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:3 by OceanBlast

Artist OceanBlast [gallery]
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:3

Postby OceanBlast » Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:38 am

Just a sketch of some random animals. Will do a few more random sketches of animals soon.
Can you guess what they are? Not the certian breed, but just the species. I would also like some critisisum. ^^
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Re: :3

Postby StarHorse » Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:54 am

I like it!
Hmm.. the bird is a gull of some sort? or some sea bird maybe... a bird of sorts! XD
HORSE XD
And wolf/ canine/ jackal?
I'm not good at critique... hmm.
The bird is overall pretty good. maybe make the next merge into the body a little more, that's all :3
the horses head is a bit large, and the leg is a little too far up into the body. But the outline is pretty good though :3
And I'm assuming the canine is a jackal... or a wolf. It reminds me of a jackal because of the more pointed snout and large ears, wolves are a bit, not stubby, but they merge a bit more than a jackal. The eyes and body is great though!

Hope it helps a bit ^^
Sorry if I sound too pushy :(
Great drawing overall though! :3
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Re: :3

Postby OceanBlast » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:05 am

StarHorse wrote:
I like it!
Hmm.. the bird is a gull of some sort? or some sea bird maybe... a bird of sorts! XD
HORSE XD
And wolf/ canine/ jackal?
I'm not good at critique... hmm.
The bird is overall pretty good. maybe make the next merge into the body a little more, that's all :3
the horses head is a bit large, and the leg is a little too far up into the body. But the outline is pretty good though :3
And I'm assuming the canine is a jackal... or a wolf. It reminds me of a jackal because of the more pointed snout and large ears, wolves are a bit, not stubby, but they merge a bit more than a jackal. The eyes and body is great though!

Hope it helps a bit ^^
Sorry if I sound too pushy :(
Great drawing overall though! :3


All correct ^^
And yes, you're right, I was trying to draw a wolf, but it does actually resemble a jackal
I'm the worst at drawing horses >.<
Oh, and thankyou alot for the tips. I was actually hoping for some tough critisisum ^^
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Re: :3

Postby StarHorse » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:18 am

OceanBlast wrote:
StarHorse wrote:
I like it!
Hmm.. the bird is a gull of some sort? or some sea bird maybe... a bird of sorts! XD
HORSE XD
And wolf/ canine/ jackal?
I'm not good at critique... hmm.
The bird is overall pretty good. maybe make the next merge into the body a little more, that's all :3
the horses head is a bit large, and the leg is a little too far up into the body. But the outline is pretty good though :3
And I'm assuming the canine is a jackal... or a wolf. It reminds me of a jackal because of the more pointed snout and large ears, wolves are a bit, not stubby, but they merge a bit more than a jackal. The eyes and body is great though!

Hope it helps a bit ^^
Sorry if I sound too pushy :(
Great drawing overall though! :3


All correct ^^
And yes, you're right, I was trying to draw a wolf, but it does actually resemble a jackal
I'm the worst at drawing horses >.<
Oh, and thankyou alot for the tips. I was actually hoping for some tough critisisum ^^


yay im not harsh lol ^^
Glad it helped ;3
Youre welcome ^^
✪i rarely use cs nowadays,
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✪i'm really not on CS anymore, though i may set up some way to give away my pets since i'm not doing anything with them
✪i'm in college now but was on this site a lot for a few years. had a lot of fun, made friends and art, and i'm thankful for it. it was a good time : )
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