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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Wed May 30, 2012 11:29 pm

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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:52 pm

~ Bump c:
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Fri Jun 22, 2012 2:48 pm

~ Bump, any comments? c:
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby Anonymous Hyena » Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:43 pm

Definately a worthy bookmark. I love the way you describe everything x3 Wonder if that Great Dane will be in the story later on..seems like he will. I love the use of imagery though since I can usually image things in my mind due to a somewhat strange yet vivid imagination I seem to have. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby Zidane » Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:38 pm

I'm not normally one for animal stories, but this is really good so far. We'll have to see what the next chapter holds.
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Sat Jun 23, 2012 4:09 am

ZombiiCandy wrote:Definately a worthy bookmark. I love the way you describe everything x3 Wonder if that Great Dane will be in the story later on..seems like he will. I love the use of imagery though since I can usually image things in my mind due to a somewhat strange yet vivid imagination I seem to have. Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Zombii

I love creating very nice mental images, and i'm glad I was able to make it work c: . Im glad to see that you like it so much!


Richard the Warlock wrote:I'm not normally one for animal stories, but this is really good so far. We'll have to see what the next chapter holds.

Im happy to see that my story has caught your interest. I will probably post the second chapter tomorrow c:
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Mon Jun 25, 2012 10:13 am

~ Bump c:

Been writing on the weekend, almost done with chapter 4! I like to get ahead of myself xP
Anyways, I shall post the next chapter later on tonight ^^
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby rothbart. » Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:43 pm

THIS. I love this. A lot. Too much. Weird thing is, I just posted the beginning of my story. It's about a young, male fox... And it starts with rain. X3
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Mon Jun 25, 2012 3:18 pm

Wow, thank you so much for the wonderful compliments c:
I do plan on making this a very large book, around 50 chapters ^^

Lol, that is wierd. xD . I'll shall check out your book :3
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Re: Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd - Ch.1

Postby .:Amber~ » Mon Jun 25, 2012 4:12 pm

This is sooo good! My story stinks compared to this one
Remaking~ .___.
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