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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Puzzles » Sun Jul 01, 2012 11:25 pm

((Okay, I don’t know if this one is real or if it’s been put up already, but here goes.))
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There once lived two poor children named Tommy and Ally. Their parents had died long ago and they didn’t have any money to buy food, so they went down to the cemetery and dug up the fresh graves before eating the liver of the newly departed. One cold winter’s night, Ally and Tommy didn’t have any food. Tommy offered to take a look around the cemetery for fresh graves and left Ally at the front gate. Tommy looked around the cemetery, but nobody had been buried in a while. Tommy returned to find that Ally had passed away in the snow. After a few hours, Tommy grew more and more hungry. He turned to where Ally lay dead before finally deciding to eat her liver so he wouldn’t end up in the same state as she had.

After a few years when Tommy had grown up, gotten a job and now lived in the fifth house of his street; he lay awake one night where sleep eluded him and in his ears he heard a whispering, sing-song call.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m in the cemetery.” Pretending it was all in his head, he rolled over and soon fell asleep. The next night, sleep was once again eluding him and the voice came back.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the cemetery gates.” This night, he was a little more afraid, but refused to believe what he was hearing. Night after night, the voice would come, singing in its eerie tone and night after night, Tommy’s fear grew.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m on the street.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the first house.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the second house.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the third house.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the fourth house.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the front gate.” At this, Tommy leapt out of his bed and raced to the window. Nobody stood at the gate of his house and he turned away and went back to bed. The next night, he waited, he waited for the voice as he knew it would come sooner or later.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m on the driveway.” But unlike the nights before, she continued to sing this night instead of stopping.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at the front door.” A shiver ran down Tommy’s spine.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m in the house.” Tommy sat up in his bed and pulled the covers up.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m on the top step.”
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m in the hallway.” Her voice was faster now and the lyrics of the eerie song came louder.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m at your door.” Tommy’s face was still hidden under the covers of his bed and he wishes that he would wake up from this nightmare.
“Tommy, I want my liver back, Tommy, I’m right beside you. TOMMY, I WANT MY LIVER BACK, TOMMY, I WANT IT NOW!” Tommy screamed at the top of his lungs but nobody seemed to hear, when his boss came to his house the next day he was met with the sight of his best worker covered in his own blood and on the wall, written in the crimson liquid life, was.
“Tommy, I’ve got my liver back.”
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Dean Winchester’s life starts with a goodnight kiss and a tragedy. He’s born with ash in his lungs and a baby in his arms, watching as his father’s heart burns to the ground. His father is a god in a leather jacket that never sits right on Dean’s shoulders. His brother is his everything and that never changes. His god goes missing and Dean has nothing but a haphazard bible to guide him. His god asks him to do the unthinkable and as his father’s body burns, he no longer believes in a god. Dean Winchester’s life begins and ends more times than he cares to remember. His bones are broken, his soul is tortured, and he’s not worth resurrecting until he has to do it all over again for a brother that Dean carried out of a fire.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Cryogenicbird » Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:14 am

I liked that story that was a good one :3
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Mon Jul 02, 2012 3:15 am

Well on the movie 'The Wizard of Oz' one of the munchkin actors hung themselves. So in one of the scenes in the movie you can see in the background the figure of the hanging man sort of in the forest. Although most tapes with the hanging man have been edited so now tapes don't have them. Although some really old ones still have the hanging man. My mom says she might have an old copy, so we're going to watch and see if we can find the man, lol = P.



Actually, I've heard that one before. After doing research, people actually found out it was a bird flying by. It looked some-what like something else, and thus started that rumor. I remember because they wanted it to look real so they just put some real stuff actually in there.

I don't remember which scene it was in, but I remember it showed the back of them all, skipping and singing to somewhere I think.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby harlical » Mon Jul 02, 2012 3:33 am

Captain Amaterasu wrote:


Another story my dad told me is in an old movie made in the 1920's or something in the background there is a lady walking by talking on a cellphone, but the thing is there were no cellphones in the 1920's O.e. You can look up the scenes on YouTube, I just don't have the links right now. If you do look them up, let me know!


