minor Elites, Lots of grunts and some hunters.I frown. He then explains all the different types of aliens and their functions as an army. I nod finally getting it. He asks again.
Now what colour. It doesnt really matter the colour just have one you like and can live with for a while.
White I mumble. I begin to sob as he walks out. He hesitates at the door.
I will bring your armour soon. Then you can meet the others. I nod and go to sleep hoping this is a dream.
I dream of home and how i would be in my bed listening to my mom speak to my little brother or sister. I remember how she used to call me form my room to help them with their homework. Then i begin to think of the dance that was coming up. I wanted to work up the nerve to see if Ray would go with me. I also heard rumors that he was going to ask me. The imgae of the sparkly blue dress that i was going to wear flashed across my mind. If i could cry i would. I wouldnt never see my family again and i would never my friends or ray again. I picture my family being brutally murdered by the so called 'Covenant'. I wake up screaming. Sweat plasters my blonde hair to my face. I begin to cry. I hold my face in my hands. I then feel the armoured hadn on my back. trying to calm me. I also her the sound of a womans voice. I look up to see a blue armoured body. She was thin with a robotic arm. I begin to tremble.
Its alright im here to help you into your armour. She says. I couldnt pin point her accent but it sounded cool. She helps me up and we walk over to see my white armour laid out on a table. she gives me fresh clothes and tells me to take a shower. She shows me the shower and how to work it. I take a shower. afterwards i get in the clothes and she suits me up. She places the helmet on my head. A screen appears before my eyes. It shows me all the things that i could do with the suit. I test it out and follow the tutorials. After the screen disappears the woman is gone. I didnt even know her name. i see The smae skull faced man as before. He holds out his hand for me to take it.
Im Emile by the way. Oh and the woman who helped you in your armour was Kat. Now its time you met the others.Beware some dont speak much.I nod and take his hand. He leads me to the room full of people. Once inside my suit identifies all of them. The one in dark blue was our leader, Noble 1, Carter. The woman from before in a very light blue, Kat, also known as Noble 2. I see the huge one with yellow and red armour his name was Jorge, Noble 5. I glance around and spot some unknown ones. They werent in the system yet.I spot Jun, Noble 3, In the green.He fastens a sniper to his back.Emile must be Noble three. Noble six was in the corner.
I take a seat and look around. They continue as if normal.
So the Covenant have been sighted lately in these areas. Says carter. He shows images on a screen. The last one with a grunt in the corner makes me gasp. I shake and tears roll down my cheeks. Flashes of a war blurr across my field of vision. It was not the screen. I realize i am laying on the floor spasming. The images speed up and i can hear people asking whats going on. No one can answer the question. Finally the image settles. It is me in my red stained armour. I stand in the middle of a circle of my dead comrades. I see also the bodies of the covenant. scattered remains are everywhere. It looks like me in the middle. I have the twisted face of an Minor Elite. The body of a half human and elite. I scream. The image frightens me. I finally see the others puinning me down and tryign to get me to snap out of it. Two men hold me down. Both of which i do not know. The horror of the pictures are gone. I throw them off of me. They go flying and hit the wall. It was very abnormal for me to have that strength.I move so quick i blurr. I hit the wall.
Stay back!!!!I shriek. Emile approaches me slowly. I eye him. He reaches ut for my wrist. Once he grabs a hold he swings me down and i hit the ground. Many people hold me down. I wiggle and look up at carter.
TICK TOCK CARTER!!!!! I am dead and soon we all will be!!!!!I laugh like a mad man. Carter orders them to lock me away. I am dragged across the floor and thrown in a white blank room. I pound on the walls and cry. Emile opens the door. He walks in. I know he is going to ask me what happened. I dont give him the time to ask.
Stay out!!! I dont want to hurt you. LEAVE NOW!!!! He holds up his hands and backs out the door. I kick it and it smashes shut. I dent it so no one can get in. The amazing strength i have is unbelieveable. I break the cameras that watch me. Soon i am crying myself to sleep. I finally fall into a somewhat peaceful slumber.
My vision blurrs and settles on Emile standing infront of me. I shake my head. I didnt want him to know what i was. he comes adn sits beside me. I keep a serious face but the giggle creeps up and leaks out of my mouth. I throw my head in my hands. My laughter grows. He rubs my back and calms me down. I lean forward and hug him. I immidently pull back. I slide back into the corner.
Why do you act so... So weird? Ever since you had that strange attack you have been acting crazy. He asks. I sigh and shake my head not answering. He takes my hand and helps me up. I stand and replace my helmet.
we have to head up to the base in the mountains. The covenant have taken over up there. We need to regain control. I nod and we leave the bank white and now dented room.I finally get to see the others. I hide in the corner. Emile stands with me sensing my unease. I look about listening. The command is giving and we arm ourselves. I grab the heavy machine gun on the side of the helicopter. Emile drives us to the mountains. We are taken underfire. I shoot out at them. We land and i rip off the gun. I jump from the helicopter. I attack and kill many. I drop the empty gun. I turn and see a very lare elite right behind me. His blade catches my shoulder. I look up at him with my mouth wide open. He pulls off my helmet and raises up his knife again. A single tear leaves my eye. Before i could do anything another elite of a higher rank runs over.
No!!! you kill her and we lose the war! IDOIT!!He says loudly. He hits the elite and he hits the ground. The new elite grabs me and throws my over his shoulder. I screech.
Help me!!!!!I yell. I pound on his back. I see Emile running for me. He falls to the ground. I see the grunt who shot him. Emile moves and reaches out for me but we are very far apart.
NO!!!!! I yell and reach for him. I cant see him anymore. I was thrown into a room. I hit my head and pass out.
I jolt awake to the sound of the door breaking in. Four of the 10 unknown 'Spartans' Walk in. That is what we were called now was Spartans. They do not look normal. I get a good look at them. I shriek a blood curtling cry. It was the monsters from the picture. One runs forward and covers my mouth.
Shhhhhh They will hear you!!! You know what you are and we are like you. Do not be afraid. You must have courage we will be here and keep you from hurting the others. Just hang tight and we will take care of you.The strangely distorted female voice seems familar. I frown. She gives me a shot to go to sleep. I nod off into a deep sleep.
My vision blurrs and settles on Emile standing infront of me. I shake my head. I didnt want him to know what i was. he comes adn sits beside me. I keep a serious face but the giggle creeps up and leaks out of my mouth. I throw my head in my hands. My laughter grows. I was back! theyy must have rescued me. I shake and Emile cringes as he sits down and puts his arm around me. I hug him and cry. Those aliens they wounded me and then kidnapped me. Then i met those four that were monsters from the images in my head. I pull myself back and turn from him.
come on we are going to see the othhers. he says. He helps me up and we leave. It seemed like foreer when we reach the room.No one was wearing their helmets. I look around the first face i settle on was that of the girl with blue and black hair. her hair spilled over the suit and her face smiles as she sees me. I remember when i helped her die her hair. It was my friend celina who was like a sister to me. I take off my helmet. Emile takes it from my hands. I run over and hug her. I begin crying.
I missed you so much!!! I thought i would never see you again. I say into her chest.
Stop crying and look around. Look who else is here. she turns me around and i then spot the one that i had always loved. I hiccup and cover my face with my hands. I run to him. I Wrap my arms around ray he holds me tight.
They took me that day too. They took me right after they shot you. I was so afraid that they killed you. I started to cry! Im sorry i didnt tell you i was here earlier. I was told not to. I cry harder.

