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Rain by MoonApple

Artist MoonApple [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 3 minutes
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Rain

Postby MoonApple » Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:43 am

I don't like how it turned out, but...

If this doesn't belong it intermediate, that's fine just say so cuz i feel weird having it here

Well, comments appreciated
& the timer is all-knowing, took about 45 minutes, i was on youtube and deviant art <3
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Re: Rain

Postby blueshadowmoon » Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:48 am

This is pretty good, it just needs a little tweaking. The background's better than anything I could have drawn, and I love the iris in the eye.
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Re: Rain

Postby MoonApple » Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:52 am

Any tweeking suggestions?
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Re: Rain

Postby supernatural-rocks » Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:53 am

WOW um wow
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Re: Rain

Postby blueshadowmoon » Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:00 am

Moonacre wrote:Any tweeking suggestions?


The ears are up toward the top of the head and it's head looks a bit well rounded, a wolf's head is somewhat flat at the top but with a slight slope toward the neck and muzzle. The nose is hard to draw, it's sort of shaped like a dog's or a mushroom that was cut in half as a different way of remembering it. Again though, it's pretty hard to draw the nose, especially if it's from a side view.
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Re: Rain

Postby MoonApple » Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:58 am

Ok, thanks so much!
Once i'm done with some other stuff i'll do that

@ginga d weed: Thanks : )
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Re: Rain

Postby onastick123 » Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:04 am

i think it looks good !
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Re: Rain

Postby MoonApple » Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:37 pm

thank you!
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