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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zitface » Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:03 am

Really? It must've taken place in Ohio in that town because that story centers around an actual object that exists (or existed, at they may have destroyed her) and a grave of two real people. That or the one you heard is extremely, verily, barely similar.
I'm completely serious too, I doubt there's another angel with clipped wings, no head, and sawed off hands anywhere else, that physically exists/ed.

I've run out of stories that I like. I'll slink off until I find some more.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Ghost Fox » Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:29 pm

Awesome, Scary stories
but there should be one
that will scare the socks off the reader
so that they wont be able to sleep again
a scary story should be Very scary where they cry after reading it
THAT WOULD SICK (COOL) Man
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Losberry » Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:03 pm

me and my friend, stardust, were walkinking to a highschool near her house and we were just saying how we wanted something weird to happen to us,

THIS IS A TRUE STORY!

tonight is july, friday the 13, lol weird right, and we were reading our books and they were about werewolfs, and in ones of the books there was cherry popsicle sticks and at the school, we found two popcicle sticks just like in the book that we were reading! it was like we were following a maze or into a trap, then we heard howling and growling and snarling and barking coming from EVERY direction, then it gets really weird, things start to disapear and others reapear everywhere! one second a telophne would be on the table, we walk by again and it would be tangled up in string to the blinds! lights went on in the rooms when no one was there! but it was weird, it was like only ones light and it was usually in the front of the room. then there were some trophies the were gone and the windows were covered by paper! even the door! we could even feel that things were different around, the rain went from pouring to nothing at all within a matter of seconds.

the sky was a orangey yellow color and lightning and thunder went on so it was the perfect day for this! stardust said if she saw a black dog that went with the story she was reading, she would scream, and we saw a lady walking a big black poodle, and then she came by with a yorky that was the same jet black! it was like they were following us, ones second, the would be walking behind a corner, we walk toward the road and boom! there they are! on the other side of the street!

then we walked across the bridge to the lunch room and in the mud under the bridge was big dog prints! and two inch long claw marks! and some shoe prints but that was the only normal thing, the shore prints.

then there was this jeep that kept circling the parking lot and would stop and stare at us! the people were around the ages of 30 year old and a 60 year old was my guess. and they kept on circling until we left. then there was people playing soccer that were not there when we turned back around from the hall ways! and in the story, sisters red (the story sd was reading) the sisters rosie and scarlet had the same heart beat for the reason of the werewolfs and me and stardust did too! she was seeing big dark shadows of dogs and people everywhere! it was weird!

and on the garage of the baseball field, she heard a lock click and the door was locked and on the sides were big slashes and gashes that could not have been done by hand! metal vents were dented to the point of breaking open,the wind catcher went crazy even though there was no wind, which was weird due to the weather, and all my instinks told us to do was run and at the same time find out what was going on,
we found torn up caution signs in a garbage can near the lunch hall, near the popcicle sticks, every where we went we found something out of place, different or just plain wrong! :shock:

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:28 am

That seems SO SO fake to me... but cool
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nyxy » Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:14 am

metalwolves wrote:
alyworld wrote:me and my friend, stardust, were walkinking to a highschool near her house and we were just saying how we wanted something weird to happen to us,

THIS IS A TRUE STORY!

tonight is july, friday the 13, lol weird right, and we were reading our books and they were about werewolfs, and in ones of the books there was cherry popsicle sticks and at the school, we found two popcicle sticks just like in the book that we were reading! it was like we were following a maze or into a trap, then we heard howling and growling and snarling and barking coming from EVERY direction, then it gets really weird, things start to disapear and others reapear everywhere! one second a telophne would be on the table, we walk by again and it would be tangled up in string to the blinds! lights went on in the rooms when no one was there! but it was weird, it was like only ones light and it was usually in the front of the room. then there were some trophies the were gone and the windows were covered by paper! even the door! we could even feel that things were different around, the rain went from pouring to nothing at all within a matter of seconds.

the sky was a orangey yellow color and lightning and thunder went on so it was the perfect day for this! stardust said if she saw a black dog that went with the story she was reading, she would scream, and we saw a lady walking a big black poodle, and then she came by with a yorky that was the same jet black! it was like they were following us, ones second, the would be walking behind a corner, we walk toward the road and boom! there they are! on the other side of the street!