Why are we here? I ask them afater all my friends show themselves. i hug them each except for brad. I watch celina.
You have special powers. Your the strongest out of all of us. She taps my armour. I step back abit. I pull my face into a frown. things were starting to overwhelm me. My head whirrs. she gives emile a dirty look. i turn around and just as i see his smiling face Brad steps forward with a twisted look on his face. His hand raises and twists. Emile yells out. I want to ru to him but carly grabs me. I cry.
Leave him alone!!! Ray steps forward and fire bursts up out of the ground and shoots toward him. I break from carly. i hear my helmet and emile hit the ground. I yell and the wind raises. Ray goes flying and then i use my mind to do the smae to brad. I hold them up on the wall. I frown. Suddently i am aware of my powers. My legs begin to feel increasingly cold. I look down and ice is crawling up my body. It stops at my neck. I begin to sob.
WHAT THE F*CK IS GOING ON!!!! i begin to freak out. Celina steps forward. she is the one who froze me. i whine and whimper.
Ok im going to start fom the begining. Spartans are humans who have adapted to what they had to endure when the aliens or covenant attacked earth. The Covenant is a group of aliens all different species. They want to kill the humans because the humans want their planet because earth is dieing. Dont you see?? All those disasters happening. The goverment being so secretive. Now there is us. We are strange and have powers as you see. But the spartans are not what you think. Emile lies! He was sent to get you to help them. But our mission is to stop everything. Kill the spartans and the Covenant will leave. Oh yea and i have talked to their leader. We will go with them so our speies can thrive! This planet will die as planned.She says. my eyes widen. I look down at him.
Is that true? he begins to protest but celina silences him. I look down.
I will help you. I say. I release ray and Brad. Ray melts the ice. I look at Emile.
You are discusting. i say.
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby Betta132 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:20 pm

Never seen anything like this, and have a couple questions: So I'm guessing Raina and some others are different somehow? And how could different colors of armor do anything? And aliens? Who is this Covenant? This seems cool, but a little info for people who have never seen Halo or whatever would be nice.
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby anomaly. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:23 pm

Lol yea i kind of realized that. I will add more detail and info no worries! I think i will have a few people taken from her school who are like her. But the color doesnt matter of armour doesnt matter.
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby anomaly. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:42 pm

I Wrote more!!! :D
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby CookieRaider » Fri Jan 20, 2012 4:45 pm

its ok but i have to read more
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Postby Betta132 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:57 pm

Uh, is the last part real or what? :/ bit confused here. It's good though! :clap:
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby anomaly. » Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:11 am

Its real but they told her that they had to make her look like she was dead when they took her. So she said she was dead and soon they will be too.... And yea its just weird like that.. :D if that clears anything up?
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Re: Normal?Nope Not at all....((Could use some more ideas))

Postby anomaly. » Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:49 am

Raina
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(Will come later) Kitty
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Ray
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Emile
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Carly( will come later)
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Brad(Will come later)
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Celina( will come later)
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Postby anomaly. » Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:11 am

I posted a little more and some charrie ref pics.
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Postby anomaly. » Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:54 am

Going to writw more.
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