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Should AJ Have a sequel?

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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Thu Jul 12, 2012 8:19 pm

Bump!
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Luna~tic » Thu Jul 12, 2012 8:45 pm

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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:02 am

O.M.G I just had the most brilliant idea ever.... Its a surprise though. It will be released in about 10/15 entries time *me think* :3 Heres the next entry :3

Entry 14 (STILL in the unknown room)

"So heres the girl who so badly doesnt want to be saved." The starnger said in a cool voice.
I eyed him warily. In my current situation, I dont trust anyone.
"She doesnt trust us, Leader." Scarlet spoke up.
"For the last time you girls, call me Camilla or Cam" Camilla said.
She seemed to easy going. I already disliked Camilla.
"So does she speak at all Lia" Camilla asked.
"She does, but either the message we have been sending her have finally got through or she is extremely angry." Lia replied cautiously.
"Whats her name?"
"Her name is Ash, Camilla" Summer spoke up.
"Thank you Summer. Now Ash, tell me why you dont want to be saved, it intrests me." Camilla asked cruely.
"Because, i dont need saving! What dont you get about that? My life was perfectly fine till you took me away from what i knew!" I shouted.
"Hush, child. You have yet to discover what you are."
"Then tell me."
"Its a long story so here it is; you are and extremely rare kind of dog. There are only 12 left in the whole universe Each of these dogs have a special power no other dog has. You are one of them." Camilla paused for a second then continued."And there is a kind of dog in the world that wants to drain the twelve of thier powers. We call them the ShadowSouls. Your type are named as ShadowSpirits so there is a confusion. If the get their hands on the Twelve we are all doomed."
Great, a fairy tale ending.
"And what does that make you?" I asked.
"Everyone on the Order is a Keeper. A rare race but not as rare as the Shadows and the ShadowWalkers. Our job is to protect dogs from the ShadowSouls." Camilla replied.
"Right, and where are the other eleven ShadowSpirits?"
"Thats the thing, you see, the Shadows have them." She said weakly.
Great, just great.


Hmmm a long entry with lots of conversation, my best entry so far *me think*
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Quiting » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:50 am

This is a little confusing. :? But I like it.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby star star. » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:16 am

Cool! And for some reason, I like it more. Reason? Cuz it's confusing and I understand it. Is it coming frm me writing. My journal?





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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby [Braveheart] » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:28 am

Wow, thats amazing!
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please? I am
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I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
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heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:47 pm

*bows thank you thank you* I'm not actually sure where i got the idea for confusing from... i think it came from reading some of the Vampire Diaries books *im addicted to them* other wise it comes from the dreams i have in my sleep :3 *those are good dreams too*
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:48 pm

Somewould say my brain loves me but i say it hates me... its already thinking about sequels D:< naughty brain. Heres the next entry... courtesy of my brain *curses*

Entry 15 (Still at unknow place)

Great. So I am the only one of my kind not captured by the bad guys. Brilliant. Exellent. Perfect. AJ, i wish you were a person....

"Some protectors you guys are. I, as i said earlier, am out of here." I said.
"At least see the poeple who wanted to meet you before you go." Camilla said weakly.
"Fine, but make it snappy."
"Gosh Ash, you really are as mean as they say."
I froze. I knew that voice anywhere. I turned around slowly, hiding the shock from my face.
"Blizard!" I shrieked with joy, before i tackled her.
Yep i stole that method from Summer. That thought brought be back to memories of the days before this happend. Oh Aj, how it hurt.
"What are you doing here?" I asked Blizard.
"I am another one of their charges. After they were finished with my training they let me go, on one condition. That I'd watch out for you." She explained.
"Your sister was one of our bigest sucsesses." Camilla pointed out proudly.
"Blizard, If i am the last one of the twleve who are you?"
I had to ask, it was bugging me.
"I am a MoonDancer. We are a rare kind, but not that rare. We have minor powers of the moon and the tides." Blizard exlained. "Dad was also one so was Mom, but she turned to the ShadowSouls, away from the ShadowSpirits."
"Then why am I the only ShadowSpirit in our family?" I cried out, confused.
Blizard sighed heavily.
"Because, Ash, MoonDancers are half normal and half ShadowSpirit. But for some reason you were born full blooded. We think its the mixing of two MoonDancer's bloodlines." She paused. "Because i have more ShadowSpirit blood than most. Thats why i needed saving. Why you need saving."
"Thats enough for now, there are still 2 more people who want to speak to her." Camilla interupted.
I dont think she wants me to know the full story. She is trying hard not to let me find out.
Blizard stepped out of the way and someone else took her place.
This dog was different from the others I have seen before. It looked like it had steped out of a fairy tale.
"I'm Jade Moon, but you can call me Jade" Jade said.

Its getting too long Im gonna have to continue in another post.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby star star. » Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:52 pm

F you saw e first book of TJOG, I wrote LONG entries. Don't be scared to make it LONG!!!!





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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:47 am

Ok be prepared.. this ones gonna be long....ish

Entry 16 (still at unknown place o.o)

Jade Looked alot nicer than Camilla and the vice leader guy. Well AJ, maybe my life is turning out to be better than I expected.

"You must be the ShadowSpirit Camilla told me about." Jade continued without waiting for a reply.
"Yes I am." I said warily.
She laughed, noticeing that i wasnt that trusting.
"Dont worry, you can trust me, after all, we are related."
That got my attention. Was she a secret sister? A cousin I didnt know about? My mind was a tangle of thoughts.
"How?" was all I said.
"Well, I'm your father's sister, but you dont remember your father so you wouldnt know about me."
"Yes, yes, she gets it Jade. Just get on with the explanations." Camilla interupted impatiently.
"Well anyways, your proberly wandering what I am." Jade said, completely ignoring Camilla.
"Go on, dont stop for the sake of silence." Scarlet spoke from the background.
I had completely forgoten she, Lia and Summer were there.
"Well, So far you have the Keepers, ShadowSould, the ShadowSpirits and the MoonDancers. But there are atleast seven different kinds of dogs. There is no such thing as a normal, does that surprise you?" Jade paused, they alsways do that." Well the closest to normal you can get is to have the power of your kind to be dormant in your blood. Sorry I had to explain that first. Now I can tell you what I am. I am what they call an Angel of the Air. We rule the skies and ride the winds." She smiled at saying that.
"And whats that got to do with me?"
I ask the worst questions ever.
"Well, as your fathers sister, one rescued by the Order, I have been put in charge of training you with your powers."
"Yay.'''
i am really unenthusiastic.
"Well I'm done here. Camilla will introduce you to your last guest." She spoke as she stepped back, just as Blizard had done.
"Well, er, he is running a bit late. He was assesing Shadow Willow and Night Angel on their combat skills." Camilla spoke nervously, like as if I might run away if the next guest didnt come soon.
''Shadow and Night are done with their assesments, Cam. They passed with flying colours." A voice spoke from behind me.
"Oh good your here." Genuine relief sounded in her voice.

so much for longish... this is all i had time for...
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