I don't believe they made movies in the 1920's; The first television came out in the early 1950's, I believe. But even if the movie were from the 1980's, cell phones were still not invented. That's weird that a lady was walking with a cell phone then!



Anyways, I used to tell scary stories to my two best friends when I was in second grade, and I still remember a few of them! This one is fake, of course, just a little tale I heard when I was little.

A new girl arrived at the local elementary school, heading into third grade. Her name was Alloysia. She was quiet most of the time and kept to herself. And she always wore a black ribbon around her neck.
One day, at the end of the school year, a boy asked her, "Alloysia, tell me. Why do you always wear a black ribbon around your neck?" She replied, "That is a secret that you need not know." He left her alone for the rest of the day.
The next day, he walked up to her. He said, "I wonder if you look better without the ribbon." He reached out and pulled it off.
Her head fell off; The one thing that kept it upon her shoulders was the black ribbon.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby arturia » Mon Jul 02, 2012 3:46 am

Well that's what my Dad said. He could have said the movie was about the 1920's not entirely sure now. I can ask. Sometimes I don't hear things right, because I'm thinking about other things, so I'll ask him. = P ^^
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby W o l f ;; » Wed Jul 04, 2012 6:10 am

Honey is sweet
There was a girl called Rose, she was always good and loved honey! She loved it so much that her mom had shelves full of it.

So, one day her mom was out of the house and Rose was a home. She decided to get a jar of honey, so she went into the kitchen and found a jar of honey on the table that was already open "strange" she said to her self. She went back into the lounge and sat down and ate the honey, she started to cough and chocked up a finger nail "huh? I'm the only one in the house who loves honey?" she said.

About an hour latter blood started to drip from the sealing, Rose felt it "hey, this is not blood....it's honey....red honey." A little bit frightened she ran upstairs and went to grab the phone, but before she grabbed the phone it started ringing, and she picked it up "Hello?" she said "honey" it replied, she started to get really frightened "I like honey to, like the one that you had" it said......"what do you want!?" yelled Rose, "honey is sweet, honey is neat, honey is the thing that does the bill, you must pay, honey will kill" it says.

Suddenly a black figure covered in honey sprung out of her closet and killed her. And when her mom and Dad came home, she was lying in honey and blood.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby skrundle » Wed Jul 04, 2012 3:18 pm

O_O;;

Here's one I made up.

A girl named Elizabeth was staying home alone for the evening, her parents were out on business. This was her first time home alone, her parents promised they would call her three times to check up on her. Once at 5:00, once at 6:00, and once at 8:00.
She watched TV all day, not really caring that her parents were gone until she noticed it was 5:30 and they hadn't called. "Probably just busy." She thought and went back to TV.
A short while later she got a text from an anonymous number saying "Why didn't you answer my call?" Figuring it was her parents Elizabeth replied "I didn't hear the phone ring. Sorry."
After finally turning off the TV she realized it was 7:00 and her parents still hadn't called. "Must be a problem with the phone if it's not ringing." She mumbled to herself, annoyed. As soon as she spoke the words she recieved a text saying "Your phone is just grand. Listen closely, little Beth." A bit nervous, she replied "Stop playing pranks on me. Just call the phone, alright??" There was no reply.
Though twenty minutes later, she got a text reply saying "Sorry if I frightened you, dear. Your wish is my command." At this point she was getting slightly nervous. Her parents never talked that way.
As soon as she deleted the text, the home phone rang. She ran to check the caller ID. It read "Call from Elizabeth Cell Phone." She looked over to see her cell phone missing.
The night grew black as smoke, and she recieved several calls supposedly coming from her own cell phone. Finally, beside herself with fear, she called the phone operator and asked her to trace the call. "Next time that person calls, we'll trace it and tell you where it's coming from." The operator promised.
The phone rang again.
Then the operator called back. "We've traced the call. It's coming from your upstairs bedroom."
Elizabeth slammed the phone down and began to panic. "What's going on??!!?" She asked aloud. She wandered over to the bedroom and found it empty, but there was an open phone book lying on the bed. Open to the page where her family's numbers were written.
The phone rang once more. With a shaky hand, Elizabeth slowly answered it. A raspy voice on the other end said, "Why did you miss my calls, darling? I've been trying ever so hard to reach you." She noticed her closet door slowly creaking open. A long, gray hand reached out and took her phone from her hand. It then grabbed her by the neck and pulled her into the closet, where she would spend an enernity.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Taisi » Wed Jul 04, 2012 7:18 pm

Ive heard it before...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Thu Jul 05, 2012 2:40 am

*~S y m m e t r y~* wrote:O_O;;

Here's one I made up.

