The Artist Army

[WazzinGator]

sorry, late to the party, but do you want a redline?

Sure. c:

[brian emo]

sorry, late to the party, but do you want a redline?

Sure. c:

http://i49.tinypic.com/2vcjakm.png
sorry, it's not perfect, but I think it's at least (mostly) anatomically correct.

[DoctorDraca]

Actually, Medusa, I have to correct you on this.
You make your legs/paws far too thick, even in redlines. Your style is very chibi-like, which works for that, but it doesn't translate properly to more realistic anatomy. Wolves have fairly thin and long legs. You did well with adjusting the body to a rounder shape, but mind the legs when giving redlines. Don't make everything too round and fluffy, it doesn't work with every animal.

[mawsoleum]

@Koiyote - Hope it helps

Sorry for dead late response, my fever got really high last night and I went to sleep. xD

I will definitely change those front legs up to fit what you've done here, but I don't know how much I can change the back legs without changing how the species looks. Thank you!

[brian emo]

Actually, Medusa, I have to correct you on this.
You make your legs/paws far too thick, even in redlines. Your style is very chibi-like, which works for that, but it doesn't translate properly to more realistic anatomy. Wolves have fairly thin and long legs. You did well with adjusting the body to a rounder shape, but mind the legs when giving redlines. Don't make everything too round and fluffy, it doesn't work with every animal.

ah, ok, whoops. the legs just looked too thin for the shape of the chest in the drawing.

[emberonis]

I also did this:

It was really fun! xD

Wow, beautiful! I love it!

My latest drawing... Vampi inspired me, so I had to draw something. Armadillo time! It's in no way finished, but crits and redlines are welcome.

[WazzinGator]

I also did this:
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It was really fun! xD

Wow, beautiful! I love it!

My latest drawing... Vampi inspired me, so I had to draw something. Armadillo time! It's in no way finished, but crits and redlines are welcome.

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Thank you! c:
I love your armadillo, he's very cute. Cx The only thing I would crit are his feet: it looks a little like he hanging, or someone's holding him. If you want to make it look more like he's on the ground, make his feet flat as if they were holding up his weight on a surface.

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I've been working on this and I would love some crit.

[kirill]

@WazzinGator- I love the wolf and the tree. I love the style you used on the tree!
@Neelix- Aww, he's soo cute <3

I just drew this on paper. The scanner scanned it all lopsided, though...
Any comments and Crit, even redlines are appreciated! Thanks!
http://www.iaza.com/work/120614C/iaza19225087017900.jpg

[emberonis]

Thank you! c:
I love your armadillo, he's very cute. Cx The only thing I would crit are his feet: it looks a little like he hanging, or someone's holding him. If you want to make it look more like he's on the ground, make his feet flat as if they were holding up his weight on a surface.

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I've been working on this and I would love some crit.

I love it! The kitten especially. There's something about the cat's front paws that irks me, but I don't know how to help you fix it. They just seem off.

And yeah, you are right. If I could draw hands, I would make it so a human was picking him up, but I can't, so I'll just fix his feet. =3

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Now it has wings! 8D

[Tazmir]

@ Neelix - Looks cute x3 But maybe the legs a bit longer ? DOnt really know, just a suggestion °^^

@ funsized - aww *^* How cute ! x3 Maybe the ears not that pointy ? :3

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Trying to make a Paper drawing, but the Legs are ticking me off x.X
And the paws are the worst... CAn someone redline them or something like that ? D:
http://i42.servimg.com/u/f42/16/12/67/72/dsc00112.jpg

EDIT : drawing it on CS... with much fail somehow xD
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