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1. Everyone's War
2. Only Thoughts
3. Ghost Dust
4. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
5.ＡＳＨＥＳ { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
6. ~Nameless~
7. This Is a Journal Not a diary
8. Darkstorm
9. warriors of Four : Trapped
Eliminated: ρα¢к вяσтнєяѕ
Why: Sorry! I find the title very bland and boring, though it is original! There was just so many... Keep writing though, great story!
✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:40 am
Yes, and here are the results for the first round!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by -Frost- » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:53 am
Yay!
yeah, I changed Darkstorm's title a lot in the beginning XD couldn't think of a title that I liked. So, Darkstorm had to stick. Besides, you'll know sooner or later why I named it that. Not really happy with the title myself... I'm glad it made it through the first round
yeah, I changed Darkstorm's title a lot in the beginning XD couldn't think of a title that I liked. So, Darkstorm had to stick. Besides, you'll know sooner or later why I named it that. Not really happy with the title myself... I'm glad it made it through the first round
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:58 am
Second round!
✸Яσʋи∂ тωσ✸
1. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
2. ＡＳＨＥＳ { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
3. Only Thoughts
4. ~Nameless~
5. Everyone's war
6. Darkstorm
7. Ghost Dust
8. This Is A Jornal Not A Diary
Eliminated: Warriors of Four : Trapped
Why: So, so sorry Kat! It's a great story, and I love it, but the organisation isn't the best. You could leave it as it is or edit it, it's up to you. Again, sorry!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:59 am
Also : Very quick sorry to anyone who gets eliminated. It's not you, and don't give up!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by goldh31 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:01 am
Wow! I made it through...yay! I have gone through a lot of titles with Only Thoughts...It started as 'Just Breathe' then it changed to 'Doubts" then "Forsaken" then "Waves" then "The Path To Escape" before finally landing on "Only Thoughts". I'm so glad you liked it. Can I enter the second contest?
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by -Frost- » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:02 am
*Dun-Dun-Dun-Dun*
Sorry, I couldn't help myself ^^ Can't wait to see the next round, who shall win?
*TO THE WRITERS OF PACK BROTHERS AND WARRIORS OF FOUR* I like your stories remember, Rebel's just giving advice, good advice. and in a fun way.
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@Gold, LOL, I'm glad I'm not the only one who's changed titles a LOT.
Sorry, I couldn't help myself ^^ Can't wait to see the next round, who shall win?
*TO THE WRITERS OF PACK BROTHERS AND WARRIORS OF FOUR* I like your stories
remember, Rebel's just giving advice, good advice. and in a fun way.------------------------------
@Gold, LOL, I'm glad I'm not the only one who's changed titles a LOT.
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:11 am
Round Three! Wow, after weeks of waiting for entries, three rounds up!
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1. Only thoughts
2. ~Nameless~
3. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
4. ＡＳＨＥＳ { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
5. This Is A Journal Not a Diary
6. Ghost Dust
7. Everyone's War
Eliminated: Darkstorm
Why: Sorry! The competitions getting harder, and it's so hard to judge! There are some sentences that don't make sense, and it can be a little confusing. Use shorter sentences for effect, and don't spring too much on the reader! Keep on writing!
Last edited by Rebel Faery on Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:19 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by -Frost- » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:14 am
It's alright. But you have any suggestions how to fix it? Because, that wasn't really a good reason...
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:18 am
uh-huh, I'll edit it now! I had some advice, and it got deleted... or maybe it was a typo...
EDIT: I edited it
EDIT: I edited it
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!
by -Frost- » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:31 am
Oh, okay, thanks XD
Yeah, a lot of the first chapters were not that good. What do you exactly mean by 'spring too much?'
Yeah, a lot of the first chapters were not that good. What do you exactly mean by 'spring too much?'
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