Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[Khrussx04]

@ C6 Well as far as forms go, I'm not really looking for anything too complex, I can't give you any examples of what I'm looking for tonight, I'm quite busy, but I should be able to have some tomorrow.

@ rose, Thanks! and it's ok if your awkward-Cause I can be pretty awkward as well.

[Smamm]

Hey everyone, Smamm here! ^^

You may or may not have noticed I don't actually have classes. xD I'm here as your personal editor, if you will. xD Just drop me a sample whenever you'd like, and I can go through step by step and explain what is wrong, and how to change things. I can also give tips on how to improve the writing, add more detail, and all that jazz. ^^

[Caskett]

Username: Zenyatta
What You'd Like Help With: Everything! Post length, characters, forms, writing, coding- I guess I just want help in general.
Preferred Instructor: I think I'd prefer it if I was with someone who had seen how I write and stuff before this, like City or Abandoned or Glucose, but I'm fine with anyone, really.
Activity or Time Zone: I'm in the central timezone in the US.
Sample of Writing

Adeline Hitchcock

Adeline turned her head toward Eli as he burst into the room, his jaw was bruising and turning a painful looking dark blueish purple; it would stand out at the party, and she was fairly sure Alex was to blame. The blue haired girl was the only person with temper enough other than Bentley to do something so rash. That brat, hitting her partner before the mission, even if he probably deserved it, was not going to help them any. Couldn't petty revenge wait until afterwards? He seemed alert enough, thankfully, the pain wouldn't bother him too much, but she was worried. Maybe they should get makeup to hide it?
"Hi- Eli, are you okay? Do you need ice or, or something?" Hopefully, he would be smart enough to accept help with the bruise, and not make a fuss about being perfectly fine.

She was surprised that he would touch her with his hip, at first, but the gesture was only to get her attention, and she followed him out of the tension-filled room and into a smaller, cozier one with a single couch next to a fairly large window. Sitting down next to him, Adeline studied the bruise more closely. It stretched from his chin to about 3/4 of the way to his ear. A range of colors swelled under the surface, purples, greens, blues, and it looked painful. " What happened?" she asked him.

[aiu]

Username: Angel&Gail. I am Angel
What You'd Like Help With: Coding and developing characters.
Preferred Instructor: C6H12O6
Activity or Time Zone: I am at Mountain Standard Time (SMT) In the US. During the summer, I spend a lot of my day online (even if my sig lies. It usually means I'm avoiding replying to a roleplay. XD), but during the school year, it gets harder since I also have ballet. Not to mention I have to get my parents permission to get online sometimes.
Sample of Writing:

{{Иιɢнтɛʏɛƨ}}

"So, let go, yeah let go,
Jump in,
Oh well, what you waiting for?
It's all right,
'Cause there's beauty in the breakdown."

Looks: [x]
Gender: Male
Location: Somewhere in the woods.
With: Skypaw
Feeling: Exhausted
Theme Song: "Let Go" by Frou Frou

Nighteyes sighed unhappily as they came upon this subject. "No," he said grimly. "I have not heard from them for a long time." He focused his dark eyes on his moving paws and the forest floor slipping under him. This was not his home, this had never been, and will never be his home. The dead leaves and the fallen sticks were very unfamiliar and unusual, different. After a moment he returned the question to his apprentice, bringing his tired eyes to her, "Have you heard from StarClan, Skypaw," He asked, his heart filling with hope. For a little while, he had worried that StarClan had forgotten about them, even though it went against everything he had ever known.

[Mentally__Unstable]

Username: Mentally__Unstable
What You'd Like Help With: description

Preferred Instructor: if applicable. if you don't have a preferred one, strike out. if you have multiple, list them!

Activity or Time Zone: Central Time Zone
Sample of Writing: (dont have time for a sample will edit when time is enough

[eden .]

Username: Angel&Gail. I am Angel
What You'd Like Help With: Coding and developing characters.
Preferred Instructor: C6H12O6
Activity or Time Zone: I am at Mountain Standard Time (SMT) In the US. During the summer, I spend a lot of my day online (even if my sig lies. It usually means I'm avoiding replying to a roleplay. XD), but during the school year, it gets harder since I also have ballet. Not to mention I have to get my parents permission to get online sometimes.
Sample of Writing:

{{Иιɢнтɛʏɛƨ}}

"So, let go, yeah let go,
Jump in,
Oh well, what you waiting for?
It's all right,
'Cause there's beauty in the breakdown."

Looks: [x]
Gender: Male
Location: Somewhere in the woods.
With: Skypaw
Feeling: Exhausted
Theme Song: "Let Go" by Frou Frou

Nighteyes sighed unhappily as they came upon this subject. "No," he said grimly. "I have not heard from them for a long time." He focused his dark eyes on his moving paws and the forest floor slipping under him. This was not his home, this had never been, and will never be his home. The dead leaves and the fallen sticks were very unfamiliar and unusual, different. After a moment he returned the question to his apprentice, bringing his tired eyes to her, "Have you heard from StarClan, Skypaw," He asked, his heart filling with hope. For a little while, he had worried that StarClan had forgotten about them, even though it went against everything he had ever known.

WOOP

hi there! :D
I'd be honored to take you on. I shall be PMing you momentarily, just letting everyone know you've been taken care of ~

[Vespur]

@C6-Can I have that last character development spot? Pleasie? On my IPod and it does do forms. Will be adding others I would like later. (;

[eden .]

@C6-Can I have that last character development spot? Pleasie? On my IPod and it does do forms. Will be adding others I would like later. (;

suuuure thing.

I AM NO LONGER TAKING STUDENTS FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
however, there is still one spot open for coding. c:

[city;]

Ok, my little happy dancers. I have adopted LoBane, 1helluvabutlr, and Zenyatta for my character thingymabob! Feel free to ask me questions about anything you need to know.

[pokes Zen - Eli says it was the Asian's fault [nudge, nudge, cough, Alex, cough.]

[greenwolf1998]

Username: greenwolf1998
What You'd Like Help With: I'd like some help with character development and also role playing with animals.
Preferred Instructor:
Activity or Time Zone: I live in England so UTC+0. I am normally on at least once a day for an hour plus.
Sample of Writing:

"Guys,I have an idea" Creek growled, padding over to the two male wolves stood before her. Not hearing Creek speaking to them, the males continued there conversation, oblivious to the frustrated wolf behind them. "Guys..Guys!" She barked, jumping up and down,she tried to get there attention but it didn't work. Creek growled in frustration,annoyed that they weren't listening to any of her suggestions. Creek could understand if they thought her ideas were stupid,but they could at least acknowledge her for once instead of ignoring her like they usually did. "I've had enough of this,none of you ever listen to anything I have to say." she growled under her breath before spinning around and stalking of through the bushes,muttering about boys as she went.