Sunclan~The clan of the streams and islands.~Semi-lit.~OPEN!

[hotaru.]

(Thanks. Bump)

[zippyzoo77]

((You know, we have started...
Anyways, I think I have it all updated, but I just noticed in your forms Wardrobe, that you didn't put Sparknose in the family. It's just a little thing though, so you're still accepted, just thought I should mention something because he is their other littermate.))

[hotaru.]

Name: Sharpclaw
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Age 21 moons
Clan: SunClan
Mother: Lichenpelt
Father: Dirtfang
Other Kin: Hawkpaw, Plumpaw, Brighteyes, Lightningtooth
StarClan Kin: Dirtfang, Lichenpelt
Mate: Brighteyes
Kits: Hawkpaw, Plumpaw
Personality: The same as his name, he has a very sharp mind and senses. Even when he's heard a little rustle
in the bush, he turns around in that direction, his ears perked up. And that's why Brighteyes chose him for her mate.
And it's always right. When it's a rustle, it's a mouse or an animal hiding in a bush eating a nut. But not to like
special senses or something. But he's still very proud of it. Sharpclaw may be angered at many times, but
he loves his kits and his mate. And he never has hatred in his eyes when he's face to face with them.
History: He always wanted to be the best warrior ever from being a kit. So he's practiced by his self,
at night. Attacks, defense. He's been scratching on the nursery den for practice and to keep track of what
he achieved. And it helped a lot. As an apprentice, he was doing everything just perfect. And he
was really proud of his night practices.
Looks :
He has long fur, white and brown. He loves his fur, so handsome since being an apprentice. Sharpclaw
has a long tail. Everything is so soft colored except his eyes. Ice blue. It's blazing through your
pelt. That's one more thing that's sharp.
Apprentice (if you have one, who? If you don't do you want one.): Plumpaw
Other: None.

[zippyzoo77]

((Yea, Wardrobe was noticing a few typos in that list too. I think I've updated it all (and fixed the errors) so now you should be able to do the family part. Appoligies for the errors. Once that's done, I don't see any problems with the form, so you will be accpeted. But please do edit that stuff in first. ))

[hotaru.]

((Thank you. I will edit it soon.))

[zippyzoo77]

Eveningstar

When the warriors started coming out of the den, she immediately started assigning patrols. "Sharpclaw, Twigsnap, Tulipblossom! She called from across camp. "I'm leading a patrol to the Treeclan border to see if we can get our territory back peacefully, you're coming with me, one of you go get Hawkpaw and Plumpaw from their den. Sparknose, I want you to take whoever you need on the hunting patrol for today, make sure to take the apprentices with you. Petaldrop, I want you to take Viperpaw and work on her hunting and swimming skills, make sure she is good enough to be able to carry a kit safely from the water, with this flooding happening, I want everyone able to do that." She said in a very official voice.

[hotaru.]

Sharpclaw nodded and bounded to the apprentice's den. "Is any cat willing to go to a patrol to the TreeClan border with Eveningstar and the others?" he called out to Hawkpaw and Plumpaw. His nose twitched in annoyance that they weren't waking up quickly enough. He muttered a word under his breath and began shaking the apprentices. "Wake up! Patrols!" he shouted.

[Steamturtle]

Twigsnap looked up. He stood up and arched his back in a stretch; he had been laying just outside the Warriors' den, in a nice warm ray of sunshine. He was in an increasingly bad mood. He had barely been able to sleep for a couple of nights, but refused to go to Flowertail, and refused to show his weakness. He was a warrior, he should suffer in silence. He padded slowly over to Eveningstar, then sat down beside her and wrapped his tail around his paws. "Those ignorant Treeclan cats," he growled. "They should learn to stay out of our territory!"

Dawnfire woke up and stretched her paws out, flexing her claws. She sat up and started licking a few scraps of moss out of her fur, then turned when she heard Eveningstar giving out commands. She bent her ears back embarrassedly when she realized Eveningstar was doing what she was she was supposed to do. She got to her paws, angry with herself, and bounded out of the Warriors' den. "I can come with you," she meowed to Eveningstar.

[hotaru.]

Sharpclaw bounded to Eveningstar. "The apprentices won't wake up," he reported. He flicked his ears towards the snoring apprentices. He then glanced at Twigsnap, nodding. "Those furballs don't know how to be a real wild cat. Always messing up things, ignoring borders," he muttered. He glared at the TreeClan's directions, his eyes narrowed down. Standing up, he whipped his tail down angrily, with a thump. Rocks hurried out of his way. Twigsnap's in a bad mood. Did he have enough sleep?

[zippyzoo77]

Eveningstar

"Actually Dawnfire, I was wondering if you felt up to taking the other border patrol to the Nightclan side of things." Eveningstar said, not wanting his supposedly peaceful patrol to become too large and end up looking like an invasion force. He wanted to run into a Treeclan patrol and ask for their territory back so that they could move all the cats to the higher ground, not scare them into giving up their territory with a large patrol. They already had six cats, and that was a few more than enough.