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✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ -Enter your writing!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:07 am


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✸Ɯɛ˩cσмɛ!✸

Welcome to my Elimination Contest! Here you can enter your writing into the next competition, and get an honourable mention + recommendation! You can also chose a pet from This Group.
ANY type of writing is accepted- poems, books, fan-fictions, scripts, short stories and song fics, anything!

✸Δвσʋт!✸

In each Contest, there will be nine rounds, and 10 entries. Only the winner will get a pet, but you will get an honourable mention for competing and a recommendation if you're in the top 3! Here is what I will judge the writing on...
Round One:

Title- originality, flow and fitting- that is what your title will be judged on
Round Two:

Organisation- how well you organise your writing. Do you have a contents? Links to chapters? Are they all on the first page? Section-dividers, colours and fancy font all boost your score.
Round Three:

Spelling + Grammer- These two are very important to me, and who wants to read something that's full of misspelled words and doesn't make sense?
Round Four:

First chapter- includes either first chapter or a prologue. If it keeps the reader interested, you'll get a good score.
Round Five:

Detail- not too little, not to much.
Round Six:

Fan involvement- what do you do to keep fans interested?
Round Seven:

Characters- Are they realistic, fun, interesting? Do you have too little or too many?
Round Eight:

Plot- this is the most important parts of the story. Can I see the plot? Is it interesting? Do you have twists and ideas no-one saw coming?
Round Nine:

Everything- with the final two pieces of writing, I will judge the whole thing. Whichever I think is best will have 1st place


✸Яʋ˩ɛƨ!✸

1. Only enter one piece of writing per contests. You may enter other contests, but not the same one
2. Don't enter the same thing twice
3. Don't be a sore loser or a sore winner. It's not nice, and will end up with you getting banned
4. If you want advice, or to know why you won, ask.
5. You cannot reserve spots
6. Follow all site rules!
7. You may only enter your own writing
8. The writing will be entered in the first available contest. If I have two up a once, one with 1 place left, and one with 10 places left, and somebody enters before you, you will be entered in the next one. You may not request to be entered in a certain contest.
9. Have fun, and Good Luck!


✸Ғιиα˩ƨ✸

Once we have done ten contests, all the winners from the previous contests will be entered in a semi-finals. The winner will get two pets from the group. Once we have had ten semi-finals, there will be a Championship, with the winners of the semi-finals.
Good luck!


✸Яɛcσмɛи∂αтισиƨ✸

Winners and runners-up of previous contests!
1. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe ~ f o r e v e r ~
2. Everyone's War Baltogirl9
3. ~Nameless~ Emotionless
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:07 am

✸Ɔσитɛƨт Ѳиɛ✸

✸Єитяιɛƨ✸

1. Warriors of four : Trapped katnisshungergames10
2.This Is A Journal Not A Diary ╬JesusFreak╬
3.noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe ~ f o r e v e r ~
4. Everyone's War Baltogirl9
5.ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
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6.ρα¢к вяσтнєяѕ яаvєиwооd
7.Only Thoughts goldh31
8.Darkstorm _Brownbeak_
9.Ghost Dust Richard the Warlock
10.~Nameless~ Emotionless


✸Яσʋи∂ Ѳиɛ✸

1. Everyone's War
2. Only Thoughts
3. Ghost Dust
4. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
5.ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
6. ~Nameless~
7. This Is a Journal Not a diary
8. Darkstorm
9. warriors of Four : Trapped
Eliminated: ρα¢к вяσтнєяѕ
Why: Sorry! I find the title very bland and boring, though it is original! There was just so many... Keep writing though, great story!


✸Яσʋи∂ тωσ✸

1. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
2. ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
3. Only Thoughts
4. ~Nameless~
5. Everyone's war
6. Darkstorm
7. Ghost Dust
8. This Is A Jornal Not A Diary
Eliminated: Warriors of Four : Trapped
Why: So, so sorry Kat! It's a great story, and I love it, but the organisation isn't the best. You could leave it as it is or edit it, it's up to you. Again, sorry!


