The Artist Army

[dizzy hurricane.]

I am kind of wanting to do a join me..because I am looking for some help with coloring my wolf..

https://join.me/490-081-178

Don't forget to comment on other people's art too.
And once your join.me is over, please edit the post and say that you are offline.

[Veins Of Opal]

@Catastrophic- I absolutely adore your style. c: Looks great! I like it. c:
@Alexander- Looks amazing. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it. c:

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I finished this a little while ago, and I was wondering if I could have tips on shading it better. C:

[~K-9]

@Stonefly- I love that dog! It's so cute c:
@catastrophic_blend- That's amazing! How did you do that?

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I fixed the anatomy up a bit. Could anyone please tell me if I got it correct? Thanks!

That's adorable! The only thing is, it's awfully skinny. Either that, or I've spent too much time looking at my overly fat dog Also, the leg that's bent towards the torso looks off for some reason.

[Calix]

azalea- Wow, I love the lines <3 The face is gorgeous too :3 I think the limbs might be a little short, but I could be wrong.

kat754- I think the far back leg should be more forward then the other back leg, but I'm not sure. Also, it might look a bit better if it were centered in the oekaki so you can see the whole tail ^^;

Shiko Hayashi- That's a cool concept ^^ I feel like the dragon's neck gets too thin though? Maybe just fill that little triangle of black in the corner x3 Also, with the neck area being lineless(or looking lineless) the hair might look better if you erased the lines for it too?

Alexander White- That's a cool concept. I think you're supposed to comment on other's work when you post though, just saying ^^;

Bast- That looks really cool, the muscles look really good ^^

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Quick sketch to practice anatomy. ^^

[Bast]

Calix- thanks. on your wolf I think the front legs look a bit to thin. Maybe bring the shoulder line a bit more to the front.

[Zoë]

Hi.

I'll start at the back.

@Shiko Hayashi -- I absolutely love that oekaki. The shading is done really well. The only bit (and it's a small bit) that bothered me was the background; there were a couple pixelated strokes that messed with the overall piece.
But I liked it a lot.

@Alexander White -- Whoa! I seriously fangirl over all of your artwork!
(especially Loki/Thor ones if you know what I mean hur hurr)
And it's refreshing to see you do a girl. Lovely.
The only critique I have is the flower looks out of place in the picture. The one over her eye. It looks too 'crisp' compared to the rest of the picture.

@Bast -- I like the 'warhorse' vibe. It rocks. Let me see it when you're done!

@Silent Symphony -- ouo hawt. Haha I'm terrible at kissing pictures. Shading... everyone's got their own style, so I can't tell you how to do yours. But the hair looks off. I think the shading was good, but the highlighting wasn't in the right places?

@Calix -- The tail may be a bit fluffy, and needs to be extended a little bit. Other than that, I think you look good gurrrl.

[brian emo]

pretty legit. feels kinda disney, I like it. wish you did a full body but under the circumstance I understand.
is that a full hat or just a headband?

agreed, I thought it had a disney feel to it as well, but at the same time still fresh and unique c: I love your style, catastrophic_blend! <3 a human tutorial would also be fantastic, cause I'm terrible at humans hahaha;; |D

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I'd love some critique/help with this one D:

please don't be afraid to be brutal! <3 I think the bending paw looks especially awkward to me, so I'd love help on that,
and idk just the paws in general. I have trouble with those :c

Even if you're not confident on tigers, I'd still love your input! I feel like her design is a bit empty, like it's missing something.
I thought the antlers would solve that but now her backside looks very plain in comparison...any ideas would be greatly appreciated <3 c:

I love it aza <3
Maybe, as far as the design goes, you could have the gradient on her back go even darker. C:

[mawsoleum]

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Quick sketch to practice anatomy. ^^

Care for a redline? And, if so, is it possible you can upload a jpg version of the image? Paint's the only thing I've got.

I'd like to help with this one. c:

[brian emo]

azalea- Wow, I love the lines <3 The face is gorgeous too :3 I think the limbs might be a little short, but I could be wrong.

kat754- I think the far back leg should be more forward then the other back leg, but I'm not sure. Also, it might look a bit better if it were centered in the oekaki so you can see the whole tail ^^;

Shiko Hayashi- That's a cool concept ^^ I feel like the dragon's neck gets too thin though? Maybe just fill that little triangle of black in the corner x3 Also, with the neck area being lineless(or looking lineless) the hair might look better if you erased the lines for it too?

Alexander White- That's a cool concept. I think you're supposed to comment on other's work when you post though, just saying ^^;

Bast- That looks really cool, the muscles look really good ^^

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Quick sketch to practice anatomy. ^^

imo the tail looks a bit short.
Also, it might just be me, but it seems like the legs wouldn't be able to support the chest/torso.^^

[Zephayer]

okay i don't have much time to write but uh

@calix :: the legs are too thin/small — they wouldn't be able to support the wolf's body.
especially pay attention to the hind legs — they are much too small in comparison to the rest of the wolf.
also the tail is a bit too short and the muzzle might be a little short as well.

anyways it's really lovely, you have a pretty good grasp on anatomy c:

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@azaaaa :: hey there girl c: i love your tiger, your anatomy is fantastic !
i would just say that the head is a bit small compared to the body.

as far as the design goes, i really like the simplicity of it, but if you want to add more
maybe you could darken the tiger's back even more and add some accessories?

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okay, so all i have for now is this:
( click for full size )