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by Bℓυ ωιитєя » Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:58 pm
Snow911 wrote:Blu Winter wrote:Gimp, use Gimp, there is a few good tutorials on animating with gimp on deviantart. I use and paint, and window movie maker and also occasionally photoshop. infact I created this just last night.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHGzCubKsskCalix I managed to pin point the problem, the wrong legs are to short and the paws to big.
Awesome, it looks great. Thanks ^^
Edit; Does it have pen pressure? I can't survive without it XD
Yes I believe it does, Flame-eye who is on this website and is a great friend of mine animated this with it last night:
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by schizoid. » Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:33 pm
@Blu- that animation is amazing <3
I do simple animations like blinking or smiling, because I fail so hard at big animations XD
@Koiyote- To me the legs seem a bit off. I know it's bird legs, but they don't seem right for some reason.
I think they look a bit stiff and off anatomy wise.
@Neelix- The leg on it's left seems very off. It doesn't look like it's connected to anything.
@Calix- on the first dog, I think the back legs and bum look a bit off, they seem too small for the body.
Also, the nose/muzzle is a bit short.
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I've recently been into making avatars.
I found a nice pixel style that works for me.
I was wondering if I could get some crit on how to make it sort of a better pixel?

(I colored the inside lines a lighter color to give it a effect that it was outlines c:)
This is a dead account c:
Whoever does the deactivating can do it now.
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by brian emo » Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:35 pm
schizoid. wrote:@Blu- that animation is amazing <3
I do simple animations like blinking or smiling, because I fail so hard at big animations XD
@Koiyote- To me the legs seem a bit off. I know it's bird legs, but they don't seem right for some reason.
I think they look a bit stiff and off anatomy wise.
@Neelix- The leg on it's left seems very off. It doesn't look like it's connected to anything.
@Calix- on the first dog, I think the back legs and bum look a bit off, they seem too small for the body.
Also, the nose/muzzle is a bit short.
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I've recently been into making avatars.
I found a nice pixel style that works for me.
I was wondering if I could get some crit on how to make it sort of a better pixel?

(I colored the inside lines a lighter color to give it a effect that it was outlines c:)
I recommend avoiding straight lines like the one on the chin^^
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by wickedpup » Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:07 pm
hey guys!! i havent posted here in the longest time.
@ iva ; please don't post that many large pictures,try linking to them by using the url bbcode or thumbnails so they dont spam up the page when they are all of the same subject. <:
i think it looks pretty good,except the canine looks a bit scrawny,and kinda lacks feet?? i cant really critique it tho,so great job!! uvu
@ calix ; i think it looks pretty good! although,the neck looks a bit puffed out,the head a bit misplaced,and the arms are bent a little bit too sharply. i think youve done a lovely job with the bird(dove??) as well. if you want i can easily give you a redline to show you the small faults easier. you my want to try a brighter shading though,as it looks kinda flat without any burst of colour.
@ schizoid ; i think thats a really great pixel!! :o the only thing i see wrong at all is the chin,which has already been pointed out. really super job on it!! <:
i think thats all the actual art i can comment on for a while its mostly just comments

click for full view uvu
i already know the upwards hand is pretty messed up but i dont feel like fixing it
anything welcome as long as you know what you're talking about!!
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by kirill » Sat Jun 16, 2012 2:58 am
Calix wrote:kat754- The image is broken for me?
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I just finished this commission, I'd love some critique or comments on it ^^

What do you mean? It's a PDF document, And I scanned it. You have to scroll down because it's very large...
That's such a pretty drawing!

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by Musicart » Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:47 am
kat754 wrote:Calix wrote:kat754- The image is broken for me?
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I just finished this commission, I'd love some critique or comments on it ^^

What do you mean? It's a PDF document, And I scanned it. You have to scroll down because it's very large...
That's such a pretty drawing!

The patters really look cool! i like it!
wont be on often due to lost intrest in CS, but ill still be on for pseudodragons and such

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