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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Skeseth » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:05 pm

@Jendalie: Must be nice being siblings both in college at the same time. ^^ But moving... I hate moving. I know moving all too well and how not only busy but stressful it can be. I'll be moving out of the state again soon whenever I find out which state I want to move to. I did figure with the Fall semester starting up you both will be very busy again too. :(

Thanks. :) If I do feel to share the story whenever I finish, I might link up to the character page or... wherever I might post it if I do... And if I ever try for a rune as well, I'll get my fellow fan's opinion on my stories here. ^^;
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Silverhart » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:14 pm

Whoo! Finally finished my Pictish Rune story! If anyone has the time and inclination, I'd appreciate some helpful feedback a critiques on it. It's quite long though, so I don't want anyone to feel like they have to read it. Just, you know if you want to, read it over, and send me a PM with your thoughts/critiques. I wanna know if it makes sense, and if anything jumps out as not making sense, if the pacing is okay, any weird sentences or things that just aren't working or are confusing.

I'm so self conscious about my writing. XP And I'm really nervous and excited about my form/story and if it's any good. I think the Pictish Rune deserves the most awesome story ever, and I hope I got close to that. But I'm worried it might not be personal enough...

EDIt: Sorry, forgot to say, I posted it up on the Pictish Rune page: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1298856 :D
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby zacherie » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:14 pm

Whelp, if you ever do... -sits with party favors around- I will be celebrating and then reading your stories. I know they'll be awesome ouo

Yawn, I should really sleep xD may -insert name of the ancient that rules eldamore- watch you xP
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Skeseth » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:24 pm

Wow, silverhart. o.o Just took a peek at it. I might go and read some of it if I get too bored of reading up on global warming for my paper tonight. The night is still young XD

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Yawn, I should really sleep xD may -insert name of the ancient that rules eldamore- watch you xP


Night soulBridge~ But you bring up a good question for Benathorn here. I wonder what the religious/faithful aspect of Eldemore is. I know there is a Rune Dragon magic/Non-dragon technology factions going on currently with the bigger cities, correct? But what do the people say or do as far as how these magical creatures affected their culture... Would be interesting to explore that side. :) Traditions and such that go back to their worshiping Ancients?
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Benathorn » Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:22 pm

Skeseth wrote:Wow, silverhart. o.o Just took a peek at it. I might go and read some of it if I get too bored of reading up on global warming for my paper tonight. The night is still young XD

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Yawn, I should really sleep xD may -insert name of the ancient that rules eldamore- watch you xP


Night soulBridge~ But you bring up a good question for Benathorn here. I wonder what the religious/faithful aspect of Eldemore is. I know there is a Rune Dragon magic/Non-dragon technology factions going on currently with the bigger cities, correct? But what do the people say or do as far as how these magical creatures affected their culture... Would be interesting to explore that side. :) Traditions and such that go back to their worshiping Ancients?


Heh, you guys seem to think that I have this all thought out, but I really don't. T_T
I'm sorry, I really have not placed too much thought into the religious aspect of Eldemore. The only time any religion has been spoken about is in the Gargoyle Rune story.

This is just a samll adoptable after all, but I myself just enjoy placing story and meaning behind everything. If you guys really do wish to know more about this world I will try to make a thread later on having a codex and definitions to explain some things. Maybe that will help? I'm sorry I don't have all this thought out already and I know you guys really wish to know more. I'm just a little hesitant to place all this up because I am naturally shy about sharing my imagination with others. ^_^;
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Jendalie » Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:28 pm

I don't think we would use anything close to an existing religion, it would be made-up. We haven't thought it through yet. ^^
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Skeseth » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:44 pm

Sorry Benathorn! Don't mean to put you on the spot or anything. I don't think you'd have every thing about your world down, but I get curious and it might have been in an rp lol

You don't have to do so if you don't want to ^^ you have an amazing imagination, and rune dragons seem to be bigger than you think. I just enjoy this world and helps with stories set in it. Hopefully to rp with y'all someday too. But I don't mean to force you to write something out XD I've enjoyed what you said and it's always been so well written :)

Also sorry if that didn't make sense. For some reason I can no longer get on CS among some other sites except through 3G on my phone. Don't have much data in my plan so can't be on... Hope I figure why it isn't working on my Internet. I got a sketch in of my runes and character and wanted to share.
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby PolyThera » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:53 pm

Bena your amazing. Never feel pressured ok like my mum taught me. Great art takes time and when creating worlds it can take ages. Longer than we wish and sometimes its there in an instant. I love your world and have created many of my own. If you need a hand never ever feel you can not ask me. Ok :D Seriously i am still creating a world. I been creating it since i was 12 and now i am 21 XD So yeah. Just so many things to add and being a creator you can add them anytime you wish. Good luck Bena with your move also. I know the feeling as i just finished my own XD.
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby Tundra » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:57 pm

So noticing how many of the rune bearers here are in their 20's (is 21). Yeh I know how that is Syn + Jessy, I'm still working on one for one of my main characters. Who knows, maybe a rune or two will slip in my story *shot*
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Re: Runes with Spoons||Rune Dragons FanClub

Postby PolyThera » Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:05 pm

Also thought popped into my head.

A All knowing Rune dragon. Olld in looks perhaps similar to an asian dragon. Like beard and such. The Runes refer to him or her as Akru -All Knowing Rune

Colours perhaps are dull ish but when this ancient transform it can be either a male or female perhaps O.O oh now that would be interesting. XD Just throwing it out there.
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