✸Яσʋи∂ Ƭняɛɛ✸

1. Only thoughts
2. ~Nameless~
3. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
4. ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
5. This Is A Journal Not a Diary
6. Ghost Dust
7. Everyone's War
Eliminated: Darkstorm
Why: Sorry! The competitions getting harder, and it's so hard to judge! There are some sentences that don't make sense, and it can be a little confusing. Use shorter sentences for effect, and don't spring too much on the reader! Keep on writing!


✸Яσʋи∂ Ғσʋя✸

1. ~Nameless~
2. Only Thoughts
3. ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
4.noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
5. Everyone's War
6. This Is a Jornal Not a Diary
Eliminated: Ghost Dust
Why: Since it's only a short story, there's no prologue or chapters. This is the only reason, sorry!


✸Яσʋи∂ Ғιʌɛ✸

1. Only Thoughts
2. ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
3. ~Nameless~
4. Everyone's War
5. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
Eliminated: This Is a Jornal Not A Diary
Why: Sorry, JF! This is utterly amazing, but with it being a journal, has more pictures and action then description. Hope you don't mind!


✸Яσʋи∂ Ƨιϰ✸

1. ~Nameless~
2. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
3. Only Thoughts
4. Everyone's War
Eliminated: ASHES { ᵗʰᵉ ˡᵉᵍᵉᶰᵈ ᵒᶠ ʳᵒˢᵉ} ᵇᵒᵒᵏ ᵒᶰᵉ
Why: Not a lot of these had much fan involvement, and it was so hard to chose! Maybe you could add a fan list or have an RP based off the book? This could also count for many others, too. Sorry!


✸Яσʋи∂ Ƨɛʌɛи✸

1. noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
2. Everyone's War
3. ~Nameless~
Eliminated: Only Thoughts
Why: This story isn't finished yet, so there isn't anything to base the personalities of your characters on. We don't know enough about them. I think the only reason for this is because the story is new. I can't wait to see what you do with it!


✸Яσʋи∂ ɛιɢнт✸

1. ~Nameless~
2. Everyone's War
Eliminated: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe
Why: This is a great story, but even with all the prefaces and flashbacks, I just can't see the plot. Keep going though, I bet it will turn out good!


✸Яσʋи∂ Иιиɛ✸

1. ~Nameless~
Eliminated: Everyone's War
Why: This book is good. Great, even! But the spelling and grammar could use a little work. And, over all, I just like the other one a tiny bit better. Can't wait to see where you go, though!





✸Ɔσитɛƨт Ƭωσ✸

✸Єитяιɛƨ✸

1. Tears Oakdenugg
2. To Runaway _Brownbeak_
3. War with The World ╬JesusFreak╬
4. Behind My Eyes goldh31
5. Hues Of A Brilliant Blue Abuse's Song
6. The Dragon Knights Lonin
7. The Journal Of Ginger katnisshungergames10
8. Dance Of The Magpie Richard the Warlock
9. Chess CHERUB-Chick
10.
Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd carrie911


✸Яσʋи∂ Ѳиɛ✸

1. To Runaway
2. Hues Of a Brilliant Blue
3. Behind My Eyes
4. Tears
5. Chess
6. Ŧαbləs Hαvə Ŧurnəd
7. War With The World
8. Dance Of The Magpie
9. The Journal Of Ginger
Eliminated: The Dragon Knights
Why: This was such a tough competition! The title just didn't stand out to me that much. Maybe try adding fancy symbols or tweaking it so it grabs the reader's attention little more?







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✸Єитяιɛƨ✸

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Last edited by Rebel Faery on Tue Jun 26, 2012 5:44 am, edited 44 times in total.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:07 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:08 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:08 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:09 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:09 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:09 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:09 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ✸Є˩ιмιиαтισи Ɔσитɛƨт✸ - no posting yet!

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:10 am

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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