A girl named Elizabeth was staying home alone for the evening, her parents were out on business. This was her first time home alone, her parents promised they would call her three times to check up on her. Once at 5:00, once at 6:00, and once at 8:00.
She watched TV all day, not really caring that her parents were gone until she noticed it was 5:30 and they hadn't called. "Probably just busy." She thought and went back to TV.
A short while later she got a text from an anonymous number saying "Why didn't you answer my call?" Figuring it was her parents Elizabeth replied "I didn't hear the phone ring. Sorry."
After finally turning off the TV she realized it was 7:00 and her parents still hadn't called. "Must be a problem with the phone if it's not ringing." She mumbled to herself, annoyed. As soon as she spoke the words she recieved a text saying "Your phone is just grand. Listen closely, little Beth." A bit nervous, she replied "Stop playing pranks on me. Just call the phone, alright??" There was no reply.
Though twenty minutes later, she got a text reply saying "Sorry if I frightened you, dear. Your wish is my command." At this point she was getting slightly nervous. Her parents never talked that way.
As soon as she deleted the text, the home phone rang. She ran to check the caller ID. It read "Call from Elizabeth Cell Phone." She looked over to see her cell phone missing.
The night grew black as smoke, and she recieved several calls supposedly coming from her own cell phone. Finally, beside herself with fear, she called the phone operator and asked her to trace the call. "Next time that person calls, we'll trace it and tell you where it's coming from." The operator promised.
The phone rang again.
Then the operator called back. "We've traced the call. It's coming from your upstairs bedroom."
Elizabeth slammed the phone down and began to panic. "What's going on??!!?" She asked aloud. She wandered over to the bedroom and found it empty, but there was an open phone book lying on the bed. Open to the page where her family's numbers were written.
The phone rang once more. With a shaky hand, Elizabeth slowly answered it. A raspy voice on the other end said, "Why did you miss my calls, darling? I've been trying ever so hard to reach you." She noticed her closet door slowly creaking open. A long, gray hand reached out and took her phone from her hand. It then grabbed her by the neck and pulled her into the closet, where she would spend an enernity.

I wrote it!!! What do you guys think?


My friend told me one, A LOT like that. And I think I even posted it on this thread, some pages back.
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If you love me let me G O
‘Cause these words are K N I V E S that often leave scars
The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpy• » Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:39 am

iLunar wrote:
Captain Amaterasu wrote:


Another story my dad told me is in an old movie made in the 1920's or something in the background there is a lady walking by talking on a cellphone, but the thing is there were no cellphones in the 1920's O.e. You can look up the scenes on YouTube, I just don't have the links right now. If you do look them up, let me know!


I don't believe they made movies in the 1920's; The first television came out in the early 1950's, I believe. But even if the movie were from the 1980's, cell phones were still not invented. That's weird that a lady was walking with a cell phone then!



Anyways, I used to tell scary stories to my two best friends when I was in second grade, and I still remember a few of them! This one is fake, of course, just a little tale I heard when I was little.

A new girl arrived at the local elementary school, heading into third grade. Her name was Alloysia. She was quiet most of the time and kept to herself. And she always wore a black ribbon around her neck.
One day, at the end of the school year, a boy asked her, "Alloysia, tell me. Why do you always wear a black ribbon around your neck?" She replied, "That is a secret that you need not know." He left her alone for the rest of the day.
The next day, he walked up to her. He said, "I wonder if you look better without the ribbon." He reached out and pulled it off.
Her head fell off; The one thing that kept it upon her shoulders was the black ribbon.

Yes, they made movies in the 1920's. Of course there weren't televisions, but the movies played in Nickelodeons. Which are movie theaters, in case you didn't know. XD
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