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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:12 am

metalwolves wrote:( im not sure.. the auther was always scared though is what i heard. i don't think any of theses are )
"The Girl in the red cape"

A little girl’s parents went out for a business dinner so they hired a babysitter to watch her.

“Can I have some ice cream?” the little girl, Holly asked after supper.
“Sure” the babysitter, Beatrice said. “Where’s the freezer?”
“In the basement, so are the nuts, cherries and candy and stuff.”

When she went down to get the ice cream, she looked out the window to see a little girl standing outside. This didn’t strike her as too suspicious and she simply brushed it off.

After she had given Holly her ice cream, Holly asked, “Can I have some hot fudge on this, please?”
“Course,” was the quick reply.

After Beatrice went back down into the basement to retrieve the hot fudge, she looked back out the window to see the same little girl, only wearing a red cape. She absentmindedly wondered if the girl was playing dress-up as she trudged back upstairs.

“Got it,” she deadpanned after setting the hot fudge in the microwave and putting the thick chocolate goop on the ice cream.
“Can I please have some nuts on this please…?”
“Really?”
“Puh-lease?”
“Fine…” she sighed already heading back down the stairs. As she got the nuts out of a small cabinet in the wall she looked back out the window to see the same little girl in the red cape, holding a knife.

As she ran upstairs she decided she was calling the police.
“Ooh Thank you!” Holly squealed happily from her perch on her pink Disney Princess booster seat.
“Uh-I-I yeah. Hey, Holly, I need you to-“
“Oh no! Can I have a cherry on top, please?”

Not wanting to alarm Holly, she decided that she would go get the cherries, then call the police after locking herself and Holly in the bathroom. There’s no way the little girl could get inside if the windows and doors were all locked.

After slowly descending down the stairs, she opened the freezer with shaky arms.
Daring to peek out of the window, she closed her eyes before staring out it.
The same little girl, in the same red cape, holding the same knife was there. Only the knife now had blood on it.

Running up the stairs, scared of what might await, she checked on Holly.
Holly was dead, a small pool of blood forming on the floor under her.
She ran into the bathroom and locked the door behind her before dialing 911.

When the police arrived, the tearful mother and father were with them. The mother approached Beatrice, sobbing uncontrollably. “What happened?”

“Oh God- I’m sorry oh God! I-I saw this little girl with this red cape and a knife outside your basement window!”

The mother said, “We-we don’t have any basement windows, only mirrors…”


I posted that one too. My friend told it to me. I like it, it's not scary, but I like it.


EDIT:
Oh, and about Slenderman..I didn't mean to cause a fight, that is for sure. I was just saying the one I had heard. And by 'darkness', I meant he could actually turn them into these actual arms...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:16 am

~The real Lionpath~ Will you tell me a story??
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:17 am

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:28 am

Fog Lights:

Julia was heading home after her High-school reiunion. She hopped in her car and started driving. A semi pulled up behind her and followed her around. Every few minuts, It would flash it's Fog Lights. It started to freak her out. She turned onto a back alley to take a short-cut. the semi followed her. and it kept flashing its lights. finally, when she got home, she ran into her house and called the cops. When they came and were about to arrest the trucker, he opened up the back door of Julia's car, they saw a phsyco murderer, with a butcher knife. the man had been saving her life
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Squid-a-roni » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:36 am

metalwolves wrote:(true story this time)
"Rose"



All i want to say is i know you alreeady went through this but this Rose one i posted a few pages back when oyu started posting

And two the one wiht you bff psoted it on a website was not true for you i saw it on a million other websites over many years you are i am soryr to say lieing a bit
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:39 am

okay...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zitface » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:50 am

Metalwolf, I've noticed you've been increasingly double posting, so please do not do that. Edit your original post to put more stories in, and if there's a person who posted after you, then it's okay to post, well, another post. Double posting is just really irritating.
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