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Feeling unconfident. Your opinion please?

Postby OCeanic Vista » Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:07 am

If I posted my story on here would anyone read it? I'd like criticism for it but I think if I tried nobody would read it, and...well...you get the picture.
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Re: Feeling unconfident. Your opinion please?

Postby Fully Alive » Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:11 am

I'd read you're story Alphie :) and I would give you constructive criticism, No need to feel un-confident :p
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Re: Feeling unconfident. Your opinion please?

Postby OCeanic Vista » Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:14 am

Thanks. I really feel better now. Although I need to finish typing chapter one (it's extremely long) and I'll probably first post my pics (probably made using the Lunaii Dollmaker) of the characters plus their descriptions.
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Re: Feeling unconfident. Your opinion please?

Postby Fully Alive » Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:15 am

Cool, Just tell me when you've finished and I'll read it :)
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Re: Feeling unconfident. Your opinion please?

Postby OCeanic Vista » Thu Apr 08, 2010 8:07 am

Okay, I'll PM you when done. :)
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