then we walked across the bridge to the lunch room and in the mud under the bridge was big dog prints! and two inch long claw marks! and some shoe prints but that was the only normal thing, the shore prints.

then there was this jeep that kept circling the parking lot and would stop and stare at us! the people were around the ages of 30 year old and a 60 year old was my guess. and they kept on circling until we left. then there was people playing soccer that were not there when we turned back around from the hall ways! and in the story, sisters red (the story sd was reading) the sisters rosie and scarlet had the same heart beat for the reason of the werewolfs and me and stardust did too! she was seeing big dark shadows of dogs and people everywhere! it was weird!

and on the garage of the baseball field, she heard a lock click and the door was locked and on the sides were big slashes and gashes that could not have been done by hand! metal vents were dented to the point of breaking open,the wind catcher went crazy even though there was no wind, which was weird due to the weather, and all my instinks told us to do was run and at the same time find out what was going on,
we found torn up caution signs in a garbage can near the lunch hall, near the popcicle sticks, every where we went we found something out of place, different or just plain wrong! :shock:

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That seems SO SO fake to me... but cool


Same :I

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Losberry » Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:03 pm

you guys can say it was fake all you want but just remember, you were not there,
you can't prove anything ,
and that if you knew where i lived, you would understand,


we went back again today, for all of you who care :D , we went back and, it wasn't as creepy as it was last night (probably cause it was not dark today) but it was still strange, we took this book with us that stardust has that she made and it has a bunch of creatures and cryptids inside that she wrote about A LONG time ago. and inside it said she berried a flower ( plastic flower) out side behind the bath room, and if you dug it up, it would make weird things happen,
we were just playing a game and we thought what if this did happen ( not at the same time but before we went to the high school) well when i was little i had and imaginary friend named crissy that i called my gardian angel because i would wish for something ( something not like i wish the sky would rain chocolate, something reasonable) and it would happen, well i wished and it happen apaeently,

there was no ones at the school but the speakers kept going off making these bird sounds but like,some birds yelling and fighting with each other, and every single time that happen, something else would happen, some ones would walk by and stare at us like this o.o, or, ( and this i thought was really weird ) we would walk around the school and when we came back to the outside lunch tables, there was this weird, random brick wall right there! and im pretty sure it was not there earlier cause the man who was staring at us came from that was and there was no random brick wall,
and tables were missing, the table that we sat at to read our books ( sisters red and the warriors) was gone.... i mean it all does seem un believeable when i say it aloud to myself and or write it down, but i swear, i got home from her house and was thinking about it and it almost made sense, we made the wish, it is all explained in the book and i mean, ...... it was weird..... i think i might make a book about it lol
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:18 pm

( maybe but im not covinced realy. but it not my story! )
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby z-girl » Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:01 am

i made this up so it might not be scary

this is a newspaper cliping from 1991
************************************************************************************************************************************************************** On june 11 1991 a young girl was killed at her home in england police are investigateing who did it *

******************************************************************************************************************************************************&*****


A boy and his familey have moved into that same house. The boy (lets vall him PJ) went on the internet to find reserch on his house.PJ found that a ghost was in his house. Bute not a normal ghost its onl the shadow...

need to finish later...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby the crown, » Mon Jul 16, 2012 12:07 pm

These are great guys! Keep it up!!!! :)
hey y'all!
it's been a fun ride but i am signing off.
thanks for all the fun i had on here!
xoxo crown
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpy• » Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:02 pm

alyworld wrote:ok, listen here guys! especially you metalwolfs
the stories here are stories, real or not! if you don't have something nice to say, bite your toungh and let people be happy and not try to ruin other peoples day! even though you might think it doesn't hurt them, it very well, could! so...
when you comment on these i would have a little faith in every ones to be nice! and if your being bullied on line, don't delete your acount, show them you don't care what they have to say about you, or what you write! thank you to those who actually took the time to read this, i bet more than half didn't... XP

I haven't seen a single person "bully" anyone else. It's called critique. If you post a story and can't handle critique, then you shouldn't post at all.
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