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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby True Lies » Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:24 pm

Yay! More's coming! You're a brilliant writer Rebel Faery.
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:18 am

Oh thanks White! And you can call me RF (like Kat) or Rebel (like most people).
And, if you look at my pets, you can view all the characters for the next book in the 'Untitled 2' group
Anyway... more time!

The first course was delivered; meaty stew with dumplings and fresh bread. I tried to eat it, and found I couldn't. Even eating the bread made me feel sick. I barely managed one slice and a dumpling before the servants came to take it away.
The others began to talk.
So, Lucky, Night began, You managed to live in the Arctic for several months with two small children, two adult and several teenagers?
Yes, I replied. My memory was practically back to normal, but it was still patchy in places. It was rough at times, and sometimes it was very bleak. But we survived, and we all learned so much. We were family, and I miss them.
So... these dogs. How did you find enough to eat?
Sara supplied us with food... Other then that, I don't really know. We just... managed.
And you wore your school uniform all those months?
What else was there to wear? And it was so cold up there, even getting rid of one layer could kill you.
I... see. And your parents?
What about them? They fed us and looked after us all like we were their children, even though we weren't.
They seem like good people- oh, second course!
My heart skipped a beat as I looked at the plain wooden door that the servants came through. A small dog was holding a huge, heavy clay pot on her back. I looked into her pain-filled eyes as she put the dish down beside me.
Indy, I whisper under my breath.
She comes in several times with more big pots on her back. I think she starts crying on the last pot. Then she leaves with a small curtsy. The others begin eating.
I feel sick. I stand up and push back my chair.
Please excuse me.
I leave the room. Once out of sight of the door, I run, sobbing, back to my room. I slammed the door and threw myself face-down on my bed. How could I be so stupid?! Here I was in the height of luxury, not paying any thought to my family at all. How heartless could I be? How could I sit there with traitors and cruel and uncaring people, thinking everything is all right?! How could I have said yes?!
I didn't belong her, and I never will. I've surely messed everything up now. Let them send us back. I wouldn't care in the slightest. At least there, I truly belong.
After about half an hour, I sit up, wipe my tears away. I stand and walk to sit on the end of the fountain, trailing one paw in the crystal water. There's a quiet knock on the door.
Come in.
The door opens and shuts with the slightest of noises. I turn to see Cody, looking rather small and apologetic.
I'm sorry, Lucky. I never knew! They should've known better then to send in an eight-year-old, especially your sister! You're not mad, are you?
I don't know, I say, I should be, but I'm not. I don't understand anything. I've been so hungry, yet I couldn't eat. And seeing Indy- I guess I just lost it.
You can't eat because the food's too rich. I'll go down to the kitchen now, get everything sorted. I'll tell them not to put Indigo on food serving, and sort you out something you can eat for breakfast. Is that ok? I give a half-smile.
Ok.
He leaves, and the world darkens outside. I cross over to the wardrobe and look dow upon the city, a blur of lights. I smile, and turn away. I pull on one of the nightgowns, and slip into bed
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:21 am

For the next book, I'll need older versions of the two PPS dogs:

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and either Image this dog or Image thsi dog (Indy)

I don't suppose anybody has any spares/extras they'll be willing to give me?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:41 am

Thank you White for Indy! Now all I need is Kiya
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:53 am

Forget that... I don't need any pets! Thank you so much white!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:01 am

Yay! As another gift to White for giving me those pets... here's another entry in her honour!
(unfortunately it'll only be short)


I woke to a quiet rapping on my door. I gave a yawn. Come in, I called, sitting up on the masses of pillows, pulling the silk blanket over my knees.
A dog came in with a tray. She looked like this: Image
My name's galaxy. I'll be your personal maid.
She came over and placed the silver tray on my lap, curtseyed and exited the room.
I looked down at the food on the tray... honeyed bread.
Oh, Mum, I whisper, and begin to eat



Sorry for shortness... gotta go!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby True Lies » Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:33 am

Thank you! I can't wait for more of your story!
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:56 am

For any writers who are interested.... I have created an Elimination Contest. I'd appreciate someone entering...
And now for more!

The week dragged on by, a blur of dinners in fancy dresses, hanging out in my room, walking through the palace gardens and courtyards, and attending to dress fittings.
Gulp.
I'd better remind you, J, as you've probably forgotten. It's my wedding tomorrow, and I'm extremely nervous. EXTREMELY.
The dress, what I've seen of it so far, is like crystal in dress-form, with flowers, 'lucky' four-leaf clovers, and a load of accessories so beautiful I can't describe them.
Dinner was two hours ago. It's dark now, and around ten o clock. But I can't sleep. I'm dreading tomorrow.
What am I going to do?

The preparations take all morning. Maids and tailors and others hurry around my room, trying to get me ready. First I bathe in a warm, honey-coloured liquid, and then I dry myself with the softest towel yet. When I come out, I'm dressed in transparent petticoats and socks and strung with beads and a heart ribbon and blue band adorn my hair. Then I'm told to close my eyes, and the dress is slipped on.
It's lightweight and soft, and when I open my eyes and glance in the mirror, I barley recognise the dog before me.
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The dress is beautiful, like a rainbow. The accessories make a stunning effect.
I look perfect.
Tears prick my eyes as I remember what today is. I turn to the dressmaker, and put on my best smile.
It's beautiful! Thank you so much!
Then Galaxy comes, takes my arm, and we proceed to the courtyard where the wedding is taking place. She's wearing a blue silk dress for the occasion, with white flowers adorning her hair.
You look beautiful.
Thanks, Galaxy. Wish me luck!
She turn to smile at me. Good luck, Princess Lucky.
As I exit the castle, I notice the cameras. My heart beats faster, and I blush furiously. Of course! I'm practically royalty now! There's bound to be people all over the world, their eyes fixed on me now.
The music starts, and I panic. Galaxy squeezes my hand reasuringly.
We'll do this together, she whispers. I nod. Together.
We walk slowly down the isle. Cindy, Kiya and Indy walk behind us. They look beautiful. People take their seats.
As I reach the alter, Cindy takes her place on Cody's side, and Indy and Kiya sit on mine. Galaxy steps back as I walk up onto the raised platform.
Cody is dressed in the royal robes they use for important ceremonies. As the person (not sure what they're called) drones on, he looks at me, and smiles.
You look beautiful. I blush even deeper. Thank you.
I do, Cody says suddenly, and the thingy turns to me, and asks the question.
I... I...
I'm not sure what to say. This is so confusing! I'm only fifteen- ugh, fourteen- and so scared. But there's only one thing I can say as a nation leans towards their TV screens, waiting for an answer.
I do.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby star star. » Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:01 am

WOW. I NEED MORE!!! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!





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Re: ~|Is Anyone Else Scared Now? ~ 3rd Book of Untitled|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:45 am

Ew. I just had the most horrible dinner- undercooked pasta + overcoked chicken :(
ok Kat, will write more in a minute :) Will you enter your warriors story in my contest?
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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